Undone

Apr 03 '03    Write an essay on this topic.


The Bottom Line Something I wrote about 6 years ago ...

Undone

Necessity found me....
attached itself to my fragile heel,
fogging up windows on suicide doors,
softly negotiating dress codes
i shatter into tears
and relinquish all my fears
swallow down my aches
agonizing, though mesmerizing
afternoons... imagining,
coffee sipped from styrofoam cups
lavishly bound to security and seduction...
from the first kissable mouth, to
the last naked toe.


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Undone....rewrite(i like this one best)

Necessity
found me; attached
itself to my fragile heel, softly
negotiating dress codes.
I relinguish into tears and shatter
my fears, swallow down aches,
lips lost on styrofoam. Imagining
mesmerizing afternoons, lavishly
bound to security and seduction,
from the first kissable
mouth to the last
naked toe.

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