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by artemisadorned
You do see through to the heart of the matter. Very powerful, many of us (women) will be able to relate to this. I know I did. My heart is still pounding.
Excellent,
Linda
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by jankp
I could tell this was about Karen specifically, but you really captured what most women feel. Therapy with her is going to be powerful!
Jan
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Jul 06 '03
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by LoisLane05
David,
Wow, great piece! I enjoyed reading it. It is amazing how you really jumped into this character's skin and took over. Thanks for posting!
Jen
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Jun 30 '03
1:42 pm PDT
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by _haggis_
David,
One of your very best. Thanks for sharing it.
Haggis
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Jun 30 '03
9:54 am PDT
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by dedemw
I am all mush
This is amazing
"The many chapters of the novel that is her........"
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Jun 28 '03
7:14 pm PDT
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by toospoiled
God, this is so beautiful David!!! -- It made me cry.
I saw myself in this which made me cry even more. If am correct in my assumption, which I know that I am since you told me so. It's too bad I inspired such a sad piece!
It's OK though -the fact that you thought of me, expressed it so beautifully and share in my troubles melts my heart!
I love you David,
Karen
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Jun 28 '03
6:06 pm PDT
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by millinocket
David,
This is great. Truly. Very powerful. You do have a wonderful way of seeing through someone else's eyes. Nice job.
Sue
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Jun 28 '03
4:42 pm PDT
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by macresarf1
Very sensitive, DavidMac.
To be in someone else's skin is not easy. I especially like the image of the swimming pool.
Suggestion: Work on "She drank so as to dull the pain."
Regards.
[Macresarf1]
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Jun 28 '03
12:36 pm PDT
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by drdevience
Impressive.
I loved this.
Doc
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Jun 27 '03
10:14 pm PDT
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