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Odd fact is that Carolyn (Reply to this comment)
by nwinston
was once a man when my boss... Must have had a gender change.
Wonderful!
Nancy
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Sep 16 '05
6:55 am PDT
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by mahfouz
yep...this is a very good piece of writin. cant wait for more of these from you
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Oct 17 '03
5:20 am PDT
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Wow (Reply to this comment)
by char.mike
This is totally captivating!
Smiles, Char
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Sep 09 '03
5:22 pm PDT
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by voxpoptart
I'm as impressed as everyone else is. Of course, i'm fundamentally disappointed that Carolyn lives through the thing, but (1) that's a tribute to your skill in writing her from Sarah's perspective, and (2) her type usually does. It just usually doesn't constitute a twisting and merciful psychological study when it happens. Good show!
- Brian
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Sep 08 '03
7:05 am PDT
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Nice! (Reply to this comment)
by AliventiAsylum
I think most people have had "Carolyn" for a boss at one time or another and can relate. I liked the tie-ins a great deal.
Patti
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Sep 06 '03
5:07 am PDT
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by dragonfire88
This was really good. I was really wondering how it would end after the first part. I think I'm glad I didn't read it till tonight since this one was up now too and I didn't have to wait to read it. :)
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Sep 05 '03
11:39 pm PDT
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Yes (Reply to this comment)
by Granniemose
Very very good - the ending was unexpected. I truly enjoyed this - the backing off of the boss -
the smell of peanuts - and the final mercy. Great work. You have so much talent.
Virginia
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Sep 05 '03
8:03 pm PDT
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Aha (Reply to this comment)
by _haggis_
The rat has finally escaped from the trap.
Wonderful work here Horse.
I love this description : It was the smell of slowly decaying flesh, she had thought; not the rich, ripe, smell of the already dead, but the more ominous and repugnant smell of one alive and rotting from within
*Shiver*
Really a great read. I'm with Lorace. Encore.
Haggis
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Sep 05 '03
10:31 am PDT
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All I can say (Reply to this comment)
by lorace
Is masterful!
What a convoluted mind Sarah has . . .your tie-ins with the past were notably skillful.
Would you believe that Carolyn once was my boss?
Bravo and encore!
Lorace
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Sep 05 '03
10:18 am PDT
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