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A Well-Reasoned Psychological Deconstruction of Anger and its Role in My Unfinished Projects (A Haiku)
by repulsemonkey | Jun 09 '02
Deep, buddy. Really really deep.

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Emergency Haikus!! (Reply to this comment)
by DrJ008
Listen, I love a good haikudo as much as the next bloke, but helpful? (lol)...

It just kills me that the VH-NH system is used on poetry...

"Yeah, monkey, I liked it a lot, it just didn't help me solve any of my everyday poetry problems...wait!...NH!!!!"

Regards,

Roberto Frosty
Jul 17 '02
7:37 am PDT

Re: Thank You (Reply to this comment)
by repulsemonkey
...and your hotness in turn touched me in all the warm places.

Must

take

shower



monkey
Jun 16 '02
9:31 pm PDT

Re: Arm and Hammer; or Was it a Sickle? (Reply to this comment)
by repulsemonkey
st,

the piece divulges its own deeper meaning, dontcha think? Wheels within wheels, Jackson, wheels within wheels.

monkey
Jun 16 '02
9:30 pm PDT

Re: HOMEBOY HAIKU (Reply to this comment)
by repulsemonkey
Dude,

You should post this shit. Your comments are easily the funniest I've ever read.

monkey
Jun 16 '02
9:28 pm PDT

Re: lol (Reply to this comment)
by repulsemonkey
Apparently it was just HTML trickery. That didn't stop me from following suit, tho.

monkey
Jun 16 '02
9:23 pm PDT

Ode to Monkey, Zen Style (Reply to this comment)
by Bijou
Sexy Simian
Slick like rain on jet tarmac
Tastes just like chicken


...or something like that.

It's back to Haiku school for The Mistress.

Bijou
Jun 15 '02
3:36 pm PDT

Whaaa (Reply to this comment)
by grez
This was happy. And fun.

And I'm still a sexy mother******.

Good lovin' to the monkey...

Bwuuhahahahha...

Grez
Jun 14 '02
2:00 pm PDT

Thank You (Reply to this comment)
by nifer

That made me so hot.

xoxo ~ jennifer
Jun 13 '02
4:31 pm PDT

Thank You (Reply to this comment)
by nifer

That made me so hot.

xoxo ~ jennifer
Jun 13 '02
4:31 pm PDT

Arm and Hammer; or Was it a Sickle? (Reply to this comment)
by suspecterrain
The intent of the 100 word minimum is to urge the writer to divulge the "secret meaning' and/or intent of each piece. I'll just bet you that most hockey fans on the EPs staff wear those old-school CCCP jerseys since they're all so hardcore (i.e. hard-ons).

Everything and Nothing at All
Jun 11 '02
2:01 pm PDT

I think.... (Reply to this comment)
by jsaunt
...that what really made your Haiku was the Bottom Line! (What a bunch of morons.)

Leslie/j'sfsaunt
Jun 11 '02
6:49 am PDT

HOMEBOY HAIKU (Reply to this comment)
by brotherman
ghetto a$$ wedding
cuz married baby-mama
slept with fine bridesmaid


her butt was real big
reception was in basement
with a extra room.

party was real nuts
playing loud a$$ trick daddy
aint nobody noticed.

she could move her hips.
best twenty minutes of week.
nice breastses too

i'll give them six months
his a$$ is ignint as hell
got her number though.




always a pleasure Mr brown, always a pleasure
Jun 10 '02
2:20 am PDT

Haikus are funny (Reply to this comment)
by AggieBrett
They bring a smile to my face
but never for long
.
.
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B
Jun 09 '02
7:45 pm PDT

Oh, geez... (Reply to this comment)
by vania
You're too funny!

v.

PS. I hate haikus, too.
Jun 09 '02
7:21 pm PDT

lol (Reply to this comment)
by jnbmoore
Funny I saw an Haiku earlier today that had only three lines and it got published so I thought that bug was fixed.

Guess maybe the sunspots were just in the correct order in the sky

Bridgette
Jun 09 '02
4:41 pm PDT