fists pound the air

Nov 17 '02 (Updated Jan 11 '04)    Write an essay on this topic.


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The Bottom Line This is a reworking of the end of two one two and four, which was originally a really long poem. Thanks Epinions for adding these categories!

and slowly a door
swings out and open
toward you

as darkness spills up
and floods the very
presence of your being

and it's as if you
could just dip deep down
into this vastness
with the simple cup of
your bare hand
to bring it up to
your sweet soft lips
and stolid tongue
to just gently sip
and taste at it for
a only little while

and some drums fade in
and out of some strength
of light that escapes
with the darkness as
that door creaks open

it's a light that fades through
a rainbow of red yellow green
orange lavender peach and blue

and it's like standing on the precipice
of memory or crying out at the edge of oblivion

where sheltered hearts shatter
and sprinkle slowly down
into burned and scared hillsides

(c) November 17, 2002, Steven H. Lee


what the darkness doesn't know...

You like me, don't you?
Exponential Silences
aspiration lost
i want you to describe
An Original Motion Picture Soundtrack
reflections (3 poems)
Untitled No. 1, 2 & 3
Sara
the circus is coming to town
unacustomed emotional decay
memory fragments puzzles and more
eight headed poems
Last Night
warm wind
a new beginning
i just wanted to let you know
sympathetic memory
Untitled No. 13
Untilted No. 14 & 15
just let
two one two and four
fists pound the air
drunk stumble and lag
love lust music




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