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Dream Stream
by lorace | Nov 12 '03
Written to one I loved very much. An old love song inspired the thought. "Time waits for no one." If you remember, then you'll understand.

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Re: Re: Re: oh shoot (Reply to this comment)
by lorace
great! Thanks, Jan.

I'm not familiar with it, though, but I love the title.

Lorace
Nov 25 '03
9:45 am PST

Re: Wow... (Reply to this comment)
by lorace
Thanks, Jen. Good hearing from you! lol.

Me
Nov 25 '03
9:43 am PST

Re: Re: oh shoot (Reply to this comment)
by jankp
Nope. Seasons in the Sun!

Jan
Nov 24 '03
5:39 pm PST

Wow... (Reply to this comment)
by jcrismon
that's powerful and intense.... you have a lot to share from the depths of your soul, and I'm so glad you do on occasion!

Jeni
Nov 23 '03
5:07 pm PST

Re: Lorace~ (Reply to this comment)
by lorace
Thanks, Carol. Bittersweet describes it perfectly. Thanks for the comment.

It was my joy to share it and I'm glad it was meaningful to you.

Lorace
Nov 20 '03
10:21 pm PST

Lorace~ (Reply to this comment)
by Lark729_89
Thank you for sharing this bittersweet yet beautifully written poem.


My best,
Carol
Nov 20 '03
9:09 pm PST

Re: oh shoot (Reply to this comment)
by lorace
Surely it's not Tell Laura I love her, Jan. LOL. Naw, that was a 60's, I think. Too far back for you to remember, I'm sure.

Thanks, Jan, I hope you think of it. The song I said that inspired it was Time waits for no one,
It passes you by, it's just like a river, flowing out to the sky! Always broke my heart.

Thanks for commenting, though. ha ha
Lorace
Nov 15 '03
10:35 pm PST

Re: Simply Beautiful Lorace (Reply to this comment)
by lorace
Thank you, Karen. How nice of you to stop and tell me this.

Why are you too spoiled? lol. Your name has always fascinated me.

Lorace
Nov 15 '03
10:32 pm PST

oh shoot (Reply to this comment)
by jankp
It's on the tip of my tongue the song this reminds me of. 70s' song about a loved one who died. This is going to bug me! Beautiful, if exasperating, poem!

Jan
Nov 15 '03
4:59 pm PST

Simply Beautiful Lorace (Reply to this comment)
by toospoiled
This poem was just beautiful, Lorace!

Hugs,
Karen
Nov 15 '03
8:16 am PST

Thanks to all of you (Reply to this comment)
by lorace
Gael, Kath, Hags, Deborah,Teri,Horswispr,Virginia,Tim,and Reva.

Each one of you left a beautiful comment to me and I'm so warmed by them, believe me.

I'm glad the poem was meaningful.

And for you to take the time to comment, is wonderful.

Lorace
Nov 14 '03
10:56 pm PST

This is so beautiful......... (Reply to this comment)
by MariaLynn
and a very touching poem Lorace. As alwayts I love your poems.

Blessings
Reva
Nov 14 '03
9:16 pm PST

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by flamepillar
For some reason I thought of the scenery in Lord of the Rings when I read this. And that's some beautiful places. There is a breathtaking rhythmic flow to this one. Nicely done!
Tim
Nov 14 '03
8:55 am PST

You Are - (Reply to this comment)
by Granniemose
what poetry is all about, and what it is meant to be. Your poems always reach way down inside me and touch my soul.

Virginia
Nov 14 '03
4:13 am PST

I don't usually like (Reply to this comment)
by Horswispr
poems that rhyme. But this was pretty cool. Sweet dreams!

Nov 14 '03
12:01 am PST

How (Reply to this comment)
by theresaro
beautiful this was. All we have is memories and no one can take those away from us..

Teri
Nov 13 '03
3:57 am PST

Chills~ (Reply to this comment)
by ruby950
You gave me chills, Lorace! This is simply beautiful. Be happy that you had that day at sea.
I hope that you can remember it with a smile.

My best,
Deborah~
Nov 12 '03
7:41 pm PST

Wow (Reply to this comment)
by _haggis_
I don't understand why so many of your poems leave me speechless (or more properly, wordless). This was beautiful, Lorace. Just beautiful.

Hags
Nov 12 '03
6:33 pm PST

Oh you..... (Reply to this comment)
by kamel622

....know how much I love your poems, and this one spoke to my heart. Don't we all have a love that turned out this way? Made me remember for a moment. :)

Thank you Lorace, for being you.....kath
Nov 12 '03
5:35 pm PST

Beautiful.... (Reply to this comment)
by gaelkm
....and poignant. Thank you.

~gael
Nov 12 '03
1:06 pm PST