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Outstanding! (Reply to this comment)
by bluehawq
Creative and very unexpected. I loved it! Oh yeah.... Jack will hang his own self in the end. Don't you think?
Hugs!
Audrey
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Nov 03 '02
6:41 pm PST
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re: solution? (Reply to this comment)
by cntaur5
Keep it a secret, everyone knows he's a jerk, even your best friend.
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Oct 27 '02
10:01 am PST
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Cool! (Reply to this comment)
by AliventiAsylum
I always thought I might be psychic. This confirms it.
No, I didn't say "psycho"....
Nice job, I really enjoyed it.
Patti
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Oct 25 '02
5:43 am PDT
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Re: Re: Just a thought: (Reply to this comment)
by HJS33
This was really wild Amy. I enjoyed it!
:)
Heidi
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Oct 24 '02
6:38 pm PDT
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Re: Just a thought: (Reply to this comment)
by amykhar
It's a thought. However, I seem to be having trouble interacting with objects in the real world. I am not sure that I could fire a gun.
Amy
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Oct 24 '02
11:52 am PDT
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Wow, Amy! (Reply to this comment)
by theworm
That was great! You sure took me by surprise! What a neat idea - this is well written. I think you can take this idea and run with it. I'ld love to read more!
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Oct 24 '02
10:02 am PDT
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Just a thought: (Reply to this comment)
by BrendaMetcalf
You can't be seen, why not get a gun and blow Jack's head off. You won't be prosecuted because you can't be found...Yea, Jack is a jerk and deserves the bullet.
Brenda
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Oct 24 '02
3:51 am PDT
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Tell her he's gay... (Reply to this comment)
by gmann6900
And late in the evening, when all have gone to bed, he lets his hair down and Jack becomes Jill - In full corset, garters and fishnet stockings. Well, maybe not - For some that can be a turnon.
Great piece!
gmann6900
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Oct 23 '02
11:46 pm PDT
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I see dead people!! (Reply to this comment)
by Redlass
Or at least, I see dead people's words!
I think I need a drink before I can comment.
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Oct 23 '02
8:44 pm PDT
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