(An Ode ) To Miss Crumple

Feb 07 '04 (Updated Jun 03 '04)    Write an essay on this topic.


The Bottom Line Insight fueled by too much inebriation - led to a very unexpected sleepover with Miss Crumple, after she "got" me, as, perhaps, nobody ever has! Not even windswanwoman.

You were with me
All night, and yet
We did not embrace
(other than when
I caressed the
silken perfection of
your porcelain face)
as you lay crumpled
in the corner of my sofa

Instead, I laid you down
On my white chaise longue
And covered you over
With a warm white blanket
That matched your skin.

You looked at peace
And to my surprise,
You stayed – as I layed
Fully dressed
across
my big brass bed,
within eyeshot of you

Earlier, in the evening,
When you “got” me
I was stunned!!!!
That
Anybody
Would EVER understand
The controlled chaos
That I express in my art
BUT YOU DID!

I asked you to tell me
"if there was anything there"
in my art -- and you told me.
Luckily, there was - and you said:
"Your work has such puissance"!

You are the art historian
And, I
am the artist
you came to (study me)
you push and prod
I willingly explain,
and go where you like
(I want to go with you!)

For, Miss Crumple,
I find you
Almost unbearably
Attractive – and ache
ABSOLUTELY ACHE!
For your touch

But, I have far too much
Respect (and affection)
to point you
toward the brass rail
at the head of my bed
(even though I could have)
given how very
Blasted we both were!

(sotto voce: if it ever happens,
I want you to be fully aware
and responsive!)

But, I also needed to
Make it perfectly clear
Miss Crumple
That
We did not embrace
For lack of desire!

In the morning,
after all the pelee rouge,
zubrowka and smoke (of the
night before, had worn off)
We were both shy
And didn’t really know
What to do - or say.
(you may have even
thought that I
didn't want you,
by my restraint!)

We avoided coming close
To each other, and you
Left me
left me needing
to tell you
(in this poem)
How I really feel about you
Miss Crumple

So, now you know:
I simply adore you
(for now) from afar

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