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by tombarnes
A tight and organized piece of fiction. I hope there's more where this came from. I am going to look now. Tom Barnes
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Dec 21 '02
6:22 am PST
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by SurgRN911
Wow, this is awesome. I really enjoyed it. Very talented writer, thanks for sharing.
Di
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Oct 18 '02
6:58 pm PDT
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by Granniemose
Horswhisper, this is a terrific story. I was on the edge of my seat. I am glad the two druggies did not kill you. Perhaps the mountains did bring out the best in them - although their best was really bad. I do think this story should be published. You have talents of many colors - a terrific writer, a musician, a counselor, a killer of ants :). The ant thing is at least one thing we have in common. I kill the pesky things with anything I have available, and with no regrets at all.
Well, anyway, I truly thank you from the bottom of my heart for bringing out this great story for my birthday bash. It is appreciated more then you know. (Yes, I can handle the language. I have heard much worse. In fact, the words bounce around inside the subconscious looking for a time when I am frustrated so they can slip out and make me look evil. The only solution is to think happy so they can't get away. Hopefully the words will die from malnutrition.)
Virginia
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Oct 18 '02
11:37 am PDT
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Powerful , riveting story (Reply to this comment)
by artbyjude
I literally held my breath as I read it. (Thanks to you, I am now a shade of blue, since I am not a speed reader)...What a beautifully written story! Glad the heroes were the little old ladies. It is amazing to think that some things stay the same after all, sometimes.
I am in such awe of the power of your words that I really can't think of anything more to say than thank you for this, from the bottom of my heart! Jude
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Oct 18 '02
11:34 am PDT
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