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Love Lost Poetry

Jan 20 '04

The Bottom Line This is a poem, and I recommend poems of all kinds.


This has no title, and is just a poem I wrote but maybe I can call it..


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I am beneath my sky
Where the moon is liquid
This is not that static moon
That you see and he saw
The lovers stared up into
This is the fluid moon
Craters dripping
Flowing earthbound
on my world
Not your world or his world
or their world
The land of loved lovers
This is the moon of my dissolution
I am liquid,juiced, flowing into nothingness.
Dark sky above
Glittering stars melted onto my glazed eyes
vision barely left
I feel myself liquefy
Mixed with moon juice and
Salty tears

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