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Weather Disturbance, Part Two
by DavidMac | Apr 03 '04
Copyright 2004 David Macdonald

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by macresarf1
Good dialogue, David, but it does not advance the story much, and so again, reminds me that this story wants to be a novel or a novella.

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[Macresarf1] 		Apr 05 '04
1:51 pm PDT
   

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