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Lure
by grez | Feb 18 '03
The call has remained unchanged over the eons...only the methodology and tools have evolved...

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This was really good! (Reply to this comment)
by toospoiled
I really enjoyed this piece, Mike!

Hugs,
Karen
Feb 14 '04
8:30 am PST

Re: Wow. (Reply to this comment)
by grez
Brian,

Thanks man. It means a lot when someone genuinely enjoys any of my work. If you get bored, I've got a few more posted on Epinions as well...there are links to 'em on my profile.

Thanks again for the read.

Cheers,

Mike
Mar 31 '03
9:33 am PST

Wow. (Reply to this comment)
by voxpoptart
I suspect poems and songs here (including mine) tend to get rated generously: Very Helpful meaning Very Good meaning Much Better Than Most Random Schmucks Could Do For Free. Nothing wrong with that, either, except then i want to point out that when i see a poem someone oughtta pay good money for, i hafta leave a comment to say so. Genuinely moving there, stranger.

-Brian
Mar 29 '03
9:28 am PST

Re: "when words would not suffice....." (Reply to this comment)
by 29th_Candidate

I dig the prose, grez!

Welcome back, money...

--29th
Mar 06 '03
8:24 am PST

Re: Well done, Grez! (Reply to this comment)
by grez
Mother! It's good to hear from you, man. I'm glad that you like this one...I haven't written much poetry lately, as all of my creative efforts have been going into my band. But, alas, we are having some issues with our lead vocalist/rhythm guitarist, so in a month or two that could be kaput. If that happens, the lead guitarist and I may start our own new project, but we'll just have to see...

...and now I am rambling again (par usual). All I really meant to say was "thanks." So...

Thanks.

Grez
Feb 19 '03
7:59 am PST

Re: "when words would not suffice....." (Reply to this comment)
by grez
Connie,

Hey, thanks for the compliment and the read...I'm glad you were able to look past my rambunctious exterior; everyone else has to as well. ;-)

Cheers,

Mike
Feb 19 '03
7:55 am PST

Well done, Grez! (Reply to this comment)
by mothermeatloaf
Killer poem, dude.

Well done with solid imagery and more importantly, genuine emotion.

High quality as always!

~Mother
Feb 19 '03
6:38 am PST

"when words would not suffice....." (Reply to this comment)
by iwannagrowup2b
Hey,
I came over to check you out 'cause you stopped by to r/r one of my reviews, and when I saw your profile picture with you doing the "boys will be boys" pose....well, I wasn't prepared to be impressed with the poem.

And I was wrong. Checked out the rest of your profile too! I'm even further impressed!

Now....does your Mom know that you didn't smile nicely for the camera on that profile pic?

LOL...
Just joshin' with ya! You seem to have it all together, and I hope to catch more from you!

Connie
Feb 18 '03
6:06 pm PST