Baby PoemDec 23 '03 Write an essay on this topic.
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The Bottom Line Help me pick a special poem for my sister's first child. Please!
My sister will be having her first baby any day now. I am very excited. I had decided that I would honor the birth of her first child by writing a poem for her and the baby. I am going to be framing the poem and giving it to her when the baby is born. Of course I already purchased the normal gifts (outfits and toys) but I wanted to do something a little more personal. The thing is that I always have a little trouble evaluating my own work. I am overly critical sometimes. I have two poems written up, one short and sweet and the other a bit longer. They are both newly written. I am asking that you help me choose one to use or if they aren't good enough for my purpose please let me know and I will start anew. I am only asking that you please leave me a comment or email me and let me know what you think so that I am able to make a better choice. Below are both of the poems that I have written so far. ******************************************** An Angel A little angel sent from heaven worth more than gold full of love for me to hold Tiny fingers one through ten touch my heart hold my soul change my life as they grow Soft skin so fragile precious to touch beautiful to see stirring emotions inside of me Curious eyes with new sight stare into mine always unblinking penetrate my soul without thinking Wrinkled feet so small not yet walking kicking away will carry you to me one day Pure heart beating calling out to me love unlike I've known creating a bond much stronger as you grow A little angel sent from heaven worth more than gold full of love for me to hold ======================================= A Baby A new life precious and small A gift from heaven for one and all A joy to hug and hold A developing spirit to mold A beautiful sight to see A priceless part of me A special kind of love An angel from above ************************************************ Thank you for your time. ©2003  |
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