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More "I" and less "you" (Reply to this comment)
by pvreditor,  in Cars & Motorsports
You have good information in this review but its all a bit vague regarding your driving experience with this car. I'd like to see less third-person (things like, "You will find peppy performance") and more first-person ("I thought the performance was very peppy.")
How exactly did you come to drive this car? Do you own it? Is it a friend's? Did you do a test drive? This is not critical to the review but it will mitigate some of the third-person explanation.
If you update this review, please let me know by e-mail with the link (URL) and I will re-rate.
--Bob
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Mar 30 '04
6:11 am PST
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what about the E and the O ? (Reply to this comment)
by njcruiser04
updated.. enjoy
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Mar 30 '04
7:54 am PST
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