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-- Broken ---
by DavidMac | May 20 '03
I haven't written a complete poem in almost a decade. Well, the result is a painful, self-pitying disaster, but what are you going to do....?

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by LILvoyce
This poem was so sad....
May 21 '03
11:12 pm PDT

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by treeseed
even when they're really hurting will eventually heal. I am assuming this poem is true and I appreciate that you have shared it with the people here on Epinions. Try not to agonize over someone who cannot see the beautiful mosaic that you are. Look up Watts Towers on a search engine and take a look at something amazing made from broken pieces.
May 21 '03
6:20 am PDT

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by jankp
Don't let her get to you so, David. She's the one missing the glue who doesn't know how to love. 29TH hasn't called or responded to my ecard, but it's his loss.

Jan
May 21 '03
2:19 am PDT

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by millinocket
David,

I hope you don't really feel this way, that makes me sad :(

Sue
May 20 '03
10:22 pm PDT