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MISS MYSTERY: a noir short
by Stairway2Drew | Feb 10 '04
I don't want to give away anything but TWIST ENDING!!! LOL JK

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by voxpoptart
methinks this is a bit of the "ooooh, i wanna start writing a long, really complex story, and it'll be great, and everyone will love it, and... oh dammit, i can't be bothered finishing this, screw it, and screw all of you! mwahahahahaha!!!!".

Andy, a kind and generous thinker, gives you an alternative theory as well. Naah: it's this one. And bless you for it, as always.

- Brian
Feb 12 '04
9:57 pm PST

All I can say is - (Reply to this comment)
by teamfreak16
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH !!!!!!
Feb 11 '04
9:57 pm PST

hehe (Reply to this comment)
by andym173
methinks this is a bit of the "ooooh, i wanna start writing a long, really complex story, and it'll be great, and everyone will love it, and... oh dammit, i can't be bothered finishing this, screw it, and screw all of you! mwahahahahaha!!!!111".

either that or it's a very sick joke. i liked the sound of this woman. i wanted to know if she could tie a cherry-stem in a knot in her mouth. you disappoint me....

:)

- andy
Feb 10 '04
4:55 pm PST

Suddenly a shot rang out! (Reply to this comment)
by _haggis_
You got the dialog down cold. Great job.

Haggis
Feb 10 '04
2:10 pm PST

Suddenly a shot rang out! (Reply to this comment)
by _haggis_
You got the dialogue down cold. Great job.

Haggis
Feb 10 '04
2:08 pm PST

Hi (Reply to this comment)
by proxam
Chandler would be proud of you!

Drew
Feb 10 '04
10:19 am PST