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Re: . . . (Reply to this comment)
by blackmonolith
Officer: a man
so discombobulated,
conforms unaware!
(What a word up there!
My ultimate goal might be
a three-word haiku.)
Because I've been gone,
apparently my haiku
didn't shed new light.
Seem these complaints have
been around since the intro
of Writer's Corner.
*****
Before you die, you
see The Ring ring ring ring ring
ring ring ring Hello?
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Dec 01 '03
12:41 am PST
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Re: My haiku. (Reply to this comment)
by blackmonolith
Katy, that was my
favorite stanza as well.
Taste? Not exclusive!
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Dec 01 '03
12:29 am PST
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by Officer
All this five seven
five crap needs to end right now.
I don't do haiku.
Excellent piece Sky. Till we meet again...
~Ryan
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Nov 25 '03
12:10 am PST
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My haiku. (Reply to this comment)
by katybrighteyes
I didn't know you
Until I saw your comment
On Ken's last review.
I came in too late
And missed most of the party
I be unlucky.
Ken was my hero
But you can be mine also
Writing stuff like this.
BTW, loved your haiku! Made me LMAO, esp. the "no no no no nope" part.
Katy
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Nov 21 '03
8:57 am PST
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Re: Re: Re: How to write a hundred word haiku (Reply to this comment)
by blackmonolith
Holy crap, Moby!
That there was seven-six-four!
No doubt illegal.
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Oct 30 '03
12:44 pm PST
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Re: How to write a hundred word haiku (Reply to this comment)
by blackmonolith
Hello mobiprof!
I appreciate that link.
Been absent... it's news!
I rather enjoyed
rambling on for far too long.
Was something to do.
But for the next time,
I'll be sure to use the tools
that you provided.
Your timely response
doesn't seem to be haiku
unless things have changed...
I always thought that
five-seven-five was the one
right way to do it.
~happyskyfunolith
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Oct 30 '03
5:55 am PST
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