Your eyes saw me

Sep 06 '02    Write an essay on this topic.


The Bottom Line A little poem written for my beautiful wife.




When I first met you
I was mesmerized...
Like in a lucid dream
your eyes saw me.


I gave you all I could
you gave me so much more
I know now what a fool I was
but you knew better;
your eyes saw me.


The times we laughed,
the times we cried
through it all I still wonder,
am I deserving of your gaze?
Your eyes saw me.


I needed space,
I needed time,
you waited patiently
your eyes saw me.


Through our struggles we find strength,
on the wings of our hopes
we can fly far away...
I truly am lucky
your eyes saw me.

Mine saw you too.



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