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How To Rap (Reply to this comment)
by teddunsten
Check out this book -
How to Rap - http://www.amazon.com/How-Rap-Art-Science-Hip-Hop/dp/1556528167
http://www.howtorapbook.com
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Nov 12 '09
3:42 pm PST
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Hilarious (Reply to this comment)
by teddunsten
Very funny writing, made me crack up! Also dropping some ill knowledge in there as well - props
Dope Hip-Hop books –
Check The Technique http://www.waxfacts.com
Can’t Stop Won’t Stop http://www.cantstopwontstop.com
How To Rap http://www.howtorapbook.com
Classic Material http://www.o-dub.com/classic/classic.html
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Jul 21 '09
5:49 pm PDT
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Step 2 Me-It's My Turn (Reply to this comment)
by missy-lynn
I've Been Writtin For a Long Time but I Rarely get into a studio To Do it only off the top of ma head But when I Write it's hot so now i don't write anymore when i'm feelin it i jus stop what ever i'm duin and spit ma verse so i won't forget it so if i'm hot when i write i kno ima be blazzin when i Really start freestyle straight from ma mind 2 Mic. I can't wait till i'm on Rap City's Mic.
U Nigg*s Think you Did some damage well the damage just begun /Questionin ma skillz is like playin russian roulette with a fully loaded gun /Amatures will spit one verse and think the whole job is done/ But i wont stop till the fat lady sings the pledge of allegence /And ma flow so sick it'll make yo mind flinch /An u always gone be behind me so u mize well not exsist /So there's no reason to open yo mouth unless you bout to eat me out B!tch! /Little Nice Princess They say naw she aint raw she fakin it /so i poured ma thoughts into a cup an satan spit up drinkin it /An while b!ches be haitin, It's money i'll be makin /And jus like Betty Crocker I'ma be the one thats cakin /And If U Think This is the end of me then B!tch U is mastakin
~Missy-Lynn~
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Jul 09 '08
11:17 pm PDT
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Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by hoslaya
yea u suk
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Sep 12 '06
11:36 am PDT
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help mehh! (Reply to this comment)
by nextpimp718
imma new mc
tryin to get my demo cd
strated to rhyme last week
nd am already showin my hard work
it might be bad enought to laugh
but imma get it done to make u my staff
its the new mickey d that will make u forget ur speed
slowness is urz so don't speed or u will get beat
latzzz
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Jun 28 '06
11:18 am PDT
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rappa by nature (Reply to this comment)
by jwrecka
i first started writin rhymes in da middle of 2006 im only 16 and i learned real quick just a couple a months and i got a lot betta cuz my home boy steve henderson helped me out and
whenever now im tryin ta get betta, at freestlyin off a da top a my dome so one day i can make an album and start ridin on chrome wit dem blades choppin fast and my grill shinin bright ill light up da sky when da sun goes down at night know what im sayin, aint dat everybodys dream ta be all iced out and have gold and plat on your teeth now im bout tired of talkin bout me so if yall like my sh!t hit me back and holla at me
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Jun 18 '06
9:00 am PDT
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holla at me (Reply to this comment)
by jwrecka
If anybody want plex wit me go ahead and bring it you can start swingin words but you gon keep on missin so pay atention and listen to da wordz dat im listin i might be 16 but ima keep on dissin just started rapin a couple months ago im already good
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Jun 04 '06
4:59 pm PDT
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texaz music (Reply to this comment)
by jwrecka
I alwayz stay fresh like that boy bow wow somethin like a king so come and bow down i rep san antone just like lil kin boyz already know dat im betta dan dem so any body wanna contest yall best believe im da best call me livola cuz im programed ta wreck and when i wreck da mic i wreck fakes and frauds dis goes out to all you boyz who thank they all hard
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Jun 03 '06
1:26 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Re: interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by jwrecka
i read yo crap and fereal its whack you need ta get off this sight cuz boy you cant rap stop actin hard you cant freestyle at all ill expose you like tha fraud you are you say you smoke you say you gotta gun you try ta scare boyz and say they gon run but its you dats gon run cuz i just made you look dumb i just exposed you dats it im done
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Jun 03 '06
1:03 pm PDT
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Guess Whos Back (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
Whats up everyone?. damn i been gone forever. well where’s the competition at?
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May 17 '06
11:09 pm PDT
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OH! (Reply to this comment)
by queenofbitchez
I get it now. Thanks
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May 04 '06
8:41 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by big_g_87
Yo blizzard, you think you’re a f*ckin MC wizard?
I’m f*ckin you up single-handedly, I’m bleedin the lizard
ya cant beat me, i eat pu55ies like you when i get up
if ya wanna bring it on, we can push tht muthaf*ckin bet up
rasie tha stakes nigg@, whats ya beef?
when ya mum gives ya head, shes jus bringin ya teeth
i bring waves, an im tidal, im a natural disaster
fear for me is primal, cuz ya cant own tha master
You still claim ya the greater, but I am and don’tcha forget
I put ya dick in a grater and couldn’t fill a baguette
If ya can’t stand the heat, step outta tha kitchen
Cuz I’m tha big dogg, an am f*ckin b!tchin’
yeah nigg@ you aint hot enough to battle rap
cat got ya tongue n tied it up in a cattle trap
drop the f*ckin act, the mic and ya gun
cuz you just been taken, in more ways than one
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Dec 05 '05
4:29 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by blizzardz
hey u dick head u call ur self big_g
ur not a muther f*cken mc
this battle is interesting u c b coz me and u just keep bouncing back in the end it is gunna result with sum sounds like crack
step back man coz ur just burrying urself
mate ur gunna get smacked down if u dont quit
yea now u no my my rhymes can go far
they travel faster then u if u boosted that car
i think we could dominate this sh*t but ofcourse we could beat evry mutha round here
we could be on top like the kings of hip-hop
so mister big_g do u really live in the hood coz if u did u would no u dont cross the line coz this area is mine
now wot u got to say
coz i can rap all day
so hey
im injoying it so
plz mr big_gAY
keep it goin so i can f*ck u up
biatch
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Dec 04 '05
3:27 am PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by big_g_87
im as tight as th night and im comin on strong
g comin atcha and ya know somethins wrong,
soft and long, tissue, pass me tha bong, issue
whats tha problem wi cussin when im rushin a song?
you better run, yeah nigg@ go get a gun
and don’t forget to scream when ya hear me come
cuz Im in ya hood, finger-f*ckin good
chucking buds, hooking scuds, like ya knu I would
i got raps lined up like beans in a shop shelf
i bring ya down b!tch, tranform ya from true human to blue elf
lookin like a smurf, these lines so smooth ya can jump on em an surf
ill lace ya any motherf*ckin place on earth
2 words, 4 an 3, yeah you were struck off
f at th front and th back, and an f between; f*ck off
i cant believe how much motherf*ckin time that you took off
how did ya crawl back in, whos A&R dick did ya suck off?
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Dec 03 '05
4:32 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by blizzardz
ok ok uve had ur turn now its my turn to make u burn,
so all ive gotta say is hi,oh sh*t did i say hi i ment bye,
b coz all i hav to do is spit 1 line and this fight is mine,
yea im victorious like notorious,
g-unot gets my vote so mutha fu**er dont rock my boat
my rhymes aint gunna get me anywere i aint gunna earn enough money to share if i could i would yea im white but im straight from the hood and wots this sh*t ur talkin u poppin gats
n**gaz all u had was hats, bit** ill kill u and dump u in a ditch, i hate g_unit coz it is a glitch if a chick kicks u in the nuts u will rap with a hi pitch voice but u can drop out now its ur choice
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Dec 03 '05
2:57 am PST
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Re: Re: interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by big_g_87
Yo Blizzardz, f*ck you, suck my b!tch white @ss, til ya pop in ya pants. F*ckin b!tch. This one's for you-
Ya better check ya self, before I wreck you up
Put ya on the shelf, thru th rack man, f*ck you up
Wanna piece, I’ll gi’ya a piece of my mind
Pull out my piece, pistol whippin’, make ya blind
I’m first to the draw; G knows the score
I’m one nil up, kiss my @ss, kiss the floor
One a piece nigg@, ya gonna sue my whole @ss?
@ss hole muthaf*cker, 2-1, I’ll pop back
You want blood money? take 10 knuckes
And if ya want big johns ya gon’ feel my belt buckle
Ya legs gonna buckle, right under the pressure
Of Big G comin atcha, f*ckin gangsta fresher
I’ll lace ya head wi lead, ya better watch ya back
Make ya best defense, cuz I’m on th attack
Got my finger on the pulse, my finger on th trigger
I’m ill an I’ll fill any enemy nigg@
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Dec 02 '05
12:00 pm PST
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Re: Re: interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by fingerlickin
I dont battle wid rhymes/
I'm out doin crimes/
all u freestyle battle homos/
usin each others lines/
I'm out robbin a bank/
or stealin automobiles/
y'know n e thin it take/
just to pay the muthaf*ckin bills/
I'll use an AK to blow of ure face/
unload a clip then vanish without a trace/
I'll disassemble u/
Rearrange u/
leave u in such a state the cops cudn't even age you/
I'll f*ck u up beyond all recognition/
Beyond plastic surgery/
Beyond operation/
Your family and ure doctor will b scared of your condition/
Dont know if nxt week u'll b dead or u'll b livin
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Nov 28 '05
2:09 am PST
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Re: interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by blizzardz
yea u all think u can rap,
but the truth is ur crap,
coz nuthin u say can put me down,
as i rip the mic im gunna blow the surround sound,
gettin on the mic is the game and yea i saw that
your rhymes are lame,
when im gettin all this sh*t together that is running around in my mind,
i rap so quick im gunna leave u behind ,
u wanna start ill throw another punch line,
yea thats a sign that u should stop,
coz it is a waste of time wen u no this battle is mine,
now its ur turn to get on the mic
PHSYC
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Nov 15 '05
12:36 am PST
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interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by xxxtitanxxx
It was helpful and somewhat humorous and so glad i came here and I know what you're thinking-(she's way too nice) but c'mon you gotta admit you got talent. I seriously believed every single word up till the end
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Oct 14 '05
7:20 pm PDT
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blizzard u biatch (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
The sob story's all very nice to listen to........
so blizzard please dont take it in offence when i say.........fck you !
name me 1 pearson on here who gives a damb ?
self pitty yo self ill by you fabolous's damn....
yo rhyme is worse den email spam...
so i got to do this 1 more time.... du du DAMN !
fuk this im gone
any1 wanna battle hit me up
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Oct 08 '05
3:53 am PDT
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blizzardz here (Reply to this comment)
by blizzardz
u bustaz that cant rhyme
u think u can yake mine
is like sayin u made mustard
before heinz
ill spit 6 lines
yo fans'll becomin mine
i run the city the man
n***az call me blizzardz
cuz i
made the band
got diamonds in the face 'n'
diamonds in the band
im on top of the game
poppin yo chain
grown man and u aint got no
diamonds that a shame
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Sep 28 '05
8:32 am PDT
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Okkkkk (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
White boy don’t take it wrong n leave in a huff…
But why did u post it 3 times ? once was bad enough
Come on you cant battle me up in hea stuntin like you tough
Cus when they say pop yo collar white boy pops his cuff
lil fool why you step-in to me ?ill confuse you like a Scooby stitch
so respect your elders cus I got three years on you biatch
so you gonna battle me then get to praying right now
cus ill be ready any bars any time any how
holla at me biatches
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Sep 25 '05
2:04 pm PDT
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white_boy is new here (Reply to this comment)
by white_boy
i'm young and white yeah dat right my skin is light i'm fourteen matha f*cka and i kick
a*ss with my flo this is some free style sh*t so don't be destracted when i say touch your toes ho*e...z bi*ches
the people i hate aw hatas they snitch and bi*tch about sh*it when i spit you may
think i suk but i dont care.(by the way their making me edit this sh*t fo sum reason)(sorry fo ant accidental repeats in comments)
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Aug 27 '05
5:07 pm PDT
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Re: imah back (Reply to this comment)
by white_boy
i'm young and white yeah dat right my skin is light i'm fourteen matha f*cka and i kick
a*ss with my flo this is some free style sh*t so don't be destracted when i say touch your toes ho*e...z bi*ches
the people i hate aw hatas they snitch and bi*tch about sh*it when i spit you may
think i suk but i dont care.(by the way their making me edit this sh*t fo sum reason)
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Aug 27 '05
5:05 pm PDT
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white_boy is new here (Reply to this comment)
by white_boy
i'm young and white yeah dat right my skin is light i'm fourteen matha f*cka i kick *ss with my flo so don't be destracted when i say touch your toes ho*e...z b*ches the people i hate aw hatas they snitch and b*tch about sh*t when i spit you may think i suk but i dont care.(By da way they er makin me edit my sh*t cause.. wekk i dont know why)
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Aug 27 '05
5:00 pm PDT
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imah back (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
hey girl how u doin? we been here a long time u should hit me up at insaneinthemem@aol.com. you seem like a pretty cool girl maybe u could hit me up and we would freestyle or some sh!t.
peace....
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Aug 24 '05
9:47 am PDT
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imah back baitches (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
yeea am back
i gots flow like da ocean in da med cos it crystal clear
im like woah call da feds whurr she go i cant see ya
belive ya leave ya shook and crying
leave ya dying cus my punches are killah n i ain tryin
yoooz lyin mr white cracka cus u aint old enuff fo jail
do u think u cleava ? as cleva as cassidy who cat get bail?
no provail i got shi locked homie thas right
like cail im glocked yo know me im tightttt
outta dis shi jus givin freestyles till my a challanger wants to battle
livn it up wid frees fo thrill till some 1 dun follow da herd like cattle
hit me up biatches i need a battle
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Jul 11 '05
2:39 am PDT
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im out of lock up (Reply to this comment)
by white_cracker
i'm back/
i'm the white cracker/
i'm a mad rapper/
my rhymes never slack/
so pop off and fall back/
you must smoke cr@ck/
you try rhyming cat wit rat/
i rhyme glock wit rock/
that my n!ggas be smoken/
they be token/
they be choken all the time/
they roll up high/
wit the glock/
on the corner of the block/
so chill and dont talk/
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May 12 '05
2:21 pm PDT
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b!tche's (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
it's all funny hellos and hi's
just intell you find out the truth that your dad mistaked your mom as a guy
only reason your here so do us a favor and shut the f@ck up!
i'am sick of seeing all your rhymes being ending with punch lines
that rhyme every time!!!!its not the way its done
its so wak i dont even take the time to read it no more
sorry but the truth is out your rhymes a bore
in the end the hores will be hores and there no changing that feeling
it was once said it's hard to rape the willing
booya b!tch
i got a little joke for ya
whats the useless skin around the v!gina?
the woman!!!!!!!!!!!
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Apr 15 '05
6:00 am PDT
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Re :2 blankshow (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
what the fck u on women serve man
u just landed yo trick azz bak in the friein pan
but in the bible eve lead adam on
he was the dull fck who agreed wen she sed come on
and ate the fruit shows men aint got no brain
you meet one and they all tha fckin same
i aint dissin men just wankaz like you
now youv made the food
so you betta start to fckin chew
you want fromal trick i already am
so bow down azzhole and call me madame
we got it easy ur the ones who have to go to war and work
now tell me who sounds the cleverest yo fckin jerk
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Apr 09 '05
2:42 pm PDT
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Re: Re: MC CADDIE (Reply to this comment)
by liltigga
yo check it
yo you rhyme like if you was rejected neva respected always neglected the rhymes you spit sound like sh*t
you sound like a crackhead who jus took a hit you jugdin by race you aint keepin your pace your a f**kin disgrace
now babyboy tell me how you feel wat tha deal you jus got dissed by a female
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Mar 31 '05
7:19 pm PST
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Re: MC CADDIE? WHOS YA DADDY! (Reply to this comment)
by whiteboy50
yo jimmy ur raps is tight
i aint here to diss u wit a mike
i like what u spit
dissin this cadaver who fakin
we both kno that he'll never make it
jus cuz hes black dont mean he can rap
in fact he prolly spends hours on a couple of lines
three whole weeks on jus one ryhme
austalia bred a good one pick up to another white boy
im white too we got this sh!t rite boy
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Mar 13 '05
6:56 pm PST
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Re: THE MC RETURNS (Reply to this comment)
by whiteboy50
mother F@cker u have no clue how to rap
id bet my whole wallet that u aint even black
the MC returns F that this MC's gettin burned
u prolly never even seen between a girls thighs
u prolly the romatic type lookin into they eyes
talkin this i love u baby pleez dont leev me
cuz then ur in the real world gettin beat real easy
by a white boy even man i bet u embarrassed
u a gangsta huh u prolly still live at home wit ur parents
Cadaver sits at home beatin his meat
this is the rap game boy take a seat
before i decide to bring the heat
cuz punk @ss ur ryhmez is weak
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Mar 13 '05
6:44 pm PST
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Re: lol (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
when you hear my sh!t your ear drums dont quit
put the split in your wig and expose you bald @ss
drop you in the ocean and raise up the tide
ba ba ba west side
and thats all folks the end of you comes quick
like your relastionships with d!ck
trying to play it off but inside you wanna die
trying to impress your whole life and livin a lie
anything that bleeds for more then a week and doesnt die isnt normal
women period shouldnt be formal
what happen to the dishes and plates
now its this that and i have rights
f@ck that, the bible says women are here to serve man
so stick to the plan and get busy b!tch
once apon a time a kid from minneapolis came here yo
and damn near had to steal the show
who is it?
my name is blank and i came to k!ll acouple minutes
and whats up the way that everybody gathers around eachother
so they can steal eactothers sound if its all about getting down
how long do i got to wait for these fools to sit down
apears more clear in its simplest form
nobody sees tears when your standing in the storm
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Feb 27 '05
11:23 am PST
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this is some sh!t from icp its tight (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
In the name of the witch
I cut the head off a mule I guetted it out
Put it on and then I wore it to school
That ain't the only thing I wore
I wore a clip and some rounds
A f@ck!n killa with this mule head
And I'm clippin' em down
Because I'm all outta choices
And my voice is unheard
You and your boys get the worst
I aim your forehead it burst
I'm evil
Fires in my sky
I see no diamonds it's true
Aim for you guts and blow your breakfast out behind you
I'm one with the darkness
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Feb 19 '05
8:51 pm PST
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whats up kids (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
someone freestyle up in this b!tch
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Feb 17 '05
10:05 am PST
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ya.. (Reply to this comment)
by chirapper
agree
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Jan 29 '05
9:40 pm PST
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blah (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
its gettin borin round here
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Jan 24 '05
1:24 am PST
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Re: hold up (Reply to this comment)
by chirapper
ha, thx dude, i will wait fo ya lesson
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Jan 16 '05
12:02 am PST
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hold up (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
my bad d@mn i been busy as h-e-l-l i'll hit u up in a couple of days okay teach that little kid something if you can and no you do not wanna rap like eminem hes a fake @-ss biatch
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Jan 08 '05
10:28 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: teach me how to rap (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
lol wanna battle n whur da hell is blankshow at dumb baby lmao guess he shook
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Jan 08 '05
12:11 pm PST
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Re: Re: teach me how to rap (Reply to this comment)
by chirapper
yoyo, u gotta teach me that man, i hella wanna freestyle, ha
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Jan 06 '05
8:06 pm PST
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Re: teach me how to rap (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
i can rap lk eminem :) watch
blabity blo blopity blah hopity hop lah i can rhyme lk eminem labity lah cus eminem can rap n da rest ov u is crap n i can rap n i drink from a tap :) :)
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Dec 21 '04
2:45 pm PST
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teach me how to rap (Reply to this comment)
by aqaq
i want to rap like eminem
PLEAS TEACH ME
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Dec 20 '04
9:29 am PST
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Re: whats the matter (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
lmao i fogot all bout this sh!t ne way ill merk you ya herb lmao
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Nov 23 '04
3:25 pm PST
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whats the matter (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
ha b!tch aint got nothing to say
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Oct 17 '04
10:21 am PDT
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b!tch girl matho faucko (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
hurry up
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Oct 11 '04
6:56 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Re: this fo blankshow (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
you dont know what the f@ck your talking about
not everything has to rhyme when u talk out you mouth
slob on knobs like corn on cobs real talented
you f@cking dumb sh!t how about you go cook
me some dinner and then we will talk
cause i'am sick of your bull sh!t you do it alot
so go clean the floors or maybe go sell your @ss
eaither way you'll pass by doing what you do best
i really aint got the time yet the pationce to deal
with little b!tches so step away from the mic and get a real life
be a maid and clean clean clean
from the bottom to the top of my chinney chin chin
you do sound like a girl and girls shouldnt rap
take your garbege else where and come sit on mylap
just playing i aint trying to smell your yeist infection filled p-u-ss-y
got your self lookin like a over stuffed twinkie
wheres the cream filling your gonna be a virgin the rest of ya life
with the rhymes u dish your gonna be a sit at home alone wife
so heal your cuts and learn how to stitch
cause its me rick james b!tch
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Oct 09 '04
12:37 pm PDT
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Re: Re: this fo blankshow (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
now hol up look i told u ,i dunt do bent b!tches lk you /
ur even worse than sumthin stuck unda muh shoe/
now am tellin u wankashow dunt reply/
cos ur jus gettin lamer man dont bother if i was u i wudnt try/
ill get dem dishes n brake em ova ur head/
yer while we at it lets av a greek party n smash till ur dead/
u cant rap u cant hold ur own/
now i aint beein funny but i drather listen 2 britney spears in tha zone/
fuk!n peoples mamma's man thas not beein a mc
ur jus wack man b!tch i dont even wont u 2 step 2 me/
fuk this sh!t fool u no u wont win/
fuk ur sh!t it belongs in a bin /
ur jus another who think he tha sh!t/
but ur so far from it ur so despertate u remind me of a junkie lookin fo a hit/
with my words ill make u choke ur self
cos u broke i smoked u sit this 1 out on tha shelf/
jus usin words now ur wantin 2 leave /
got u lk fabolous u tryna breath/
man u cant touch me b!tch i got a great big smile/
ill b waitin fo ur reply i no its gon take ur azz a while/
HOLLA
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Oct 09 '04
11:10 am PDT
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Re: this fo blankshow (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
stop rhymin cause b!tches should stick with dishes
not sexest but sexyest b!tch smacker in the american color--cracker
not afraid to speak my mind and unwind in my rhymes
it keeps me alive the only reason i replied
to your weak sh!t cause i'am bored and sick of f@gs
watching mtv and 8 mile with a great big smile
thinkin you can rap cause you can listen to em
well it aint that simple i'll pop u like a pimple
ya stupid f$ck dont come back leave now
your not worth the hurt your about to witness a real shark tail
i'am crazy when it comes to rhymes
but it p!sses me of when you fruits lie
so write your lines before you hit me up
or just stay faraway you'll make more off a tip cub b!tch
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Oct 03 '04
5:16 pm PDT
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this fo blankshow (Reply to this comment)
by latina-mami
ay blankshow u sayin u got peoples mammas suckin yo d!ck, ay blankshow we agree on 1 thin dat thas sh!t is sick/
It dun take a genious 2 see da reason why she sayin "no please " n dat cos yo pubic hair is infested wif fleas/
I wudnt cum near chu wid a bomb suit on cos i bet chu got diseases a list long/
das all this b!tch talk bout is avin his d!ck sucked n guns , DAMN jus readin dis sh!t will give u da runs/
So much verbal diarriah flowin from diss fools mouth its still inclear blankshow wot da fuk u about ?/
Am i da only 1 findin it kinda gay ? I think he shud change his name 2 wankshow it will suit him betta dat way/
n i no ur reply gon b lame id diss myself but da still wudnt win da game/
its funny cos i no wut chu gon say dat my mum sucked yo dick 2 n u gon get a gun n kill me aint dat silly/
Das really gon botha me ..NOT!!! so wankshow hit me bak wid all dat chu got
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Sep 29 '04
12:14 am PDT
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Re: Some new sh*t (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
you steping to me is like being on when animals attack
rip your face off and use some of the skinn for a dress from your back
i'am crazy like mr.hannibal eating fresh flesh
so hot in words you'll get a buzz and your head will spin
it puts the lotion on the skin or it gets the hose again
ya get the point bit@# step off
frozen land made me hard and your bit@# a$$ is soft
come to minnesota and then we can talk
strait out of minneapolis and staying for life
your punk a$$ will stiff up in a real fight
so stop while your behind and get your diggnitey before i take your life
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Sep 09 '04
10:06 am PDT
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Re: what up yall (Reply to this comment)
by blunt_trama
jhgfj
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Sep 05 '04
1:07 pm PDT
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Some new sh*t (Reply to this comment)
by blunt_trama
Got more ice than lake superior
whats that im not hearin ya
a sick mothaf*cka put tha fear in ya
cuz you know im coppin fresh gear at tha bar drinkin draft beer.
got more doe than a phat deer, when i rock a mic all tha b*tches cheer.
cuz foes try toch us get split like dutches cant handle the rushes get put on crutches
an you know any beef we be handelin with tha gat in tha ford door panalin
hazzardous emcee when i hit tha scene betta flee
got hoes turnin tricks for me pimpin b*tches in tha ninth degree oxygen they cant breathe
smoke chronic from the north ya see smoke a pound to a g always got tha finest weed gin an blunts for me.
ya best know who i be cuz i bring tha funk
self proclamed king of crunk
there is none flyer i got that sh*t that i'll get you higher
to spark that L you must use fire
i'ma dope mothaf*cka you'd best retire
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Sep 05 '04
12:48 pm PDT
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what up yall (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
damn i havent been here 4 a while someone hit me up with a freestyle right quick
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Sep 02 '04
5:14 pm PDT
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Re: Quick Keystyle Fo Yall (Reply to this comment)
by mute12
I'm iller than you/
thats right, your like a dirty shoe/
I'll fukin kill you!/
I'll smack you into da ground/
run circles around you without a sound/
Grab a mound/
of dirt and start to pound/
Your head will explode/
Like the load/
Of mothafukin shotgun/
Cock back the pump of the gun/
Pull the trigger, you done, son!/
I'll drop the gun and run/
Then i'll go and find a semi/
I'm better than you, am i?/
Hell yeah, i'll run you over!/
There will be nothin left but leftovers/
I'll jump out and beat your head in with a four leaf clover/
Then i'll run ya over again, but this time with a landrover/
But right before your throat chokes/
I shouted at you and spoke/
I just beat your fuking a$$ and your rapping was a joke!/
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Aug 06 '04
12:44 pm PDT
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Quick Keystyle Fo Yall (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
I eat mc's like mariah carry cravin canibals/
I'm da dark creature like black ravin animals/
Release da pressure to impale da wack ones/
Claimin dey bussin heat when all i see is cap guns/
Get on da mic an try ta rip me i'll laugh fast/
Couldn't add up to me even if you passed math class/
Iz wack trash, to anyones lyrics dat wanna battle/
Ur summah cattle, in hot beef wit thunda azzhole/
Dis aint a dis to ne one dis a simple keystyle/
Denial(de nile),rivers of egyte to form freestyles/
To rip currents threw ones an leave em layed out/
Played out, in da game of cards dogs i'll pull da spade out/
Get it pull da spaid out in cards nutter u dogs/
Ya computer iz lost,from da virus of shooters dat cost/
Buyin shots to drink more, make pink gore/
From mink ores,my martual status is i think bored/
Dis is da last cripts got ya to boiling fluids/
If ya wanna battle me dont say nuffin jus do it/
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Jun 10 '04
5:14 pm PDT
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Re: lend me your ears, eyes, n nuts. (Reply to this comment)
by forsaken_one
time to show this pu*** how to wreck the spot/
this I stress not to test, it's hot/
frying this cat's brain like electric shocks/
claiming you hard but your boys bet you not/
I can't believe you even making a move/
one of a kind, cuz nobody's faker then you/
now you fated to doom, I'll beat your face into the shape of a spoon/
that's all, your done, stick to metal like magnets
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May 17 '04
11:52 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: THE MC RETURNS (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Dat Sh!t wuz wak dun test me b!tch u aint near my level wit dat fake bull sh!t u played ya self sayin dat wak sh!t cussin aint rappin dumb a$$ fuka n dun try ne one u'll get crushed by
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May 09 '04
5:07 pm PDT
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lend me your ears, eyes, n nuts. (Reply to this comment)
by dashocker
yur sh!ts all over da place like da mother fukin aftermath of a shotgun blast.
it only pours from yur fukin a$$.
like a waterfall.
walkin too tall.
overhaul.
u say alot wit as much of a point as a mother fukin volleyball.
putred pitiful pile a pi$$.
yur no one.
its over.
bend over.
Jus quit now n assume da fukin position.
yur fishin,
witout a hook.
i read u open n closed like a fukin book.
same sh!t, same case, new face, no place.
u came last.
like da fuk'd a$$ of da alter boy afta mass.
da only dope u be dealin
is the sh!t u be peelin.
oranges n apples and your mother fukin moms pu**y riddin wit herpes.
standin on fukin street corners sellin da 2 dolla cock slurpy.
Yur not even gud enuff to tak a fork to my fukin sh!t.
Yank yur balls
make u cough
grab yur tongue
n hang u wit it.
Then send n sell yur a$$ off to chinatown
where they eat fukin pu**y n hound.
run yur a$$ into the fukin ground.
then light a fire under yur a$$ n watch u fukin blast off.
wit hands n feet ripped off.
slam dunk!
it went through.
nothin but net.
nothin but sweat.
Thats all I fukin see comin from u.
Why buy bullets for yur peice
when yur could place a mother fukin pale under yur feet.
hot flashes.
How many fingers am I fukin holdin up?
Yur dazed, confused.
8,9,10 KO
nothin but a pu**y a$$ bi*ch beatin n abused.
take a meat cleaver to that fukin beaver
n fuk it 5 times over like the sh!t I spit to u
over n over it plays on yur mind
knowin yur behind...
Not even the mother fukin sun can shine
when I hit this stage.
tear this mother fukin roof off like two dogs caged. (Shady)
yeah that last line wasnt mine!
Feast yur eyes on that sh!t for a while and rise to the occassion.
Who the fuk is gonna down that sh!t here?
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May 07 '04
1:21 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: THE MC RETURNS (Reply to this comment)
by whiterapper
I can steal wat i want wen i want coz i got u down on paper as small font u a f****n pu55y licker d!ck tripper hell you been seen a slipper dipper weed trippin mutha f***a u gonna get run over by a trucker who laughs all the way to calcutta so shut the f**k up before u run outta lucker sucker
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May 02 '04
7:59 pm PDT
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Re: blank man show (Reply to this comment)
by terrez
look at these punks try'n to be a hundred heros mess with me, they become a hundred zeros.
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Jan 05 '04
10:31 am PST
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Re: THE MC RETURNS (Reply to this comment)
by bio_menace
armageddon-a final conclusive battle between the forces of good and evil/thats what this is and ur sh!t is feeble/dropin a rusty skalpel in through ur scalp and pullin ur adams apple out through ur mouth/im a liar to start sh!t, i got ur b!tch wrapped around my d!ck so tight u need a crowbar to pry her apart with/my sh!t is aprehensive because my mouth is comprehensive so u better be f*ckin attentive
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Dec 15 '03
3:50 pm PST
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THE MC RETURNS (Reply to this comment)
by mc_cadaverous
The Cadaver is back, here to bust up this mic
Been busy pimpin hoes, hot biatches, even dykes
You fsck with me biatch and you know you'll pay
Always stayin alive just like the Saints of Later Day
I'm a gangster straight up G from the streets
Got your girl in my room, she be under my sheets
Making money all day is all I know how to do
So try to step to me and I'll knock you out like Ryu
I only drink Olde English, won't see me sippin tea
You even see my hustling asian biatches like Chun Li
Never see me in a bucket cause I cruise a clean Benz
Last night I bust a nut in your girl's contact lens
You'll see me in the club mackin girlies like a fox
Meanwhile you at home, jackin off and playin X-Box
All you crackas listen up, Cadaver's here again
Try and fsck with me, better bring your Mac-10
If you wanna mess with me you know where to knock
Watts is where I'm from, and the mic is what I rock
I don't deal drugs, I slang funky raps and fresh cooter
Normally I aint no robber but I stole this computer
You better not clown me, you know my raps are hella tight
Cause I'm a BLACK MAN and the rest of you fools are WHITE
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Dec 05 '03
11:25 pm PST
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blank man show (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
welcome to the mother fu@#in blank show/
where i hold it down and let you know/
who will win and who will lose/
who will sucseed and who will not/
its funny how i never heard of watts/
must not be a big town but full of rocks/
a california suberbs is all it is/
where cali dumbs all there sh!t and p!ss/
i come from somewhere you might not know/
where your from hot is winter here its cold/
its called minnesota the land of freeze/
if you can survive then you must be/
one of the best nah you weak as hell/
dreaming of a better world with no jail cells/
i'am frome the city of st.paul/
where we say the twin cities/
with pimps,ho@s drugs and really fine ladies/
we also have minneapolis now thats the ghetto/
like chicago whe ya get to know/
you come here and get jacked/
shot in the head for 10.00 dollars a pot/
aight enough of the bull sh!t i'am done
i aint got nothing else to say right back and i'll battle ya
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Nov 15 '03
10:31 am PST
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Re: CADAVER IS BACK, CHUMPS BETTER RUN (Reply to this comment)
by jimmy-from-oz
Caddie, he's strainin, claimin he from the town of watts/
its tru, thats where he IS from, n his famous for suckin cocks/
Dawg, if i was able to ud be the person id b steppin to/
if i could i should, but i wouldnt cause i know im better than you/
talkin big bout yo mac 10, tryin-2-b scary/
u bout as real and threatenin as a make believe fairy/
for sure yall, u see this cat, he still dont get it yet/
look at him tellin me i better run over the internet/
about keepin it pimpin, phucka you dunno the half/
every time i check yo rhymes u jus make me wanna laugh/
Check it, i got a lil bet goin to prove u aint real/
but i feel im pretty safe, but who knows, anyway man heres the deal/
if u can get three others at epinions to admit they believe the sh!t u sayin/
then ill leave n never come back dawg, i aint playin/
u know i even think its funny to hear u spinnin this sh!t/
proves u aint a gangsta, cause reals g's dont start beef, they FINISH IT/
what ive heard from u makes u seem like a false braggart/
tryin to hide yo tru self behind fake raps, but u a fa.gg.ot/
If theres one b!tch in here it aint me, blank, BOR... Its YOU/
you aint half the rapper of this so called kapt'n kangaroo/
there's bout as many kangaroos, outbacks, rainforests in my town as there are in LA/
straight up jungle of concrete blocks, cats wit glochs, n highwayz/
so instead of me steppin to you why dont u step to me?/
thats right, leave yo town of LA n roll to syndey/
im talkin anywhere, from docks, the cross to out west at C'town/
u bring yo crew n meet up wit MY boys the we'll c who's down/
im tellin u dawg it'll b u six feet underground/
f*ckin fake a$$ rapper u bring blacks a bad name...clown/
see i been a bit hypocritical in my past few raps, im badder/
than i made myself out to be, now a whole lot madder/
so compared to all of us u jus' think you phatter?/
jus come step to me in the flesh n we'll see, trust me, cadaver/
This sh!ts david and goliath if u step in my firin' line/
im goliath n u david, cept u aint got no stones this time/
so i DARE ya to step to me wit yo lil mac-10/
wit my new shotgun ill blow u gay a.ss right back to watts again/
And whats this sh!t about not bein able to rap if u white?/
whos the worlds most famous rapper? if u said eminem, u guessed right/
surprise surprise whats that tell u bout white rap/
thats right its just as tight as YOUR lil wack, jacked, black fight crap/
im white and im jus rappin to get on yo nerves, would-be-pimp/
step to me ill blow u a.ss up worse than the Hindenburg blimp/
Im out dawg it seems like u stuck-in-a-rut/
step to my town, phucka, ill F&ck-yo-a$$-up, slut/
feel it/
thunder
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Oct 23 '03
5:09 pm PDT
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CADAVER IS BACK, CHUMPS BETTER RUN (Reply to this comment)
by mc_cadaverous
Fake rappers aim for the top, trying to take me down
But battle against me and I'll rip you like an evening gown
I blast holes in chump freestylers, now you lookin kinda porous
Cause I'm from LA and he's from the mother fsckin rainforest
You got less game in your head than I got in my toe
So step to the cadaver and I'll smoke you like a Marlboro
Bring your azz down to Watts, it'll be a G'day mate
Unload my Mac-10, seven shots to your prostate
You rap like a biatch, you should just become one too
Aint no room in the rap game for no Kaptain Kangaroo
Every woman I'll ever have is I ho that I'll plunder
Got my hand down her panties, fingers going Down Under
Doing so many girlies every day that I just lose count
Biatches wanna get with me, better have a fat bank account
Turning down hotties everyday, sometimes I make them cry
Gotta buy me a new Bimmer if she wants a chance to qualify
MC Cadaver, I'm a real deal baller just like Shaq
Storming through your town and burning down the Outback
I'm a straight up gangsta, blowin up everything in sight
Don't even bother tryin to rap because YOU KNOW YOU'RE ALL WHITE
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Oct 22 '03
11:49 pm PDT
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MC CADDIE? WHOS YA DADDY! (Reply to this comment)
by jimmy-from-oz
Hahaha this sh!t goin out to that cadaver guy/
Because I got so much sh!t on him i jus' caint wait fo a reply..
Hey dawg i was jus readin through yo' previous crap/
im bout to drop more bombs on u than Bush did on Iraq/
I said i strike like lightning, u bout to get struck too/
You sound so much like a p@ssy i almost wanna FUC.K YOU!/
Man for the last few years i've been layin dormant/
Now im startin to wake up after your little performance/
hey, I jus rapped and recorded myself spittin cadaver's sh!t/
Hey blankshadow, hear my idea out, i think u'll dig it/
I got this on a tape n im goin on a lil money quest/
U think ill win? i do... i sent it in to worlds funniest/
U claim to b a real rapper, cadaver? y dont u try harder man?/
Because TO ME you bout as real as that muthaf*cka SPIDERMAN/
Your stories are 'bout as believeable as those on Jerry Springer/
U'd be as good a rapper as eminem would be a f#ckin opera singer/
Listen to yo'self dawg, your helpless, your destitute/
i know a b!tch who'd sound more real on a mic... SHE'S MUTE/
Man when i was 10 i had more mic skills than u ever had/
to me u sound like a f*ckin rich boy, spoilt by your dad/
So after readin the past 8 lines u get the point im makin!?/
LISTEN TO ME CADDIE! YO' NOT REAL SO STOP FAKIN!/
Yeah, thats right u live in your own lil dream world/
i bet that muthaf*cka aint never f*ct a SINGLE GIRL/
Haha listen dawg i just dont think u git it yet/
Do u know how f**kin dumb your rap sounds over the internet?/
You ''smoked'' ommis you say? Whoa is that sh!t true!?/
Pretty impressive CONSIDERING HE ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE F*CKIN WORLD TO YOU!/ (i think)
Yeah caddie, u better hear what im sayin/
and FEEL what im sprayin/
cause right now dawg i aint playin/
In a competition of dumb f*cks u'd win by far/
you're NOTHIN compared to some others here, they know who they are/
Matter-o-fact ull never turn out to be a phat rapper/
cause when u start bustin, even the stage ur on will collapse from laughter/
you're a disaster.
This to ommis, u wanna know where in Australia im from?/
Ill narrow it down for ya, between north sydney n wollongong/
So wsup anyway man u from this phat country too?/
Hit me back wit a bit of info about u/
peace
There we go theres two phat raps/
all u other cats hit me back wit what u think of that/
Hear the thunder from down under
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Oct 22 '03
8:21 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: TO ALL FAKE RAPPERS (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
Hey jimmy, where bout from Oz r u?
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Oct 22 '03
3:05 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: TO ALL FAKE RAPPERS (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
you say your a 100% black when the sh!t you was on is 100% crack/
no one cares or is reading your sh!t/
so dont spit or try to come back with a fake hit/
i do this sh!t to just be strait clownin/
take a minute to read your sh!t and listin to how wak its soundin/
your fake you couldnt freestyle in person i bet ya heart would be poundin/
i'll leave you like a camp counsler at crystal lake droundin/
aight i'am done for now/
adios syanara kapling kapow/
one more thing
i'am the leader so you must fallow/
you oviusly cant spit so you must swallow/
peace out this was for mccaderver or whetever aight i'am out,
blankman
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Oct 21 '03
8:17 am PDT
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whats new (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
what up rap cats my bad i been gone for a grip i just had sh!t to take care of
yall mean
but whos up next?
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Oct 20 '03
6:28 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Re: TO ALL FAKE RAPPERS (Reply to this comment)
by jimmy-from-oz
Listen up ya'll, theres a new voice here at epinions/
And if you think you're the boss, im 'bout ta bring down your dominion/
I strike like lightning, and i Explode like thunder/
Fo' fun brother, im representin' the land down under/
Literally... im from Australia, dude/
where that is some-of-u-ignorant-f**ks dont even have a clue/
But anywayz, im here to stay without a doubt, B/
so heres a lil bit of info fo yall to know about me/
I dig ta Tha Liks, Defari and King T/
Ras Kass, Saafir and Mr X to the Z/
I got my heart n soul set on a one goal/
that i die from a disease related to alcohol when i get old/
So whenever u see me with my eyes all sunk/
ima livin by my motto. "avoid hangovers... stay drunk"/
First up, respect to blankshadow fo' bein here/
And bustin phat fresh rhymes fo' nearly a full year/
Up next, props to dat dope MC book of rhymes/
for burnin countless fake a.ss b!tches wit yo blazin lines/
Now this is my first net battle, ima b put to the test
but here is the first issue i feel i need to address/
Theres one cat up in here who thinks he tha man/
One of many muthaf**kaz i jus dont underdstand/
He's one ultra try hard dat cadaver retard/
fo real dawg, u tryin ta claim crenshaw boulevard/
maybe some bright day u drove through with your daddy/
Man i dun take you serious, ur a lil b!tch, caddie/
I don't give a f**k, i don't care what u hav to say/
its all bullsh!t, whats next, you're down wit doc dre?!/
I dont give a sh!t fo' yo reply or what u got to say against me/
he's nothin but a wannabe fake a.ss fiddy cent, see/
Your cover is so thin dat its f**kin see thru/
u wont see me makin myself out to b evil/
or bad, no i aint a gangsta rapper/
but if some f**ka talks sh!t, ill kick his a.ss if i have ta/
Stop pretendin, u aint a muthaf**kin MC/
Your style was left behind at the turn of the century/
I think its time yo a.ss when n corrected your wack flow/
as fo' pimipin hoes, yo, your mum doesnt count, bro/
So there it goes dawg, u heard my attack on you/
hit me back, b!tch, stay tuned fo rap two too/
If any other lil b!tches wanna start beef wit me/
I'll verbally destroy you unmercifully/
Word
From Jimmy From Oz, keep on hop hippin, keep on gettin drunk wit this cognac im sippin
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Oct 20 '03
5:29 am PDT
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Wats ta say a white boy cant rap (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
Ya, whats ta say a white boy cant rap/
i spit a verse and the b!tches think it phat/
by yourself they also think your paht, but next to da ommis they think you jus wack/
i got you grovelin at your knees just smellin my sack/
you cant reach my d!ck but ya keep tryin ta get back/
but what ya dont know is that ya on the right tram wrong track/
step up again and jus have another crack/
coz i dont care all i wont is your mumma's bug bite sized rack/
so i can bust one hell-of-a load/
wishin yo had my 10 inch dick but unlucky that ya have a chode/
it may be 3 inch fat but it 3 inch long/
totally opposite to that of a bong/
gotta head only had a few mins to write. that last ryhme ruled ova mine.
Catch from da ommis downunder
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Oct 15 '03
12:20 am PDT
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Re: Re: TO ALL FAKE RAPPERS (Reply to this comment)
by mc_cadaverous
Chumps see me rapping so they think they can too
But fifteen years ago I was just a sucker like you
Got my pimp game going with cel phones and faxin'
Giving my hoes coaching just like Phil Jackson
Go out there and work, don't care if it's rainy or sunny
If you see that trick ommis be sure to get all his money
Oh wait, that sucka is just a poor azz ho
Thinks he's a player while he cruises in his Yugo
Smoked him in my new Bimmer on interestate 10
The only biatch he ever had was addicted to Fen Phen
You need some rap lessons but I aint here to teach
Busy gettin head from your mom on Manhatten Beach
MC Cadaver, when I rap I go straight for the kill
Knocking fake rappers straight out like Nyquil
Rap against the Cadaver and you'll face a stacked deck
Next to me you're a nerd on the couch watchin Star Trek
You'll have better luck locked up praying in the steeple
I'm a real deal rapper just like The Dilated Peoples
The city that's my home is the city they call Watts
While I was makin big money you were still eatin tater tots
Fake azz internet gangsters think they're all hard
Get robbed in a minute if they come to Crenshaw Boulevard
Better lock all your doors 'cause Cadaver's on the attack
All yall are crackas, but I'm 100 PERCENT BLACK
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Oct 12 '03
10:27 pm PDT
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Re: TO ALL FAKE RAPPERS (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
Wat da fuk you tryin' ta say, just stop talkin'/
da closest you get to a biatch is them ones you stalkin/
After I'm done da only thing left is da police are chalkin/
bystanders circling around just gorkin'/
thinkin' to themselves what a mutilation/
people hearin state wide on the radio station/
till eventually it gets around to the whole muthaf_ckin' nation/
MC_Cadaverous step inline of my firing ryhme/
spit acidic rhymes in his eyes now he blind/
ya cant see da big picture, ima get cha/
not gonna hit cha, jus chew ya up and spit cha/
muthaf_kin hoe, yo dont know what im capable of/
l8a from da ommis downunder
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Oct 11 '03
2:35 am PDT
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TO ALL FAKE RAPPERS (Reply to this comment)
by mc_cadaverous
All you fake rappers better grab your junk and flee
Cadaver's back in the house and I didn't come for tea
Gone for six months 'cause I was on vacation
Biatches visit my bedroom like it's a train station
MC Cadaver, some might say that I'm conceited
But my raps are so real that they all got deleted
While I was gone there aint been nothing but chumps
Fake raps stinking up, better move'em to the dumps
Chump named Shadow, his mom and sister are skanks
I bust out a loaded AK while he be shootin blanks
And gay-money, what is that sheit you be spittin
It sure aint raps cause you as black as Bill Clinton
I be sippin gin and juice while you drinking gay Sobe
Never give a biatch a nickle cause I'm a player like Kobe
I'll say this only once, you all are just fakers
Reloading up my raps just like the LA Lakers
Bringing out the reserves like Malone and Payton
I don't rap for Jesus, but then I don't rap for Satan
I only rap for one person, his name is The Cadaver MC
Better give me all your money 'cause I don't rap for free
Your ex-biatch calls me "Superman" but my name aint Shaq
She be suckin me off while I grub on a Big Mac
Whenever I do her she gets all wet like a fountain
We even did it on Goliath at Six Flags Magic Mountain
Never had a real job cause real work don't pay
I'm a hustler from Watts in the City of LA
I'll return real soon so you better stay on your toes
Cause while you playing games you know I'm pimpin hoes
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Sep 16 '03
10:27 pm PDT
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guess who's back (Reply to this comment)
by mc_cadaverous
Hey I'm back!! And I'm here to spit some raps!! So get ready CHUMPS.
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Sep 16 '03
9:47 pm PDT
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Re: kay-money gay (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
Where u at kay im waitin'...
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Sep 12 '03
4:56 pm PDT
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kay-money gay (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
kay-money, yo will never make no "money" Kay?/
we know it ya first time and we think u aint funny just gay/
c'mon everybody just listen to what i say/
this lil' toddler is nuttin but a f_ggot/
he steps up ta da ommis and cant hack it/
what he dont know yet is that i rip him apart like a pirhana to a maggot/
think about your lines before ya post em in/
me and blank f_ck up f_ggots and throw em in the bin/
tryin talk tough, that should be a sin/
we cage yo up and dont feed ya till ya get thin/
now you all full of anorexia/
mixed with hella dyslexia/
ya not close to black just dirty from mexica/
now shut the f_ck up if ya dont want embarrassment/
Mc_ommis only give harassment/
i will annihilate and dilate any muthaf_cka sucker/
ya stupid azz clucker/
NO OFFENCE TO THE MEXICANS, CHEECH AND CHONG RULE
Catch from da ommis downunder
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Sep 11 '03
12:25 am PDT
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show me what u got (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
you waited ten minutes and expected a reply/
let your pubetey kick in ya voice and then give it anouther try/
you sound like a lil p@ssy gangster whos only ten/
never should a commented cause now your dead/
no bullets just so full of sh!t/
talkin bout honkies and foos n***a you need to quit/
you never started just ended/
sorry to be an @sshole but your going no where/
no oxegen to the brain cause ya wearing lil kids underwear/
but thats cool man whetever floats ya boat/
running around lookin for lil kids you lil freddy i'll slice ya throat/
two murshedes in my back pocket and a gun in my coat/
its the end of the line/
so dont try to reply/
ended your fame before you even came up in the game/
left behind no replys but shame/
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Sep 09 '03
2:29 am PDT
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Re: TurnDaPage (Reply to this comment)
by kay-money
Man its my first time hear and u already p_ssen me off/
It ain't are fault ya sista be jack'n us off/
yo rhyms ain't got nothin on me so back the f-ck off/
for i take a knife and cut yo f-ck'n head off/
u just a little b_tch dog so shut the f)ck up/
For i get some c-4 and blow yo azz up/
oh! yay almost forgot b_tch ima white boy 2/
and to me and my other honkies u just an other f_ckin foo
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Sep 07 '03
5:57 pm PDT
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what up y all (Reply to this comment)
by kay-money
Yo what up people of epinions . com /
Im new at this sh_t but Im ready to drop bombs/
When Im writtin flows I don't like to keep'm long
but fo real i need some feed back/
yall people know i need that/
yall people should belive that/
So all u master m'ces please write back/
tell me if my rhyms are phat/
and if not yall know that i'ma come right back/
later,
kay
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Sep 07 '03
5:42 pm PDT
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guess who (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Lol i hope dat wasnt a dis at me ommis.
So yall battlin again huh well imma be back i aint got time to say nuffin else n thanks tho blank but i think i can say somethin real quik
Yo ommis whats wrong wit ya mind today/
The way u typin ya rhymes its makin u seem gay/
I hope u aint cuzz ill feel sick if i battled against an homosexual/
But u prolly dropped da soap,attached to a rope/
But ne wayz i cant say much imma bout to go/
So when i come back ommis get ready to bow down to da pros/
If ya still wanna go i might not have much time im still commin up wit punchlines fo dis battle royal fo a shot at the heavyweight title.blank if u gotta cooledit yet hit me up n if i aint gotta battle ne body fo a while imma give u a shot at me ight.
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Aug 28 '03
2:14 pm PDT
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Re: guess who (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
yeah, there no denyin', and ima not start lyin'/
i took a crack at book of ryhmes, and it recoiled on me, now look who dyin/
DA OMMIS/
i finish at dat/
now blankshadow sayin that he at yo' back/
whats he coverin yo' with, his lil brothers plastic cap gat/
It looks like BOR has a new bum buddy/
get blank to suck yo dick, spray a load in his face, now he all muddy/
cum mixed with sh!t, is blanks azz to runny?/
i sit back and laugh at blank after he tried to suck up afta he got f_cked up/
he has a go at me bcoz he know that im the weaker MC/
that really shows balls/
i think i atleast have da skillz ta make ya fall/
B!TCH
Catch from the OMMIS downunder
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Aug 28 '03
3:14 am PDT
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guess who (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
ommis has been on the nuts for a while/
besides his name what he needs to change is his style/
he talks sh!t then denis it/
all stupid and dumbfounded you published it man you cant hide it/
and congrats hats off to book of rhymes/
for getting the gold after beating lil f@gs with ya lines/
ommis dont mean no harm nothing to get upset about or alarmed/
hes weak and challeneged always speaking lies/
looking for every reason just to pop up and say hi/
but its comming to an end like all the others/
spit something for a couple weeks then disapear/
leave no trace just difeat in the air/
u gots to smoke some bud and let the stench stay in ya hair/
just to prove ya a gangsta/
walking up in court not giving a f@ck what ya smell like/'
not trying to impress anybody
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Aug 27 '03
1:32 pm PDT
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guess who (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
aight what up i'am back my computer f@cked up for a couple of days but i'am here now and i'll spit later but hey congrats to you book of rhymes for doing your thing
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Aug 27 '03
10:41 am PDT
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Re: Re: Better dan u(addin mo embarrisment) (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Ight now holl up
U sayin u aint try to diss me den where da fuk did book of gay come from/
Dont lie to yo self like that u makin it so u look dumb/
But fuk it u sayin wheres da police/
Nobody knows dat i did it cuzz they think it was anotha nikka deceased/
U claim u real den why u talkin sh!t over da net/
I really aint into talkin sh!t to ppl i cant get/
To,but fuk it i really aint into dis sh!t/
Cuzz i aint got time im suppose to be makin a song not on here battlin n sh!t/
U waistin my time u shouldnt of said nuffin ri now all i am doin is talkin in rhymes/
I can throw a watermeleon at chu n have u coughin up rimes/
Aww damn why am i still goin i wish i could jus get to dis problem n shoot it/
Mater of fact i put a gat in ya azz n have yo azz pisin bullets/
U sayin i aint real den how real is u/
I meen startin sh!t over da net is what u think is cool/
U say u tryna tell me to make use of my talents imma underground rapper/
I dont even want i record deal i do it cuzz i like it n causin disaster/
To wanna be's da try to challenge me to a battle n get hurt/
N if u tryna make a motivatin speach u cant at all u n dat sh!t wont work/
See all im sayin is fo somebody on hear get a cooledit pro/
Off of www.cooledit.com n get a mic n den learn how to use it then challenge me yo/
Look dont do ne of dat talkin sh!t ova da net i think thats really cowardis tho man jus go str8 wit yo sh!t if u tryna mativate somethin den stay on da subject read ya raps n look at what u sayin dat ish aint motivative lol i dont even need dat really like i said i dont care if im good i dont brag alot i jus say sh!t dats true or what eva that comes out my fukin mind when i write dis i dont think when i write i speak my mind.
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Aug 27 '03
7:31 am PDT
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Re: Better dan u(addin mo embarrisment) (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
i aint dissin' yo raps i aint say u no good/
but one thing i dont believe is that you from da hood/
i had a crack at yo' azz coz u need to use your talent/
yo' alwayz talk tough, i can do it its easy, i knocked ya out with a mallet/
Im sure if we started a ballot/
other people would agree/
that yo' could turn this sh!t up to another degree/
u keep claimin' that u next dopest mc/
but all i can see is that yo a washed out wanna be warren G/
If i was me i wouldnt make peace/
it will be yo ryhmes on dis site that will be da first to cease/
yo claimed that you killed a guy, where the hell are the police/
it seems to me that yo all talk/
F_ck you man. i am just trying to give some productive criticism. there was no embarassment, no one knows me i dont know them, why da F_ck should i care? i dont. All bark no bite.
Catch from the ommis downunder
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Aug 27 '03
1:17 am PDT
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Better dan u(addin mo embarrisment) (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Lol o holl da fuk up imma emmbaris ya azz a lil bit mo since u cant write nuffin better dan dat den ill goyo level basic azz punk muthafuka im higher level ranked den u n u need to get the fuk outta ppls bizzness so lemme kicka plain basic fo ya azz.
Yo lil b!tch dont fuk wit real nikkas n get shot/
Ill point the pistol at my target n keep popin untill ya body drops/
U cant fuk wit me i dont care if im good/
But u aint yo azz suppose to be rappin on fairy tales from da hood/
Soft azz b!tch,u should learn to not try to diss someone better dan u/
I meen whats ya problem why u say somehin to me i know it aint cuzz i got mo cheddar dan u/
I like to know why u aint battle shadow huh ommis u picked da wrong person to get watsed/
By,u should stay wit yo seseame street rhymes u fukin basic/
I spit real sh!t u spit sh!t dat u wish u could do/
Imma go easy on ya punk azz cuzz im better dan u/
~if i was u i would just make peace~
But if ya wanna do it da hard way i never loose especially to a rookie basic cat like u come at me when u learn how to use punchlines then u would maybe be a challenge but as im already sayin from ri now u want beef b!tch bring the sesonings i already got the recipe.
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Aug 26 '03
4:03 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: whatcha think of dat dawg (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Lol o sh!t catz dat dont even audio battle tellin me to make use b!tch i aint even tryin like i said tho yea i got talent but tho how can i be p_zzy n i got shot three times i killed b4 n imma fukin crip what da fuk u know u prolly a lil b!tch.
Yo who da fuk u think u is dont try to get a chrome burst/
Yo azz couldnt touch me witta cavity search/
I'm da toppest level like roofs/
I stomp down on ya azz wit mo heat like the devil wit boots/
U dont wanna fuk wit dis im da greastest flower n da greatest fighter/
U couldnt climb up to my level of compotion wit the greatest hikers/
U need to stop readin dis sh!t cuzz i know u gonna start bitin/
If u do imma drive ya azz bannas like monkeyz witta licesn/
Dont say nuffin else cuzz u likka chick u be b!tchin/
Imma dish out these punches like fights held in kitchens/
Dont start no sh!t,I know u wanna follow me b!tch/
Come put ya self inna killa shoes if u borrowed my kicks/
Now i wanna see yo azz spit somethin better im garunteed to stand higher/
Da day u see my true heat the day u die like vampires/
Yeah i said it dont go to anotha site n use my rhymes or u dead/
My gat will blow ya mind n not a physcietris givvin head/
U cant add up to my level cuzz imma stacked up mathic/
B!tch u better stay in ya lain like backed up traffic/
My rhymes will make u sick n stick u/
Take out ya skeloton n poke it cuzz i gotta bone to pick wit chu/
U wanna challenge me im like whats ya problem/
I bet u shakin so much i swear u was from harlem/
U cant fuk wit me u wack dawg ull get dismantled/
Dont get inflicted wit sh!t u cant handle/
Respect Greatness
~New middlweight champion u cant fuk wit dis dont try~
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Aug 26 '03
3:41 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: whatcha think of dat dawg (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
When i spit a ryhme on epinion/
u wanna be's step into my dominion/
theres no stoppin i can bust out a million/
ryhmes one after the other/
and theres no stoppin the topic/
but mostly there about your mother/
coz i dont luv-her/
i just want to smother/
that hot little tw-at with all my juices/
after i done she has no more uses/
like you book_of_gay/
i know your good, but u dont have to say/
why dont you spray/
in a different direction/
BOOK_OF_RYHMES.
make use of your talent. Try writing something with meaning, stop saying bullsh!t how u will do this and that, when actually u are probably a weak pusstified lil b!tch. Maybe your not weak but still write something creative. I know i cant write creative yet but still u have talent. USE IT.
Catch from the ommis livin downunder
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Aug 26 '03
12:21 am PDT
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Re: Re: whatcha think of dat dawg (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
ight thanks now drop anotha one.
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Aug 24 '03
1:17 am PDT
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Re: whatcha think of dat dawg (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
h.ell yeah dog thats was some dope sh!t
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Aug 23 '03
2:41 am PDT
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whatcha think of dat dawg (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
how iz dat
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Aug 22 '03
11:40 pm PDT
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Re: what up (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
puttin cold steal to ya adam's apple n blow out ya esophugus/
fillin u up wit nitrogen fluid until u start to spontanious combuss/
rippin the track like i was a runnin body builder/
break ya neck over n over again untill u need a spinal vertabrat filter/
i am da all time mad flower usin big words so can ya spell dis/
I'm so dope i make crack n cocain n herion jeleous/
Ya lier lier ill come to yo picnic n bring death inna basket/
Ill let Jim Carry u to ya casket/
Da evil one dat'll bring so many shoots/
Leavin blood soakin ya socks/
Betta go getta mop/
Send u to satin witta million n five demons/
Scare u fo a million n 9 reasons/
Makin all hata's stop breathin/
Im da illest alive/
U cant eva find my equal n da future or present or past of time/
Cause theres no one that can hold da rhymes dat im keepin/
Spit acid at dis page when u look it'll have ya eyes bleedin/
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Aug 22 '03
11:37 pm PDT
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what up (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
come on show me something tight write something
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Aug 22 '03
12:21 pm PDT
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Re: dude i was high when i did this (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
dope its tight
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Aug 22 '03
11:43 am PDT
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dude i was high when i did this (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
you say you need practice but what u need is help/
so you came to the right place you know what to do get the belt/
my champion belt that issss dont get it mixed up/
with your plastic peice of sh!t/
aint worth the rhyme and hell eough not worth my time/
if ya wanna see me rap watch tv/
check me out with em,50,and snoop/
doing a remix bout pimp/
aint soft like you lil wimp/
but i dont feel bad/
cause that makes you weaker when you want to be tough/
so dont give up now dont turn to dust/
cause dust is mud so get dusted with bud/
ya understand now cause if you dont/
you need to smoke some bud/
then re read it and tell me what u think/
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Aug 21 '03
11:02 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: we cool (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
I live in Youngstown,Ohio but i gotta say dat sh!t was dope but iz u fo realive next door to u,uhhhh well ne wayz u should listen to dese two songs dey silly as hell(http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=210538&q=Hi) n dis one(http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=226728&q=Hi) n u might like dis one(http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=266706&q=Hi)check dat out.
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Aug 21 '03
3:21 am PDT
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Re: Re: we cool (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
hey dog where you from i'am from st.paul minnesota and we got this tight @ss rapper from here check him out go to kazza or however u download and type in blaze battle his name is eyedea hes a pretty good freestyler blaze battle toke place in new york and he beat everyone at age 17 i think he lives right by me and his homie slug is in a rap group called atmosphere download some of his sh!t i'am telling you its cold like his album called "god loves ugly"or go to
www.rhymesayers.com
tight rappers
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Aug 20 '03
4:03 pm PDT
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Re: we cool (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Yo blank u should listen to dis battle against granduer (http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=352950&q=Hi) what cha think of it.
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Aug 20 '03
3:33 pm PDT
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Re: we cool (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Yo that i have to admit was tight/
It's like im body buildin rippin da mic/
Yeah u cool ya rhymes aint bad at all/
What happened to da rest of the ppl on here did u beat em all/
Well to late now i got one more week to prepare/
Until i polish my skillz n burn da mic witta flair/
Did u download cooledit yet if u did lemme know/
Maybe we can do some collabes yeah n u can post yo stuff on da net so u can show/
The world ya skillz/
Popin rhymes like ja rule does dem pills/
I'll be waitin when u get the cooledit/
Yeah we cool but u already said it/
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Aug 20 '03
3:28 pm PDT
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we cool (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
how many sniffs of glue do u got to do/
before u realise theirs no brain cells left to use/
up in your h-e-a-d/
taking pills like ridalen for a.d.d/
so f@cked up you cant stand strait/
so f@cked up ya cant stand your own wieght/
till ya colaps i aint stopin sh!t/
till the day i die i aint stoping sh!t/
this freestyleing never ends no matter what happens/
till the day the loser gets revenge/
you better whatch and pray/
for that day to never come but hey/
every thing happens for a reason/
like slug said every action has a point/
5 points makes a fist/
you swing and it hurts when it hits/
you say you gonna be a rapping champion/
well go for it man/
i'll be right behind you dog no matter where u stand/
you dont know me and i dont know you/
who really gives a f@ck i'am cool with you/
your rhymes aint that bad/
but its not what u say its how u say it/
and its not what u do its how u do it/
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Aug 20 '03
7:58 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: step to this b!tch (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Lol omg dis sh!t is funny/
I can get mo compotetion from da easter bunny/
That didnt seem like nuffin there/
U aint even fit to wash my dirty underwear/
U spittin hate then i must of got to u cuzz like i said i wasnt tryin/
But u callin yo self da best u must be lyin/
I'm da muthafukin audio light heavyweight champ/
N i aint ever loose u a rookie b!tch go back to rhyme camp/
Now when i spit dese rhymes u see em n shake wit sweat droppin from ya glands/
N i hope u dont bite dese rhymes dat im feedin u man/
I already told u ur just one of my practice battles/
Ya rhymes need skills ur lika cowboy wit outa sattle/
Now dont get mad jus because u my practice i admit u a lil good/
But this almost about to be over cuzz in one week i gotta middle weight title match ya undastood/
So like i'm sayin right now try yo hardest writtin/
Cuzz like i been sayin i aint tryin/
Audio izza differenter thing then typin/
Getta cooledit n learn how to use it/
Then maybe we can have an audio battle to see who got the better soundin music/
So imma chill till i get in dis battle royal after this one match/
I think im handin up my lightheavy weight title if i win so if u get cooledit ya better catch/
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Aug 19 '03
12:35 pm PDT
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Re: Re: step to this b!tch (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
come on that sh!t was tight
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Aug 19 '03
11:16 am PDT
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Re: Re: step to this b!tch (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
first is first and worse is worse
you steping to me is worse curse in your verse
thinking your cool cause u think u rap
get that b/s out of here your book of rhymes has just been taped
you like that dont u well forget about it
you dont know sh!t so just forget about it
you dont ranke sh!t up in my game
you aint nothing but lame brain flame
you should stop while your behind
i never knew so much hate could come out my rhymes
but you did it its all your fault
you cant be mad when you wake up without your thoughts
cause i'am like freddy i'll steal your dreams
when you dont realise you fell a sleep
murder your @ss and burry you 6 feet deep
still alive but i dont give a f@ck
i'll still thrive and get ya mom and bust a nut
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Aug 19 '03
7:06 am PDT
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Re: step to this b!tch (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
look if u wanna do dis battle jus download cooledit on www.cooledit.com n get a mic if u aint got one n learn how to use dat studio n then maybe dis will get interestin.
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Aug 19 '03
2:25 am PDT
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Re: step to this b!tch (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
look if u wanna do dis battle jus download cooledit on www.cooledit.com n get a mic if u aint got one n learn how to use dat studio n then maybe dis will get interestin.
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Aug 19 '03
2:05 am PDT
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Re: step to this b!tch (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Blank i think u should try harder man i aint gettin good enuff practice fo dis battle royal man u need to write somethindope fo a change man cuzz i gotta get this middle weight title in audio battlin n i need practice even if one of my practice cats is a lil b!tch like u dont say im wack if i aint tryin n my rhymes still better dan urs:))i think u should join da backstreet boyz.
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Aug 19 '03
2:03 am PDT
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Re: step to this b!tch (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Blank quit tryna be hard cuzz all im seein u cant rap better dan a frog/
I'll knock da b!tch out u like im takin da soul out a female dog/
Dont get mad cuzz all my flows are doper dan urs n bring waves likka ocean/
Lil Kid face it ya hand n lotion is ya only love potion/
Dont be sad i still gotta place fo u in my attic or garuage/
U got heat when i pull it out u see a maruage/
Lil b!tch go get a fukin life/
Matter of fact u can go n be Dennis Rodman's wife/
U a lawyer dat doesnt pay attention dats not the case/
Im so murderous i can make a smurf blue in da face/
U remind me of a hoe azz cat tryin hard to be a chick/
U aint hard come around where im at to my lil sister ull be b!tch/
What da fuk u know about killin imma muthafukin crip/
Slob azz boi dont make me kill u when dese shell's catch ya hip/
like i said b4 i aint tryin on ya azz/
I'm undefeated u lost in da trash like broken glass/
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Aug 19 '03
1:58 am PDT
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step to this b!tch (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
alright, alright listin you fake @ssnas wannabe/
their isnt no compatitoin between me and you/
you already lost give it up who knew/
your mamma can flow better then you/
you should just say f!ck it and give it up/
drop to ya knees and serve it up/
ya p@ssy @ss book of rhymes/
no one wanna here ya fake @ss three f@ckin times/
learn how to press publish your comment once/
pull ya hand out your @ss and your head out ya c@nt/
i can only stand your @ss if i smoked a blunt/
i can only f@ck ya moms if i'am drunk/
pretty f@cked up but atleast i dont lie/
tell the truth or ya make a mistake ya die/
i tell it how it is wheater ya wanna hear it or not/
your so full of b/s your rhymes are criss crossed/
they dont make sence worth sh!t/
ya better stop now before ya get split/
ya wannabe be pimp with the hat and a feather/
all u got in ya closet is a purse with matching pants but their leather/
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Aug 18 '03
9:46 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Da Best No Contest (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Yo quit spittin dis wack sh!t what u fo getin yo rhymes/
how many sluts do u get subtract 1000 after u times/
It by zero d@mn dawg dat makes it worse/
U fukin carry ya rhymes like how u carry ya purse/
After im done wit u ull be dead but itll still be some sh!t dat u feelin/
And the only fans u got jus spin onna ceilin/
what u gonna do to me mommy he bout to make me cry/
What da fuk yo punk azz gonna do mess up my hard drive/
Plz/
Da best thing u do in life is on ya knees/
Da way u stay on my nuts man dat sh!t kinda strange/
And yo imaginary girl dont know whats a dick so imma spray on her facial plains/
I told her im likka protective squirlle in acorn session she right in my nuttin range/
So stay of my d!ck/
I dont want a dike chick/
Cuzz dats all u is to me izza ugly azz b!tch/
But i dont fuk wit he/she's so which one of these chicks imma pick/
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Aug 14 '03
10:58 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Dat Best No Contest (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
i aint got groups i got flocks/
ask ya moms how many licks it takes to get to the center of my tootsie pop/
u lil girl/
trying to p!ss me off/
well ya aint u lil girl/
but i'll tell ya what!!! you need to stand up and get off these nuts/
before you get caught up and start to fuss/
popin your pimples your nasty @ss eats the puss/
its cool and all your trying/
but aint nothing doing sh!t aint no one buying/
your like a fiction book always lying/
how many hoes do i got/
times your mom by 11 thats alot/
but that just up in my area code/
i probibley got a couple near u/
so dont be suprised if ya ever hear my name/
its what i do its me its james/
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Aug 14 '03
11:09 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Dat Best No Contest (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Lemme spit somethin i hope u aint provoked by my words/
Yo girl ridin my d!ck more then wind under da wings of a bird/
All yo azz really need is one hand and a pair of tweezerz/
C'mon dog yo girl blow more then busted speakerz/
It's a fukin shame ya girl cant even look at chu/
I bet yo azz look like a fuked up rejected pikchu/
I speak the realness in my mind/
All ya girls are way under a dime/
Dey way bellow a one as far back as time/
But lemme breath already/
Or ill fukin strangle yo azz witta peice of spaghetti/
U prolly uglier then a yetti/
AKA da abomidable Snow Man/
Yo chick breath so hot she can fry an ice cube wittout a pan/
C'Mon what u know about playin u aint a pimp/
U cant even get ugly girls lil wimp/
U aint suppose to get rid of em n go to da next just use them azz fukin fun/
But they dont want a 9 milimeter they want my 9 meter stick load cum gun/
My rhymes spit sh!t that makes humans erase/
U prolly one of dem cats dat let girls nut on dey face/
Yo u better dan me hahahahaha b!tch im jus playin/
dese words im sprayin/
Have u on da ground layin/
I told yo azz to shut up now listen to what da fuk im sayin/
DA BEST ON DIS B!TCH N AINT EVEN TRY TO GO FOREAL YET...................*end transmition*
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Aug 14 '03
2:58 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Dat Best No Contest (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
i'am dominit cant u see/
your waiting like a b!tch just for me/
like your girl up in the crib lookin at her caller id/
every time it rings hopeing its me/
but you know what dog b!tches are stupid/
and i'll tell you why/
when you tell them its over they start to cry/
and when they try to end it they always lie/
like this b!tch i know trying to say i dont want to talk to u/
so i stoped and know its all she trys to do/
used to be on my nuts/
now i got a new girl for each of my new alphetes/
sh!t dog i know the game/
stay with the same b!tch and it gets lame/
new puss is the best/
like your girl for me and i love her chest/
now i gots to strap on the little guys vest/
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Aug 13 '03
4:17 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Dat Best No Contest (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Like what da fuk/
U bought to see a rhyme comin ya better duck/
I blaze sh!t so cold dey call me anti freeze/
When i spit i come so hard ya think that i sneeze/
Stabin ya azz in ya mid section/
N leavin ya scared stiff like u was paraniod of erection/
I got proof mc's/
Dont wanna shoot da breeze/
Im holdin all dis sh!t spittin tornado bullets/
I take da hoe cake n shoot it/
Im da main one on here n im new so dont try to deny it/
U pickin up doggs litter so imma say u takin a sh!t/
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Aug 03 '03
11:08 pm PDT
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Re: Dat Best No Contest (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
i dont know you but i bet you heard of me/
the motherf@cker that be pimpin cant u see/
you probibley look like a fat white dude with double dees/
not to be mean but sorry u gots to leave/
just quit and hop off the n@ts/
before you get hurt and turned to dust/
cause i aint playing no more maaaaaaaaan/
just doin what i gots to do for my plan/
stay outs my way before u see my hand/
up in your girl oh damn/
dont trip shes just my freind/
she even came to visit me up in the pen/
cheap p@ssy h@e/
never thaught we would meet like this yo/
but now your done no more playing/
quit trying harder man listin to what i'am saying/
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Aug 03 '03
4:38 pm PDT
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Re: Dat Best No Contest (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
i dont know you but i bet you heard of me/
the motherf@cker that be pimpin cant u see/
you probibley look like a fat white dude with double dees/
not to be mean but sorry u gots to leave/
just quit and hop off the n@ts/
before you get hurt and turned to dust/
cause i aint playing no more maaaaaaaaan/
just doin what i gots to do for my plan/
stay outs my way before u see my hand/
up in your girl oh damn/
dont trip shes just my freind/
she even came to visit me up in the pen/
cheap p@ssy h@e/
never thaught we would meet like this yo/
but now your done no more playing/
quit trying harder man listin to what i'am saying/
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Aug 03 '03
4:38 pm PDT
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Dat Best No Contest (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Rip open ya body/
Show ya death dat only ppl seen godly/
Battle me then u messin wit da wrong kid the Honeycomb boss of the ppl dat smoke trees wit higher stems/
Leavin gunz unemployed cuzz i get mad then fire them/
I come from da world of strong men/
Not gay,da hardest lesson yall get is deciden Which restroom u belong in/
Some ppl is gay azz fuk i know circles dat roll str8er then u/
On da internet thinkin dey cool/
Loggin on to aol typin keys and escapin da tool/
Who iz ya foolin i make pplz bones bread dough/
Betta take ya steps back likka greedy toney little/
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Aug 01 '03
11:35 am PDT
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Re: Re: whatch yaself (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
hands forth step within my sicko inalises/
calisis apon my mind make me strain for my lines/
have i ripped it sceezed the brain made some liquod/
drained it in a cup and then i sipped it/
the mic let me clutch it/
thoughts take flight so fit this in your pipe and take a puff kid/
f@ck it i eat it like a tea pot steam hot/
apon a roof shot a marble with a verble sling shot/
take aim here i came i'am the same/
back in 86 i'd tag my name up on you window frame/
staine the mind the deep shade of resadew/
foices within the head make choices multipole/
multiply spawn blank alittle buzzed oh sh!t here comes the judge/
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Aug 01 '03
8:31 am PDT
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Re: whatch yaself (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
smack yo bish azz witta honeycomb instead of battlin a weak cat like u i aint even tryin
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Aug 01 '03
1:15 am PDT
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Re: whatch yaself (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Yo shut da fuk up what iz dis sh!t/
i can tell yo azz is a safe fo d!cks/
cept u dont need da combination or a lock to pick/
lil gay azz bish/
all yo rhymes are very fictionary/
imma rip ya every word like i shreaded a dictionary/
lil azz d!ck think u can fuk wit king kong/
after i show ya azz how many times i can bench press ya skinny azz to make u so scared u cant breath to long/
lil bish u shakin ya rhymes show da truth/
of how much u gay bish when i stuck my fist in ya mouth left u wit out a tooth/
say some real sh!t u aint providin me nuffin/
the chances of a gay f_gg!t like u bein better dan me is 1 to a million and somethin/
bish try again.
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Aug 01 '03
1:13 am PDT
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whatch yaself (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
shut the f@ck up cause all you know is i'am white and mexican/
i'll tell you now and later again listin b!tch i'am not your friend/
i dont know you and you dont know me/
like i said once before i write better then you with my pee/
this is your first time on the net and so out of a 100 you got a 3/
you should start to think before your up againts me/
what do i gots to do to make you see/
you f@ck!n white fruit topping/
see your f@ck!n gay left you all alone no body to talk to nothing else to say/
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Jul 31 '03
4:58 am PDT
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Re: Re: TurnDaPage (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Imma boost somethin up a lil
blankshadow why aint u puttin nuffin up man/
imma bout to when dis by defualt but that wasn't my plan/
i bus shots but the only onez u buss iz wit yo dick in ya hand/
dis iz nuffin really im jus bored waitin fo a bish blankshadow to show up*yawn to da muthafukin yawn*
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Jul 29 '03
3:22 pm PDT
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Re: Re: TurnDaPage (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Wtf u talkin about pullin out a gauge i bet all ya shells is duds/
Lil fake azz slim shady u must of consumed to much nut and now u think u elmer fud/
I'm thinkin u holdin a gun puttin lead in somebody is got to be silly/
Cuzz u a b!tch i bet u prolly one of dem lil hill billyz/
But fuk it imma clown ya fake azz all da way until ya wanna stop/
If ya knew so much about guns den why aint u eva bus a shot/
Now see u wanna hold a gun but ya momz say dont touch her d!ck again/
Ya want me to get funni naww it depends/
Right now i'm jus puttin sh!t down wit out thinkin twice/
Ya mind is like an elephants but hold on wait u scared of mice/
I bet u lookin at dis gettin mad right now and about to put an old azz record on/
B!tch when ever u do sh!t u come up short and i'll stepp on ya small azz like u was a lepercon/
And am i really gonna get fo real i dont know/
Its against my code to battle a lil f_ckin hoe/
An da thing is u never heard of me i heard of u/
B!tch azz pus_y if i was there i would murder u/
Spit shells threw ur busted up convertible/
Man u would never want me to be ya fatha/
I would put the drama to ya hoeish mama/
And beat her like an pinyata/
but thats only fo hoes so i guess i gotta include u/
So where ya at i'm lookin fo ya azz like scooby doo/
ummmm i'm waitin how long does a hoe take i wanna bring out some ill sh!t so try ya best man.
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Jul 25 '03
9:09 am PDT
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Re: Re: TurnDaPage (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Fake a$$ white boy i can see threw ya weak rhymes and tell u r a lil scardy a$$ b!tch dat get chased home from school by so called "BULLIES"ya need to cover up ya waknes wit some partly good stuff cuzz u aint providin me sh!t fo compotition so far now i aint even tryin so i really really wanna see if a lil b!tch like u can make me write fo real but u really dont want that cuzz u will get the sh!t ripped outta u so i suggest u keep ya mouth closed unless u know how to punchline battle but what would u know u only know the basics of rap and not the other stuff like sayin sh!t that u really would do not in ya lil fantisy world get out of that blank mind of yours and snap into reality this is the real world i'm givin ya advice quit talkin sh!t over the internet and talk sh!t to ppl str8 up in front of their face and maybe u'll grow balls on dat smelly a$$ pus_y.
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Jul 25 '03
6:42 am PDT
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Re: Re: TurnDaPage (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Yo u lil fake a$$ mexican need to shut ya fukin mouth/
You prolly one of dem lil pplz thats scared to leave their house/
Lil b!tch made a$$ so stuck to da house he call it his special shrine/
What da fuk u talkin about fukin my sister u melister shes only nine/
But ne ways i rippin ya a$$ an i aint tryin/
U cryed to ya mommy after u seen ya skillz dyin/
And da funni thing iz it died b4 it was ever born/
U learned ya true skillz was jakin off to doggy porn/
Lil child melester prolly if u had a relative female u'll be fukin ya neice/
The only pus_y u will ever get is in ya hand wit some grease/
The only reason u spit is because ya momz aint teach ya how to swollow/
Swabin ya mouth all over d!cks then ya know nut cums and u know how to follow/
Up,man what ever i aint got the time fo ya wake a$$ rhymes/
I only came in dis sh!t because i thought someone had good punch lines/
But i have to settle fo dis blank d!ck a$$ person/
U need to quit readin dis rap cuzz i know u lookin at ya computer jurkin/
Dont even spitt nuttin back ya best job is blowin/
Ya mouth full of flavored and regular trojans/
D@mn i bet the tellie tubies can get wit u in flowin/
F_ck dis sh!t no more imma let u punk a$$ blank d!ck go right now i'm done/
U so soft man ya need to be santa clauses son/
And ya need to put skillz on ya wish list because u have none/
C'mon u started dis an imma let u see true skillz if u can come up wit a desent rhyme sceem fake a$$ b!tch test dese nuts.
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Jul 25 '03
6:28 am PDT
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Re: TurnDaPage (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
its funny how all your rhymes your talking to your self
everything you put on this page is wack you need some help
and thats why i'am here back again
to prove whos on top the white mexican
you wanna give a test and think your the best
here put this d!ck in your mouth and take a breath test
i'am the teacher so sorry you flunked
no hard feelings come on i only f@ck your sister when i'am drunk
so get off my d!ck what the f@ck
you publish 3 rhymes in like one day
you have no life you probley g@y
talkin about you lil slim shadys i'am sick of it
its blankman here get used to it
make you have nightmares b!tch
i'am like freddy in a horrer flick
and aint sh!t you can do
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Jul 22 '03
10:29 am PDT
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TurnDaPage (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Yo dis is a call out to ne body that wanna punchline battle wit me this is jus a test to see if u aint intiminated about this.
How many times yall gone do this
lil slim shady wanna be's/
ya best job that u can offer fo him is bein on ya knees/
Fuk quit watchin da movie thinkin u hard betta watch Tom Soyer/
Dont call out my name cuzz talk is cheap till i make u hire a lawyer/
U say u wanna sleep under da stars i can make one of those true but the other u can only think it/
U cant get wit Carria-Ann moss or Jada Pinket/
But now here name is Jada Smith f_ck it thats old/
Speakin of old i bet ya moma so fat her butt got its own zip code/
Now what nikka u know that got punch lines dis ill/
I'll shoot a big ben like i got time to kill/
8 mile wanna be u can never ride a bike wit out balance/
so why u gonna try to rhyme against me without talent/(but not honey come lol!)
Look dumb a$$ ya flows is small/
Like roaches pizzin on da wall/
But u smaller then dat i bet i got u shakin and ya teeth chattery/
I pop da gun in da club i bet all yall 8 mile cats runnin out just like a battery/
Man i'm done wit yall cats imma bout to mute wit out sayin nuffin/
I might be back when i wrap my dick in camoflaughe so yall cant see me cummin/
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Jul 16 '03
9:28 pm PDT
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TurnDaPageB!tch (Reply to this comment)
by book_of_rhymes
Yo i'm sick of hearin all dese wanna be black fake a$$ mc's/
B!tch i put mo red spots on ya back then dat spyhlils dease/
But u know all my bullets will rock ya world/
Knowin da only set of clips u had was stealin Hair weave from ya girl/
Me and some chicks can make a chocolate swirl/
But if u f_ck wit me i'll buss nuts on yo girl/
Like a body buildin squirrle/
But f_ck all dat i aint gonna try until i get a good cat up fo compotition/
I need a cat dat aint scared cuzz when i spit fo real my raps have ya spine chokin ya neck in sumbmission/
But i aint startin no beef i'm jus tryna see if one of yall can bring out da best of me/
Rippin ya upper body parts then along gut u intestantly/
This could be were i could rap fo real instead of jus playin/
So if ya know you got what it takes pick up ya keyboard and start sprayin/
I know it gotta be a good cat on here so come up to da challenge/
So we can have a meetin of spits or comvo's but not like in da teachers lauwenge/
*yo if ya dopper dan dat holla at me but go first i wanna see if u enuff to make me bring out my skillz*
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Jul 15 '03
10:23 am PDT
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Re: Aussy hip hop c'mon at cha (Reply to this comment)
by forsaken_one
f*** that
You want to rip son?/
I gotta exlain wit a double barrel gauge/
you ain't got the pure skills to spit ill/
time to rip you b**** til you f***** up still/
let's go pus/
show how to rip real/
This guys so damned hyper he's ovulating/
masturbating to my lyrics, he should've been cooperating/
I'll rip you slashed, rashed with a hot flash/
get out your period b****, this ain't no wives club slender wishes bulls***/
ya lyrics gayer then a prison porno/
I got you sore like a b**** filled wit titanium dicks anal wise and f***** in the mouth moreso/
f***** panty sportin pansy cl** lipped hoe/
you reluctant to admit you a man, not for long though/
you couldn't blow nada if you was Iraq in the future/
p**** a** stlye, you got half price in the tampon aisle, after this peep had to loot ya/
large caliber heat, let's flow to the streets/
show you just a text emcee, moth f****
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Jun 25 '03
11:20 am PDT
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Re: Aussy hip hop c'mon at cha (Reply to this comment)
by forsaken_one
f*** that
You want to rip son?
I gotta exlain wit a double barrel gauge/
you ain't got the pure skills to spit ill/
time to rip you b**** til you f***** up still/
let's go pus/
show how to rip real/
This guys so damned hyper he's ovulating/
masturbating to my lyrics, he should've been cooperating/
I'll rip you slashed, rashed with a hot flash/
get out your period b****, this ain't no wives club slender wishes bulls***/
ya lyrics gayer then a prison porno/
I got you sore like a b**** filled wit titanium dicks anal wise and f***** in the mouth moreso/
f***** panty sportin pansy cl** lipped hoe/
you reluctant to admit you a man, not for long though/
you couldn't blow nada if you was Iraq in the future/
p**** a** stlye, you got half price in the tampon aisle, after this peep had to loot ya/
large caliber heat, let's flow to the streets/
show you just a text emcee, moth f****
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Jun 25 '03
11:19 am PDT
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Aussy hip hop c'mon at cha (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
Ya’ll lil p_ssy a$$ b!tches,
I will rip into you, till u need more than stiches,
I will burn your rhymes at a stake like the medieval witches,
SMILE!!! I just took your picture,
And pasted it on the wall of wanna be n!ggas,
But you all know that im soo much bigger,
And when it comes down im just a wigga,
But it don’t calculate, u can’t seem to figure,
How this white boy from a land down under,
Destroys MC’s up like mother natures thunder,
None can stand up they just fall like a pile of chunder,
Running of stage frightened and scared,
Regretting how they ever tried and dared,
to compete against my freestyle,
Bowed down and became docile,
Eye to eye of the mother f_ck!ng crocodile,
They listen but don’t seem to learn,
That theres no point of having a turn,
Against the greatest MC ever,
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Jun 21 '03
6:31 pm PDT
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Re: step up to da big league (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
thats weak sh1t!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jun 20 '03
12:29 pm PDT
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step up to da big league (Reply to this comment)
by baddestbitch
Spit fire if u don't like re f_ck!ng write it but u cant ur only chalk to me write u on a blackboard and turn dust quickly. i've got the rythmn and power to take all yall suckers out want to freestyle with me u get buss out. u cant test me but if u run out i gatta jepordize my words and you'll be bug out, test a n!gga u get burn test a b!tch and u jus startin to learn. mysewell give up now u dont wanna get burn out by a b!tch ill make u have a beat like lilo and stitch.mess wit me ya gad damn right ill call u a b!tch.if any competitor come and ill grant ya wish
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Jun 13 '03
5:01 pm PDT
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step up to da big league (Reply to this comment)
by baddestbitch
Spit fire if u don't like re f_ck!ng write it but u cant ur only chalk to me write u on a blackboard and turn dust quickly. i've got the rythmn and power to take all yall suckers out want to freestyle with me u get buss out. u cant test me but if u run out i gatta jepordize my words and you'll be bug out, test a n!gga u get burn test a b!tch and u jus startin to learn. mysewell give up now u dont wanna get burn out by a b!tch ill make u have a beat like lilo and stitch.mess wit me ya gad damn right ill call u a b!tch.if any competitor come and ill grant ya wish
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Jun 13 '03
4:59 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: shadow show (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
thats why your a little b!tch
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Jun 06 '03
1:46 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: shadow show (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
come on f@get hit me up lil b!tch
if u got what it takes
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Jun 05 '03
11:31 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Re: shadow show (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
it's got a be a miracle if u ever learn to use these words lyricle/
come on man look at your f@cking name/
its a (god) d@mn shame/
how you come up in here shouting out my name/
you need to keep your b*tch *ss out my game/
its funny how you and the others just sound the same/
beleave me homie you dont want none of this/
i write better rhymes then you in the toilot with my p!ss/
you fake *ss white kids just p!ss me off/
watch the 8 mile and think u tough/
its not that easy kid it takes time/
witch u got cause u just going into grade 9/
ha lil f@get thinking u can step to me/
you were better off keeping my name to your self and learning off me/
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Jun 04 '03
9:36 am PDT
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Re: Re: Re: shadow show (Reply to this comment)
by xlynksx
Yo, Blankshadow/
You the least man/
I'll beat you any time/
can't you see you can't stand up to my rhymes?/
You give white guys a bad name/
So it's a DAMN good thing you'll never warrant any fame/
Goddamn your slow/
you can't compare to yay4jojos flow/
Wait don't say anything you'll just f*ck it up/
Your sh!t old, not too good/
where the f*ck you think you from, the hood?/
Your a Goddamn poser/
worse then Eddie Doser/
Try again B!tch cause your lines can't catch up/
You f*cking pup/
You inspired me to write my first rap Shadow/
Cause you ain't nothin but a ho/
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May 31 '03
2:50 pm PDT
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Re: Re: shadow show (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
who are you?
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May 14 '03
3:41 pm PDT
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Re: shadow show (Reply to this comment)
by polor_girl2002
hey I liked all of your freestyle's your really good!!!!!!!!!!polor_girl2002@yahoo.com
LATER
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May 12 '03
3:53 pm PDT
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Re: IM THE GREATEST MC (Reply to this comment)
by meracle
If you were the greatest mc,
Then whats that make me g,
I know my skills are to good to comprehend,
you the best, thats easy for you to pretend,
Ill put you to the test type in yo sh!t and press send,
I know im new but thats ok,
we all gotsta start somewhere,
say ur prayers cause im a rappers nightmare,
too good to battle the average wannabe,
you can hate on me but dont ask me to stop its un-easy,
no-one can top me ill rhyme all day,
me and my dawgs we dont play we do this like everyday,
reading yo rhymes its like BAM,
as john madden would say and its a big scam,
it must take you hours to think that sh!t up
cause when it comes out its like when I p!ss in a cup,
please dont tell me not to bash on you,
"repulsemonkey" is that the best that you mom can do,
if i had nothin to say what would i say,
so i let it all out i could do this all day,
but i better be leavin to go polish my crown,
that i got for nockin the greatest mc from your throne ....DOWN!!!!
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Apr 28 '03
8:06 pm PDT
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Re: Re: IM THE GREATEST MC (Reply to this comment)
by forsaken_one
hm, Blank shadow, you spit pretty good, maybe we can battle one day...
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Apr 22 '03
6:57 am PDT
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IM THE GREATEST MC (Reply to this comment)
by nasistite
Yo watup im the killer of this rap game
Come with me young-ones and i'll take you to my hall of fame
Hate to say it blankshadow, but your rhymes suck dick
your rhymes dont even crack me up more than a turban-wearing Sikh
looking at your kindergarten rhymes make me sad
but when i c that you think your good it makes me mad
your rhymes dont diss anyone but yourself
i bet if i saw you i'd think your an elf
im nas in the makin
and my rhymes are truly bakin
but now since i got no time
and plus since you got some cheap rhymes
im gonna leave and take a bow
and when you read this blanshadow, i know you'll be like wow!!
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Apr 09 '03
8:26 pm PDT
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Re: Re: what the f--ck (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
whats f-cking wrong with you homie?
are you a f`@g or somthing do i really have to roast you now?
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Apr 04 '03
8:21 pm PST
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Re: what the f--ck (Reply to this comment)
by okiebug
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
YO...dis is a TEST!
thats sick but dont get an opset stomach heres some tums/
you do that so often you got sperm growin in ya gums/
how can yoy make mucho denaro/
with a f!cked up name foreverzero/
you aint cold just in last place/
if raping was a sport youd have no trophys in ya case/
your moms selling out like a trick/
who knows she could be like miss cartman b!tch got a d!ck/
i dont sweat it cause i dont pay for sh!t i hit that lic/
thats sick but dont get an opset stomach heres some tums/
you do that so often you got sperm growin in ya gums/
how can yoy make mucho denaro/
with a f!cked up name foreverzero/
you aint cold just in last place/
if raping was a sport youd have no trophys in ya case/
your moms selling out like a trick/
who knows she could be like miss cartman b!tch got a d!ck/
i dont sweat it cause i dont pay for sh!t i hit that lic/
thats sick but dont get an opset stomach heres some tums/
you do that so often you got sperm growin in ya gums/
how can yoy make mucho denaro/
with a f!cked up name foreverzero/
you aint cold just in last place/
if raping was a sport youd have no trophys in ya case/
your moms selling out like a trick/
who knows she could be like miss cartman b!tch got a d!ck/
i dont sweat it cause i dont pay for sh!t i hit that lic/
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Apr 03 '03
5:52 pm PST
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what do u think of this??? (Reply to this comment)
by ommis
Ima blindside on yo rhymes/
Kickin up the grinds all the time/
Ya'll nuttin but bozacks trying to rap/
You sound like crap, While I sound phat/
Your only fakin’ jacks u nothing but a hack/
I'll smack you back on the right track/
And if you come frontin’/
Be sure for some shuntin’/
And I’ll be huntin for your casing/
Blazing and pasting your head on the ledge/
Everybody listen to this and get my drift/
Absorb it swiftly/
make sure it sinks quickly/
And think about this rhyme next time a few lines comes to your mind/
whats up ya'll. ive only been writing ryhmes a lil while dont be too harsh on your critism. just send a comment back or add me on msn sir_simmo@hotmail.com l8a
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Mar 07 '03
6:20 pm PST
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what the f--ck (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
whats the matter puss!es
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Mar 07 '03
7:00 am PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: shadow show (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
killionare/
your rhymes are almost as fake as joe millionaire/
i'll play you out like a deck of cards in solitaire/
you think i play and dont do what i say/
i'll saran wrap ya moms and sell her on ebay/
take the cheapest bet and send her b!tch a-ss away/
for maleik you dick riding b!tch/
talking about "all you talk about is sucking dick"/
but yous the gay one talking about dads raping sh!t/
think about it man/
dont worry all you need is a fan/
like you on foreverzero/
but that sh!t makes me sick/
you on him as if you was a chick/
i'll cut you off right here/
just call me the grim reaper/
you always close to his nuts like a beaper/
your rhymes are worn out like ya sneakers/
ok for real iam done/
no cut that this sh!t just begun/
foreverzero aint sh!t without a gun/
maleik sucks his dick till he cums/
thats sick but dont get an opset stomach heres some tums/
you do that so often you got sperm growin in ya gums/
how can yoy make mucho denaro/
with a f!cked up name foreverzero/
you aint cold just in last place/
if raping was a sport youd have no trophys in ya case/
your moms selling out like a trick/
who knows she could be like miss cartman b!tch got a d!ck/
i dont sweat it cause i dont pay for sh!t i hit that lic/
i droped one watch ya toes
where you at ummm...the shadow show
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Feb 23 '03
6:26 am PST
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shadow show (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
tell ya mama to get off of my tip/
i have no time to give her my d!ck/
i'am gonna hold it and walk around stage/
and if u mess up i'll pull out my gage/
and unload the barrel and laugh/
cause i'am putting lead in your mother f-u-c-k!ng a-ss/
psychopathic but your mom is attrected/
when you read my sh!t you never get distracted/
so just sit down and let me lay it down/
one i dont play around/
so keep you sh!t to yourself/
remember i kill oneself/
so you think i'am funny/
i'll puch you so hard leave ya layin eggs like da easter bunny/
anyone buys your sh!t its a waist of money/
but now i gots to go/
remember where your at its the shadow show/
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Feb 22 '03
3:30 pm PST
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Re: Real MC's (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
f-u-c-k that yall is new school you little girls dont know sh!t about rapin yall is probibley only 13 yr old up on here so dont open your mouth sayin stupid a-ss sh!t lil punks cause every one that can acually rap is takin a brake like me so dont catch a quick one aight then..........
and dont worry i'll be back
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Feb 22 '03
7:07 am PST
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guess who (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
guess who guess what blankshadows back/
sending ya forebiden words threw ya telephone jack/
causing you the asthma, anxiety, panic attack/
i'am sick of you new f@gets/
with ya new comments/
like this dude mccadaver/
i'll smack you and slice ya with my dager/
tie ya moms up and drag her/
white people are dominate like neopolian/
mccadaver your probibley not even black your probibley samolian/
its not your skin its the way you act/
it shouldnt matter wheather your white or black/
so just stay still and take this pay back/
i didnt even waist my time wrighting a bunch of sh!t cause bunny, yay4faget and djsuckdicktoquick hasnt said sh!t like the puss!es ya are
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Feb 06 '03
4:36 pm PST
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4444 (Reply to this comment)
by eee
YOU SUCK, YOU ARE NOT FUNNY.
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Feb 06 '03
2:09 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Cadaver = Racist (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
that f_ckin sucked. caddaver is better.
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Feb 03 '03
8:26 am PST
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Re: Re: Cadaver = Racist (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
for example that catcher in the rye thing wuz crazy, but rhyming suck her and f_ck her isnt. see wut im sayin
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Feb 02 '03
2:39 pm PST
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Re: Re: Cadaver = Racist (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
caddaver-that was hot and the rhymes are good and make sense but theyre jus not that creative. hella people have said a lot of things. try sacrificing how much they make sense and put in more crzy rhymes.
_Joe
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Feb 02 '03
2:18 pm PST
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Re: Re: Cadaver = Racist (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
im from oakland, CA mothaf_cka
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Feb 02 '03
1:20 pm PST
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Re: Re: Cadaver = Racist (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
im from oakland, ca mothaf_cka
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Feb 02 '03
1:19 pm PST
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gess whos back, mothaf-ckas... (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
i was gone cuz i got better things to do w/ my time
then to sit around listenin to peeps stealin my rhymes
yall prolly get yo lyrics frum a wak hotlne
1-800 I CANT RAP
talkin to a white dude pretendin hes black
says he reppin the west, rhymin it w/ best --not creative
his rhymes are sedated
held down to the bottom and weighted
on the charts song no. 218
hickass dude living in a dairy queen
gess wut his name is
hes every person on this site
EVERY ONE OF YOU IS WHITE
holla back whiteys...
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Feb 01 '03
11:03 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: b!tch a-ss ya4jojo16 (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
rhar is aight tho.. at least he realizes how much better i am than flowspit and blank
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Jan 27 '03
3:08 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: b!tch a-ss ya4jojo16 (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
i don give a f_ck. it was a tite line i dont give a f_ck who it wuz towards u lil b!tch
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Jan 27 '03
3:06 pm PST
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come and battle to the death (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
freestyle if u got what it takes at
http://www.voy.com/cgi/addpost-131071
Battle To The Death
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Jan 26 '03
8:32 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: b!tch a-ss ya4jojo16 (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
dude he was dissin you the hole time dumb sh!t are u retarted or something
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Jan 26 '03
7:19 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: b!tch a-ss ya4jojo16 (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
hahaha.. i like that big pun sh!t!!!
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Jan 26 '03
12:26 pm PST
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b-still --------keep ya head up dog (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
b-still's tight you just need to write a bit more yamean bunny rabbit aint nuthin but a b!tch a wanna be eminem first off you cant be a preppy b!tch if you trying to be pheminem aight h o e
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Jan 26 '03
6:44 am PST
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Re: b!tch a-ss ya4jojo16 (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
there is no other way to say this. you suck. all your rhymesb are the same. and you rhyme the same word with itself. its not creative and u talk about having sex with little kids and stufhf i bet youve never had a girlfriend. ask b-rabbit or b-still or toquick or rharrington. im way better than you. my whole crew is better than anyone youve ever met
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Jan 25 '03
7:11 pm PST
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b!tch a-ss ya4jojo16 (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
have your mom suck my d!ck/
have two fingers stickin in your lil sisters cl!t/
an hour later i'am bustin on both they upper lips/
you get mad so i have to grab you around your neck with a tight grip/
crush you like a potato chip/
leave you stranded like a abandoned ship/
right after i give you a nice pistol whip/
after everything is said and did/
i'll smack you cause i aint afraid to hit a little kid/
leave you in a jar with no holes in the lid/
roll you down a hill to a busy street and say you slid/
lil b!tch quit talkin and start rapin lil f-a-g
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Jan 25 '03
5:50 pm PST
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Re: Re (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
old, sold, told u must be using a rhyme dictionary
tryin to appear scary
ur no more frightening than the tooth fairy
ambigiously gay like ace and gary
from snl
now it rings a bell
like a pestle and mortar
ur IQ's a little south of the border
every rhyme youve written isnt worth a f_ckin quarter
and flowspit rhymes are like a f_ckin tossed salad
sad like a ballad
no f_ckin talent
i make hits like a mallet
ur doin us a favor when all ur words are in one phrase
nobody has the time it would take hours and days
to read or u could jus forget it like i do--no patience
when every word is in the same goddam sentence
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Jan 25 '03
5:49 pm PST
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Re: b!tch a-ss b-rabbit (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
ur pretty f_ckin creative rhyming @ss with @ss. no f_cking talent!!!!
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Jan 25 '03
5:35 pm PST
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b!tch a-ss b-rabbit (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
you a hater plus a masterbaiter/
i'am about to evaperate your @ss so see u later/
your b!tch @ss aint nothin but a trader/
swapin d!cks like tables for a waiter/
but remember i'am greater/
you just a prep a wanna be thug but a skater/
check it you a moonwalk and i'am the deflater/
i'am having the wedding and your the cater/
i'am luke skywalker and your dark vader/
is that enough examples for your b!tch @ss/
yeah shut the f u c k up and pull eminems dick out your @ss/
this rhymes like shatterproof glass/
you'll never get threw it not even carbon monoxide gas/
i'am gonna make this fast/
just sit down and law low/
i'am gonna walk you threw like a picture show/
kinda like your mom in a strip show/
put down your pencil and just let it go/
or i'am running you over like snow in a overflow/
rippen your lyrics up right in front of you and throwing them out the window/
just remember i'am the one whos been writing since a long time ago/
yeah b!tch @ss fools yay4jojo16 and suckdickt00quick.i'am
coming back over and over again now whos sh!ts weak djtooqick b!tch @ss get popped
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Jan 25 '03
3:08 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: aight (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
id have to agree witcha man. pretty f-ckin good
i think its timefor yall to realize
i have the power to put u on a breathalizer
flowspit thinks hes the rappin master
his floes look like they got hit by a natural disaster
jumbled like a jubilee
he be bowin down dutifully
i make yall p!ss ya pants
u dont stand a chance
yall n!ggas soft like this is a romance
gotta go
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Jan 25 '03
12:44 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: aight (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
thats f_ckin horrible man... and thx rarrington. i got yo bak
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Jan 24 '03
4:24 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: aight (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
myabe u like flowspit but noone thinks the same
u posted 2 rhymes and u think ur in the game
u havent even passed the preliminaries
u oughta be caged up like canaries
yo rhymes dont fly
people look up to my lyrics lke they high up in the sky
the only thing that needs to 'b still'is yo f_ckin lips
yo rhymes should be covered like the sun in an eclipse
yo lyrics are pre-school talkin about 'poo'
we knew u were gay we just didnt have proof
guess what, now we do
toquicks on vacation im coverin his back
yo rhymes need a tune-up like a 1920 cadillac
not a f_ckin coupe de ville
jus like u, its 'still'
shud be in a junkyard along w/ flowspits lyrics
he made a tape for the record label but they wudnt hear it
they shud probably call u slowspit or sumthin worse
yo lyrics sound whiter than f_ckin fred durst
b-still is probably cryin because i just cursed
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Jan 22 '03
9:33 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: bunny is a b!tch (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
al yall nu folks are jus a bunch a punks
me toquick and blank are the originals like the brady bunch
this aint jus a hunch
blankshadow still sucks but at least he wuz here to start
yall new but not good, shouldve stayed in bed
me and toquick the best thing since sliced bread
yall lost in the rap game not ready to battle
like u in niagra falls w/ no f_ckin paddle
maybe i shud say viagra falls
yo rhymes are so ancient u have viagra in aerosol
f_ckin neo-nazis be shavin they head bald
real n!ggas be killin em like we playin playin dodge ball,
with boulders
help u get the weight off ur shoulders
no stress when ur deceased
torn up by a rapping beast
maybe u caught a nu disease
yall havent herd of this one yet
its the doctors best bet
dead of stupidatitis
took my skills and tried to bite it
even if u suck man, keep ur own style
i was the first one on this site to talk about 8 mile.
go back a couple pages mothaf_ckers ull see!!!
510 up in this motha
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Jan 22 '03
8:56 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: what (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
If any of yall know what song this lyric is from I'll give you tons of props.
"N!ggas run in yo house and tag their names on the stomach of your pregnant spouse."
I'll give a hint if noone knows...
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Jan 17 '03
7:43 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: what (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
if u gonna diss, back yo sh!t up
i put u to the test llike 'p!ssin in a cup'
the only time i talk sh!t is in my rhymes
try a little harder man, yo lyrics are confined
like stuck up in juvee like u commited a crime
u aint tuff tho u just paid the fine
like u playin monopoly w/ a get outta jail free card
u rap like a retard
oh wait, i havent heard one of ur floes
u dropped it but couldnt find it like yo fat @ss cant see yo toes
maybe me and toquik shud give u a tutorial on how to be hi-fi
so wut if b-still sucks at least he tries
u dont have the rights to criticize
take a lesson frum the wise
get yo punk a$$ back to southern cali
cuz i jus conquered you, ur just another tally,
on the wall of shame
yo a$$ is just another casualty of the rap game
510 baby now wut biatch!!
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Jan 17 '03
7:36 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: what? (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
that wuz tite.. props to yo brave brother in the war
wen i got 2 skool there were 3 papers on my desk
one wuz a map of iraaq w/ north south, east and west
one told the month and day
the other said in bold letters: blanksshadow is gay
toquick yo im in skool 2
unlike flowspit i can already tie my shoe'
8th grade man 13 old
same amount of years as money for which blanks house was sold
livin on the streets
the reason his raps suck is he cant afford a beat
talent is free im a prime example
my rhymes are too goddam hot to handle
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Jan 16 '03
5:34 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: step to me (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
dont yall wonder y blanks always talkin about big guns
this fool is probably compensatin for sumthin
tryin to act hard out of hickass minnesota
'im blankshadow and i suck dick, dont ya?'
stupid @ss dude reppin a place w/ population 11
the altitude makes u think ur in heaven
yo moms hed wuz purafect like the cats meow
the only explanation is its gotta be the puppy chow
wut a b!tch, last night she cryin and fussin
i kissed her lips and then moved up to her belly button
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Jan 16 '03
5:18 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
you think my sh!t makes you vomit/
no its the cum in your throat/
but hey man whatever floats your boat/
i aint gonna tell ya how to live life/
but get off me and dudes dice/
like big gay al said its just not nice/
suckin that sh!t down like vietnam water and rice/
how many times did i cap on you today lets see twice/
nigg@ with lice/
ants in your fro like a bugs life/
why are all you b!tches trying to hate on flowspit now thats all you are is hatters so dont speak if you dont wanna end up filling stupid
coming to you from minnesota st.paul beeeeaaaaatch
west side
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Jan 15 '03
8:17 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
f*ck you slave/
dont make me pull out my twelve gage/
put a bullet in your head and up on first page/
all my rhymes are based on rage/
your so young you dont even get paid minninum wage/
dont talk sh!t if you dont want to get hit/
dont speak your mind if you aint really got a nine/
look at your rhymes see you lying/
you dont do half the sh!t you said/
but yes its true when i told you me and your mom f*cked in your bed/
what you talkin about sticken to the beat/
do i tell you to pace yourself when beatin your meat/
so just remind seated in your seat/
dont even try to throw somthing with heat/
it aint gonna happin like a girl suckin your meat/
so try to dream about it it'll might happen in your sleep/
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Jan 15 '03
7:58 pm PST
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Re: Whity's turn (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
i didnt diss eminem
blankshadow stole rhymes from him in his old floes
read them and ull see wut i mean
he stole the beat u 2 deth w/ a feathe pillow line
and the take u on jery springer and beat ur @ss legally line
wut a b!tch!!
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Jan 14 '03
4:15 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: step to me (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
y u posted yo sh!t twice?
nobody likes it
i made yo mom grit her teeth and take it like em's style you bit
see nobody else on this site noes
about you bein eminem's ho
look back 2 pages yull c the rhymes he stole
f_ckin thief
talkin bout toquicks meat
u rhyme like u stioll have cold feet
dont try to step to me
i knocked u back on yo heels
my raps are the new real deal
like the police i cop a feel
yo @ss is wak like a bike w/ 5 wheels
nex time u see 8mile remember not to steal
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Jan 10 '03
7:43 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
i'am f*ucking your moms up in the back yard/
the only thing commin out her mouth is to hard to hard/
i'am telling her to be quiet dont wanna wake u up/
i'am giving her a facial the kind without the make up/
slips and slides/
no need for a rubber cause your moms tubes are tide/
cummin in the b*itch like a slippery water slide/
not stoping till i'am done and finished/
its probibley so lose now u can fall in it/
whats the matter djtooquick its been a week/
did reading your own rhymes put you to sleep/
well wake up and get on your feet/
get your hand out of your pants and off your meat/
lil f/a/g giving dudes head while your sittin in the passinger seat/
the games almost done i'am taking over your street/
lets look into your future all i here "hurry up and sweep"/
well i'am gona let u go so peace lil pipskweek/
djtooquick suckin d!ck too deep/
write back punk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!after school almost forgot lil kid
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Jan 10 '03
10:21 am PST
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Re: Re: Re: step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
i'am f*ucking your moms up in the back yard/
the only thing commin out her mouth is to hard to hard/
i'am telling her to be quiet dont wanna wake u up/
i'am giving her a facial the kind without the make up/
slips and slides/
no need for a rubber cause your moms tubes are tide/
cummin in the b*itch like a slippery water slide/
not stoping till i'am done and finished/
its probibley so lose now u can fall in it/
whats the matter djtooquick its been a week/
did reading your own rhymes put you to sleep/
well wake up and get on your feet/
get your hand out of your pants and off your meat/
lil f/a/g giving dudes head while your sittin in the passinger seat/
the games almost done i'am taking over your street/
lets look into your future all i here "hurry up and sweep"/
well i'am gona let u go so peace lil pipskweek/
djtooquick suckin d!ck too deep/
write back punk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!after school almost forgot lil kid
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Jan 10 '03
9:21 am PST
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Re: Re: step to me (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
where u @ djtoquick?
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Jan 09 '03
5:31 pm PST
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Re: Re: what? (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
when i came to the game yall wuz just comin out the womb
i bust up in yo room
upturn all the furniture
cuz my rhymes burned ur
stinkin @ss like rottin fish
ill serve ur @ss like a silver dish
if u step up yull end up missin
cuz im p!ssin; on those who dont bow down
dont look at me w/ a frown
end up crosseyed
i go mad like 'spy vs. spy'
last person who f_cked with me aint here to tell the tale
whooped him like anthrax u get in the mail
start a war against yo @ss like vietnam
yull end up in the bells of notre dame
get found dismembered by the hunch-back
talked too much smack
you aint goin to heaven
my rhymes flo over u like a 747
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Jan 09 '03
5:28 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
thanks man your sh!t was pretty dope too i hate binladin and those other b*itches you know
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Jan 06 '03
2:09 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
I be linchin/
i dont like you mom like sporty thieves no pigion/
if i released my real freestyle potentchal ya wouldnt know what to do/
like the first time yo mom blew/
i thought she was going to make it fall off/
for god sakes she told me to turn my head and cough/
oh sh!t i dissed your mom again/
not your dad what was you thinkin/
i'am comming from minnesota st.paul/
when i get arrive yall n*iggas better stand tall/
act like iam the coldest wigga ya ever saw/
cause i'am the one who be layin down the law/
the names blankshadow/
i have multiple styles when i battle/
hold on djtooquick let me get you a rattle/
ya4jojo16 you wine to much plus yous a tattle/
i tame both of you like a herd of cattle/
b*itch @ss n*iggas i'am commin from west side yall better bow down to the best side
mexican/white boy representin the west mother f*uckers still rhyming to the day i die
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Jan 05 '03
3:07 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
how come aint nobody postin, yall scared
its safe now yall can come out of there
i havent dropped my bombs... yet
come outa yo shelter dont fret
when i spit, my wurds shake the earth like a quake
yo rhymes are like chappelle and guillermo--half-baked
i flow like niagra falls while yo @ss is rubbin
viagra pills on yo balls
u might think this order is too tall
tryin to step to me will only lead 2 ur downfall
u gonna be gone like money spent at the mall
girls tell u like usher, u dont have to call
nobody like u man, no friends, jus a loner
the only girls u get stand on the corner
u aint never gettin a life, or a wife
maybe the thong u wearin is jus tied to tight.
510 straight west side up in this mother-f_ckah
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Jan 03 '03
4:39 pm PST
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Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
f*uck you dog your s*hit dont even ever make sence lil b*tch wiped on eminems nuts get over it you cant be him and i never said i f*cked djtooquicks dad something must be on your mind you lil f@get why dont you take time on your rhymes just a lilttle bit of time and repeat them to yourself before u make yorself look like a fool.
im out lets hear what djtooquick gots to say so i can battle someone who some what know whats they doin beatch nnnnnigggaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Dec 29 '02
7:35 pm PST
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Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
i forgot to say straight 510 babay at the end
all yall @sses are gone like money i spent
im out
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Dec 29 '02
5:50 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
i floe over yall like liquid viscosity
cuz im tha boss of these
hardcore lyrics that bust cops like bacon
blankshadow is wak his sh!t is taken
he aint reppin a city i keep the critics buzy
i blast off like caps from drinks that are fizzy
rap so fast leave listeners dizzy
blankshadow ask out gurlz they be like 'u gotta be kiddin me'
as a last resort he goes to his mother
too bad shes already got another
yup thats his dad, treated him really bad
now hes f_cked up talkin bout f_ckin toquicks dad
u jus a lil kid blank not a man
you just a cracker happy like doin the can-can
u need to go home to yo one single fan
--yourself, f_cked up like u fell off the top shelf
hit yo head on the floor
u @ss cant even spell yo name any more
f_ckin illiterate not pimpin even a lil bit
i bet yo virgin eyes have never seen a cl!t
you had a bad day,blank,then got lit
i step on yo rhymes like a boot in sh!t
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Dec 29 '02
5:46 pm PST
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try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
whut up now
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Dec 29 '02
12:02 pm PST
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Re: smoking weed (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
i jus gotta say that is the worst f_ckin floe ever
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Dec 29 '02
11:14 am PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
Blankshadow on epinions/
holdin it down for milions./
have your mom suck my d*ick till she vomits/
make djtooquick feel stupid and delete his coment/
your s*hits wak i guess thats why i'am here to stomp it/
i'll be like nepolien take over your rhymes and conchor it/
try to step to me right well you failed like being takin to jail with no bail livin in hell next to satin well/
whatcha expect n*igga how you gonna tell your boys you just got beat by a wigga/
feeling stupid and scratching your head like you just jumped in a lake with a jigga/
i'am white and you a n*igga no differnce just skin dont make me f*uck you up over and over again/
speaking of jail thats where i'am going after sendind you antrax in the mail/
sitin in a cell next to binladin like damn now i know why he done it/
you a lil punk i'll drown you with one dunk/
fill your body with alcohol and say i found u drunk/
yeah you little hoe havin your mom suck me quick like its time to go.
oh s*hit west side till i dizei
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Dec 29 '02
8:39 am PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
can a playa get some help from someone around here instead of being ganged up on by f@gs like you peoples ya4jojo16 & butt buddy djtooquick/
going 90 towards a cliff in a blazer/
draging you from behind hop out and shock ya with a tazer/
hear about it that night on the news that you were the worlds biggest hater/
you werent just faded you were hated/
erased from minds like sir mix alot outdated/
i aint a hater nut i have to retaleate your a@@ like your mom i caught her/
you guys aint s*hit you'll evaperate like water/
knock up your moms and have a new step son and a baby daughter/
i'am hotter its me making yall evaperate like water/
i'am like a butcher cause it looks like you just got slaughtered/
makes you think why did you even bother?/
representing minnesota holding it down for st.paul & minneapolis a.k.a murderapolis
mother fauckos west side in this b*itch
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Dec 28 '02
4:42 pm PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by blankshadow
i'am like bugs bunny a little stinker/
but sorry man i cant help you with your rhymes i'am not a mirackle maker/
your s*hits not compatible its faker/
my s*hits like an anchor its here to stay/
so pack your s*hit and stay off this link from today/
yeah go on a vacation for a while and lick eminems n*uts to get lyrics off 8 mile/
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you d*ick riding b*itch
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Dec 28 '02
4:28 pm PST
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smoking weed (Reply to this comment)
by twistedeminem
It's been so long
that i toked from a bong
i started off wit one toke
smoked some weed and snorted coke
spent my money now i'm broke
and at night i start to choke
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Dec 28 '02
10:34 am PST
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: try to step to me (Reply to this comment)
by yay4jojo16
my bad. i posted my pimpin flow twice.
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Dec 27 '02
8:38 pm PST
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