reconciliation

Jun 28 '02    Write an essay on this topic.


The Bottom Line I wrote this after an argument with someone ... use your red pens sparingly.

awaiting the quiver
and crumble, we fumble
for redemption
under blankets
of warmth and shadow

adrift
in a scarlet sea,
we sift through the impact
of words
and assumptions

and caught in a blank
expression, she stands
before the whispers,
staring through the aftermath
and breaking me apart

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Apparently, this poem doesn't have enough words to be submitted without some sort of commentary about how many words it has. And, apparently the commentary about the poem's length has to be really rather longer than I would have made it otherwise. What's more, despite working in the employ of Epinions, I seem to have forgotten just how many words are required before a review can be submitted. Hopefully, this is enough.

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