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Window Seat (part two)
by lemon_lime | Sep 03 '02
the conclusion to a short story that, for the record, all of 3 people requested to hear. still, even an audience of one is flattering. comments? critiques?

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Re: Shaken (Reply to this comment)
by lemon_lime
thank you for the kind words jude. you are more than welcome to send it to any one you want!

take care,
chad.
Sep 18 '02
9:26 am PDT

Shaken (Reply to this comment)
by artbyjude
And stirred...a moving story, told with a sensitivity that it is hard to imagine is pure fiction. Such a sense of aloneness, and waiting for the sun to come up...maybe only those of us who have been there know how that feels. These people are very real Chad. You have a gift. The dialog-I can almost hear it spoken. It really is too good for this site, you know. So I take back what I said about leaving it up for awhile...we don't deserve it....on the other hand..I'd like to send it to at least one person I know to read. Thanks for sharing it with us. Jude
Sep 17 '02
11:57 pm PDT

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by dedemw
So - there has to be a Part 3....
right?

I am all caught up in the drama now. Have to know what happens.

Sep 13 '02
7:26 pm PDT