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Emotional Structures (Working Title): Chapter 3
by DavidMac | Jan 08 '03
The third chapter. One more to go after this.

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Childhood Innocence (Reply to this comment)
by AinsleyJo
This is why we need to become like little children in order to truly see the Kingdom Of God!!!

Erica shows us what the world COULD be like, if only more people saw the world through the eyes of a child.

Karen represents the kind of mindset that causes hatred to spread.

Johanna represents the person who wants to do and think what's right but remains in that safety net known as the status quo with her true thoughts locked inside of her.

Need to get something else read in real life, but I'll be anxious to get back and continue reading very soon!

Laters!
AJ :o)
Feb 04 '03
3:58 pm PST

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by dedemw
I know you were concerned about the reaction you would get with these, but you capture it all perfectly. The sadness and the rage that comes later.

Though there are many arguments that can be made against the statements made by the characters, you reflect what many said or heard others say. The reactions of your characters are true to life sad or not.


Very nice-
I am off to ch. 4
: )
Jan 17 '03
12:14 pm PST

Again well done (Reply to this comment)
by jo.com
I enjoyed reading these. jo
Jan 09 '03
6:57 am PST
   

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