Daniel's Song

Mar 13 '04    Write an essay on this topic.


The Bottom Line Get off the bottom line and Go!

This little song is something my 17 year old son wrote. I'm not sure how the melody is supposed to go but the song has a good message. He asked me to put it up here for him. Let me know what you think and thanks for reading.


¶ Sometimes we look all around and see
a bunch of paths all ahead of us
Many being locked up snug and tight
with the keys buried deep within ourselves
not knowing where half of them go

¶ We know we can either waste around
wasting precious time...
or we can get on the go...
get on the go...
get on the go...

¶ We never know where they will all lead
and go until we go on
So shall we go...
so shall we go...
shall we go...

¶ On the adventure of the adventure of or lives
We may just have the greatest of times
Go! Go now
go on... have yourselves a wonderful adventure
I say go! Go on...
Go on now...

¶ Now that we got a chance...
Go! let's go ...
Go now... Right now...

© 2004 Daniel H.

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