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In the beginning - the boot!
by SMITHSWOODSIDE | Aug 03 '02
A short true story - with a twist!

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Long time no read! (Reply to this comment)
by miridunn
You are a wonderful story teller -- just as I remembered you when I first read you a few years ago and added you to my trust list. I have not been around for a while. Not since the Big Site Change, actually. I still don't find it as appealing as it once was.

Anyway, you're story does indeed have a twist! I was expecting bones to be discovered....a murder mystery! Nonetheless, as a history buff, and familiar mostly with Europe, I was glad to read about Australia. I had forgotten how young she is!

And what a wonderful find! You must have been honoured for your company to be chosen to restore that little piece of history!
Jun 23 '04
7:39 pm PDT

I found this after reading... (Reply to this comment)
by jenb123
...Granniemose's version. Well done, and thanks for inspiring Granniemose to write her version.

~Jen
Sep 05 '02
7:23 am PDT

Re: Dunno as I'd (Reply to this comment)
by SMITHSWOODSIDE
Now that would be something NOT to see!

thanks George

Peter :)
Aug 07 '02
1:55 pm PDT

Re: "Have a drink on Harry?" Very good, Peter..... (Reply to this comment)
by SMITHSWOODSIDE
Oh Nick lol

thanks mate

Peter :)
Aug 07 '02
1:54 pm PDT

Dunno as I'd (Reply to this comment)
by George_Chabot
wanna have a drink on ole Harry as you tell it! Only in Ostraya! Well, actually we have a similar water problem in New Orleans where the dead rise from the grave every time there's a flood. :o

Great job, as always, mate!
Aug 06 '02
3:12 pm PDT

"Have a drink on Harry?" Very good, Peter..... (Reply to this comment)
by NFP
...very good. I got a big boot of that line.

cheers,

nick
Aug 06 '02
2:22 pm PDT

Re: So interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by SMITHSWOODSIDE
Thanks Annie

So many interesting stories of earlier times!

thanks again

Peter
Aug 05 '02
1:45 pm PDT

Re: My Comment Isn't Here (Reply to this comment)
by SMITHSWOODSIDE
Virginia

Funny I thought you would be at least early on the scene but the old eps computer plays funny games sometimes :)

It is a little girl’s boot (probably around 7 years old) and the cause of death may have been TB – but that was never recorded. Of course not even germs had been discovered so she could have died of anything – maybe too much “drinking on Harry” (sorry Dede)

She was one of about 7 kids and the boot survived only thanks to being fully encased in the foundation compound of that era – pre concrete.

It would make a good novel!!! – hop to it Virginnia !! Then your trip here can be tax deductible lol You would be in your element mixing it with all the senior citizens – no doubt you would find out more than I can! They are a good mob actually, but most are much older …….er……..more senior than you :)

Thanks Virginia

Peter :)

Aug 05 '02
1:43 pm PDT

So interesting... (Reply to this comment)
by annecal
I learned a lot reading this, very sad, as well.

The part about the water reminded me of the graveyard in St. Augustine- when the Europeans settled here, and began to bury their dead, they didn't take into account the flooding. During the first major rain of the year there were coffins floating down Main Street. Needless to say, the cemetary is now all above-ground.

Annie
Aug 05 '02
6:58 am PDT

Re: Peter, (Reply to this comment)
by SMITHSWOODSIDE
Getting there thanks Suzanne

ooohhh sounds like talking to my wife - no offence (same name)

thanks

Peter :)
Aug 05 '02
6:35 am PDT

My Comment Isn't Here (Reply to this comment)
by Granniemose
I don't know why..I was probably the first one here, since it was one of those no sleep nights and it come on before I retired. Well, anyway, I said that it was a fantastic review. It really tickled the imagination, and I wondered about the family - was the boot for a little girl or a little boy. What caused the child's death? Were there other children. I thought of how that little boot survived all of those years, and what a great thing it is that you and the staff in the shoe store were able to bring it back to life. It would make a super novel. Great job, Peter.

Virginia
Aug 05 '02
6:28 am PDT

Re: Re: ! (Reply to this comment)
by dedemw
You know, I was never that close with Harry
: )
Aug 05 '02
4:46 am PDT

Re: How creative (Reply to this comment)
by SMITHSWOODSIDE
No sightings that I know of Patti - and I don't want to know :)

thanks

Peter
Aug 05 '02
2:54 am PDT

Re: ! (Reply to this comment)
by SMITHSWOODSIDE
What Dede? You don't like the idea of having a drink on Harry! :)

thanks

Peter
Aug 05 '02
2:53 am PDT

Re: ~ (Reply to this comment)
by SMITHSWOODSIDE
Very kind Melissa

thanks

Peter
Aug 05 '02
2:53 am PDT

Peter, (Reply to this comment)
by Mom2TyZick
nice review, I enjoyed the read! Hope you are feeling better these days!

Suzanne
Aug 04 '02
6:46 pm PDT

How creative (Reply to this comment)
by AliventiAsylum
of that family! Now, if there's been a few sightings in that house of a little girl wandering around going "where are my boots..."

Patti
Aug 04 '02
4:12 am PDT

! (Reply to this comment)
by dedemw
Wow- This one kind of creeped me out. It was interesting enough for me to forgive you for that though.
&
Major ewwwwwww for this
"They soon realised that the decaying bodies in the cemetery were polluting the underground water supply"

Great stuff as always


Aug 03 '02
7:46 pm PDT