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The Flawed Witness
by laurashrti | Oct 21 '03
I guess we all partake in activities others may not approve of...

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Great SHORT story! (Reply to this comment)
by bonnieleigh
Wish I could learn to write such "short shorts" - almost ALL my short stories turn into novelettes! Looking forward to more from you....

Bonnie Boo
Oct 24 '07
10:41 am PDT

Hehe (Reply to this comment)
by JiggyJay
It's very good, you have a great way of realistic writing. Keep up the good work and feel free to post more stuff...maybe something lengthier...?
Aug 11 '07
10:47 pm PDT

Nice... (Reply to this comment)
by copernicus
little ending you have there! Don't mind a twist in the tale every now and again.

~Adam~
Oct 22 '03
4:40 am PDT