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Re: Beautiful, creative Imagery (Reply to this comment)
by Abraxmed
thanks, it kind of jumps from metaphorical to analytical. Probably only bothers me though...
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Mar 11 '04
4:00 pm PST
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Beautiful, creative Imagery (Reply to this comment)
by artemisadorned
and lush wordscaping. I like the poignant tension you created; wanting love but hesitant to embrace it... Story of our lives, right girls?
Keep on writing Brax.
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Feb 28 '04
6:53 am PST
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Re: Nice poem. (Reply to this comment)
by Abraxmed
I am guessing you got that from the lyrics line. Truth be told I don't remember who I wrote it for. I have an idea of who it might be for, but neither of them are Britney! Though I am a big fan of her body... I mean music! OK even I don't believe that one. I can't help it she's hot!
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Jan 31 '04
11:45 am PST
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Nice poem. (Reply to this comment)
by katybrighteyes
Just hope you didn't write it for Britney. :oP
Katy
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Jan 31 '04
11:38 am PST
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Re: Prose? (Reply to this comment)
by Abraxmed
Its unedited as are all of my stuff on here. To play devil's advocate, it doesn't rhyme, so it kind of is prose. Though I think prose poetry doesn't have line breaks. Been awhile since I looked at the definitions of form.
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Jan 31 '04
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Prose? (Reply to this comment)
by B_Campbell
To the comment below: Nice, but this isn't prose.
To Abraxmed: You know me, I think it's too long.
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Jan 30 '04
7:38 pm PST
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Re: Holy toledo... (Reply to this comment)
by Abraxmed
:) Well I'm glad I don't suck. Thank you, both of you, it does mean a lot, especially when the writing is personal.
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Jan 28 '04
1:41 pm PST
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Simply.......... (Reply to this comment)
by Mimi369
beautiful..........
Mimi
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Jan 28 '04
12:46 am PST
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