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Baby Poem
by Debbie26 | Dec 23 '03
Help me pick a special poem for my sister's first child. Please!

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Re: Both (Reply to this comment)
by katybrighteyes
Terrie suggested exactly what I had in mind!

Your poems are lovely, so be sure to share both of them with your sister. She'll cherish these for the rest of her life. I'm sure by now you already have a new family member. :o)

Katy
Jan 11 '04
8:38 am PST

How fun! (Reply to this comment)
by artemis8
A baby coming into your life! (even if it is not your own)
I liked both poems a lot, but enjoyed the first/longer one more.

Karyn
Dec 30 '03
3:07 pm PST

Beautiful (Reply to this comment)
by lorace
They are both so meaningful and sweet.

Yes, both of them, by all means.

But of the two, I also liked the first one better.

Keep going! and wishing all well.

Lorace
Dec 23 '03
10:00 pm PST

Both (Reply to this comment)
by treeseed
Put the long one in a frame and use the short one in a beautiful home-made card. Both are lovely. Your sister will be delighted.
Terrie
Dec 23 '03
12:45 pm PST

Great Job (Reply to this comment)
by tigger76
I love them both. I think for framing purposes you should have the longer one used. The shorter one would be cute on a blanket or something engraved. You did such a good job on them both. I loved them. Congrats!

Lindsey
Dec 23 '03
10:12 am PST

the 1st one..... (Reply to this comment)
by cntaur5
Although I like both poems, I like the 1st one best. Congrats! to you and your sibling. I hope this helps.

Cal/cntaur5
Dec 23 '03
8:07 am PST

... (Reply to this comment)
by wifeofvolsfan
I like them both. You have a lot of talent!!! If I had to chose one though I'd pick the longer one.

Congratulations to your sister. I know you all can't wait for the baby to get here.

Wendy :-)
Dec 23 '03
7:19 am PST

Well written (Reply to this comment)
by opinionated3
I agree, give them both as a gift. Maybe you can put the longer one in a frame and have the smaller one engraved on something as a keepsake.

Congratulations to your sister.

Jon
Dec 23 '03
3:14 am PST

Debbie (Reply to this comment)
by theresaro
Congratulations to your Sister and of course you the auntie.

These poems are from you why not give them both to her. Nicely written.

Happy Holidays

Teri :)

Dec 23 '03
2:08 am PST
   

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