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Amazing. (Reply to this comment)
by quidrock
Just amazing.
quidrock
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Mar 28 '04 1:00 pm PST
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Very touching... (Reply to this comment)
by LoisLane05
Hey Shakespeare!
This is a very pure and erotic poem you've written! How did you do that, you made it "racy" like you told me it was, but it was also very pure and honest. Writing with these emotions shows the marks of a serious and complex writer. Definitely show it to her! I agree with everyone else. Nicely done!
Jennifer
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Jan 06 '04 7:50 pm PST
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Winner! (Reply to this comment)
by macresarf1
Dear David: I think the Jury is coming in with a verdict in your favor. By all means, show this work to your lady.
Happy New Year!
[Macresarf1]
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Jan 03 '04 12:42 pm PST
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by wifeofvolsfan
Loved your poem! Great job! SHOW it to whoever you wrote it for.
Wendy :-)
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Jan 03 '04 9:34 am PST
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Dang... (Reply to this comment)
by toospoiled
David, I need a cold shower after reading this one!
Karen
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Jan 02 '04 8:17 pm PST
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sometimes? (Reply to this comment)
by jankp
Dreams make the world go round. Loved it, David, and so will you know who!
jan
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Jan 02 '04 7:23 pm PST
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