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unaccustomed emotional decay
by firstcontact21 | Oct 06 '02
Another older poem, this one with questionable language: so reader beware! Thanks Epinions, for adding these categories.

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by dedemw
Of course the whole poem is great- but the first paragraph! Oh yeah!
Digging it
: )

Oct 08 '02
6:24 pm PDT

Re: Fly away (Reply to this comment)
by firstcontact21
often in poetry you can omit somethings and let the reader just assume that it has been flung forward and let go of. But I took your suggestion and expanded that section, as well as a few others in the poem.

Cheers,

- Steve =)

Oct 08 '02
9:03 am PDT

Fly away (Reply to this comment)
by glomarrone
Hi,

To fly one has to let go!

Gloria

Oct 08 '02
6:09 am PDT

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