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by AinsleyJo
Amazing!!!
Even before reading your comment, I was going to say the same thing: That I was now hooked and on my way to the next chapter!!!
I'm Outta Here!
AJ :o)
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Feb 04 '03
1:57 pm PST
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by dedemw
The development of the characters have me hooked. On to the next...
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Jan 16 '03
5:41 pm PST
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I found a group (Reply to this comment)
by jo.com
at my local library. It is a small group of people writing novels. You might want to check around to see if there is something like that your way. This is really good, imo..for whatever that's worth. But a group really helps. I do very little fiction, but would love to if I had time! jo
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Jan 08 '03
2:44 pm PST
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Al Bore? (Reply to this comment)
by jankp
I take offense! Just kidding. Not boring, though. Sad about Supreme Court. This was quite detailed and slow going for me. Maybe it's the lack of paragraphs, but hard to read without skimming. :-)
Night...Jan
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Jan 08 '03
1:47 am PST
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by millinocket
Nicely drawn, honest characters, something that's hard to do in a short story. You give a good sense of these people in this short piece. Looking forward to the rest of it.
Sue
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Jan 07 '03
9:38 pm PST
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