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A Window Seat
by lemon_lime | Aug 28 '02
this is part one of a short story. if enough people seem to care, i'll post the second (and final) part....but either way, criticism is welcome, encouraged and needed.Return to opinion
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by dedemw
Very descriptive- I can vision it all
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Off to read Part 2!
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Sep 13 '02
7:20 pm PDT
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where the rest (Reply to this comment)
by bethmarsh
WHeres is the rest how does it end. You are a excellent writer. You are able to put so much detail and fellings in to your writing. You have that abilty of making your readers not wanting to put it done . keep up the good job. can not wait for more
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Sep 03 '02
5:26 pm PDT
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I'm hooked (Reply to this comment)
by artbyjude
More, more!...totally drawn in , even though I did not want to be, I resisted it, knowing that if I wasn't careful I'd be blinded by tears. And just about that time, you skillfully drew me away...into another story. Beautifully written. but I want to read the rest awfully bad now...!!! Jude
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Aug 31 '02
10:44 am PDT
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Re: I have one question (Reply to this comment)
by lemon_lime
:)
yep, totally, 100%. just ask my wife! lol
is that a compliment or not though?
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Aug 29 '02
11:54 pm PDT
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I have one question (Reply to this comment)
by jankp
Are you really of the male persuasion????
Jan :-)
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Aug 29 '02
10:07 pm PDT
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wonderful (Reply to this comment)
by caradawn
You are quite a writer! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you for your welcome, by the way. I didn't expect such a good reaction to my opinion or such a good welcome. Thanks again Cara
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Aug 29 '02
10:09 am PDT
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