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VH..... (Reply to this comment)
by Dunkjam
Hey Mike, how could I rate you anything but VH when you are from Brooklyn? My only granddaughter is named Brooklyn! Have a great weekend. Eva
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Aug 03 '01
1:32 pm PDT
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Re: comfortability?????!!!!!! (Reply to this comment)
by mike24
Oh well, you can take the boy out of Brooklyn but......
Thank and I appreciate your comment.
mike24
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Aug 02 '01
12:31 pm PDT
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comfortability?????!!!!!! (Reply to this comment)
by jankp
Um, try just comfort? Heehee. Your last-minute correction led to your only stilted language. You did great. Your cat sounds like fun.
Jan
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Aug 02 '01
11:24 am PDT
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Re: Nice+E-Priming! (Reply to this comment)
by mike24
Thanks for the comment, however, what few
brain cells I had left are now GONE !
Oooops - should say "the few brain cells
that remained have left the building"
It was fun !
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Aug 02 '01
7:15 am PDT
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Nice E-Priming! (Reply to this comment)
by proeditor
Thanks for taking the challenge -- hope you didn't lose too many brain cells! I like the fact that you still wrote in clear English -- when some people write in E-Prime, their writing gets too stilted.
I have the Sherpa and used it once to fly with my 17-pound Jack Russell Terrier. I have the large size and still found it a bit small for the dog, but a bit big to get under the seat. Also, though it is reinforced well, it still tended to cave in when we carried the dog in it. At least it allowed us to bring our precious family member with us to visit grandma in Florida!
thanks again for participating in my write-off.
Karen
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Aug 02 '01
6:06 am PDT
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Good Job! (Reply to this comment)
by LEDOMAINE
Nice going, Mike. This e-prime business even makes reviews on pet products sound great, huh? :) Didn't find any errors, so you did good. Thanks!
Rouchelle
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Aug 01 '01
7:21 pm PDT
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Re: Great+review... (Reply to this comment)
by mike24
Hey man, enjoy your trip. I haven't been to
Hawaii in many, many years but still love
it til this day. (and if your a typical, smart, New Yorker, you can put together tons of reviews.....) all kidding aside - have a
great time and ENJOY !
mike24
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Aug 01 '01
6:00 pm PDT
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Great review... (Reply to this comment)
by roynyr
As always, nice stuff.
I won't need this though on my trip tommorrow to Hawaii as I don't have a pet but it was a great review.
Later,
roynyr
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Aug 01 '01
5:30 pm PDT
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Re: Way+to+go.+Ya+done+good! (Reply to this comment)
by mike24
Thanks Nick & I know the area well.
Spent a lot of time at the old
Brooklyn Fox and Paramount theaters.
Again - Happy Birthday & many more to come !
mike24
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Aug 01 '01
4:37 pm PDT
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Re: A+Excellent+Reponse+To+The+Challenge (Reply to this comment)
by mike24
Good catch - I'll have to take care of
it....
thanks
mike24
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Aug 01 '01
4:35 pm PDT
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A Excellent Reponse To The Challenge (Reply to this comment)
by purplewiz
And also an excellent review of the product! I salute those who sallied forth into battle against the forbidden verb :-).
However, I did discover one use of it during my read - towards the end, you included the sentence:
"Your pet will be comfortable and you CAN relax a little more knowing this."
I believe "will be" violates the e prime directive :-).
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Aug 01 '01
3:09 pm PDT
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Way to go. Ya done good! (Reply to this comment)
by NFP
I was going to do a review of Frank Sinatra's "Strangers in the NIght" for the E-prime write-off, but then I realized I wouldn't be able to write "Doo-be-doo-be-doo."
Thanks for the good wishes. Being 50 doesn't hurt....yet.
From Brooklyn, eh? We used to live in Fort Greene on Clinton Ave. at De Kalb about four blocks east of Pratt Institute.
cheers,
nick
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Aug 01 '01
7:52 am PDT
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Nice job in making the writing LOOK easy! (Reply to this comment)
by lynnzop
And congratulations on taking proeditor's challenge! I was too chicken to try it myself.
Good content on how to choose the product as well!
Lynn
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Aug 01 '01
6:58 am PDT
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