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CAPTAIND's SHORT SHORT STORY W/O - Neverland

Nov 24 '03

The Bottom Line Hmm...

Tick tock, tick tock, tick tock, tick tock...

I’ve gotta think happy thoughts now days. I had to help John with his marbles. I’d be a rude host otherwise. Tinkerbell’s cute but give me the lost boys. They’re the reason I love Neverland. Smee led me wrong when he said I could make them love me. It must be my deformities that force them to expose me.

Tick tock, tick tock, tick tock, tick tock...

I’m just a Boy Who Never Grew Up.

Tick tock, tick tock, tick tock, tick tock...

Uh-oh, the crocodiles are coming – They’ve got me now.






-- 100 Words --


Join CaptainD and others in CaptainD's Short Short Story W/O!

Be sure to read my other submission Deceived.


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