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darn good, dwight! (Reply to this comment)
by jankp
I did enjoy this and think you should try sending it out. The only thing I would tighten up is the beginning of the middle part, the descriptions of the men are distracting to me. I guess I think less description is more and prefer to show character through dialogue rather than telling readers about it. Which you do, of course, eventually. It's a great story. Thanks for sharing it and good luck!! :-)
Jan
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Jul 17 '02
5:19 pm PDT
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Re: Out-Friggin-standing, my friend! (Reply to this comment)
by counsel
Thanks, Marcy - there's no one to "farm" it for me, so the answer's no.
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Jun 18 '02
11:56 am PDT
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Re: Excellent story (Reply to this comment)
by counsel
Thanks. From someone with the endurance to write her own novel, that's a real complement. Hope to see you again soon.
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Jun 17 '02
4:21 pm PDT
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Re: Can we say...graphic? (Reply to this comment)
by counsel
Oh, I toned it down for the faint-hearted. A little bit, anyway.
Thanks for the read; hope you stop by more often.
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Jun 17 '02
4:20 pm PDT
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Excellent story (Reply to this comment)
by ebolles
I really enjoyed reading this - great hook and ending.
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Jun 17 '02
2:47 pm PDT
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