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by artemisadorned
David, you really have the talent. Very well done!
Linda
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Feb 07 '05 11:39 am PST
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Very (Reply to this comment)
by barakah59
Nicely Done
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Apr 10 '04 6:01 pm PDT
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Brilliant! (Reply to this comment)
by toospoiled
Simply brilliant, David!
You are truly talented, my Dear!
Loved the way you made it all come together. I am in awe of you! ;-)
Hugs,
Karen
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Apr 07 '04 3:31 pm PDT
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Lovely David (Reply to this comment)
by LoisLane05
Whew! I'm blown away with your images. I really really like this piece and am so glad everything turned out so nicely for you! I love your title selections and how you added your own thoughts to balance your ideas. Wonderful job! Thanks for joining. Will talk to you later!
Jennifer
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Apr 07 '04 11:55 am PDT
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:-) (Reply to this comment)
by jankp
Hey, this was surreal! Hehe Liked how you put it all together and it was funny at times like monkey on the ceiling. I should try this.
Jan
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Apr 06 '04 5:31 pm PDT
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Write the short story, too! (Reply to this comment)
by treeseed
I loved it. It fell together beautifully. Such a fun exercise. I particularly enjoyed the first two stanzas...the concept of The Second Waiting Room...brilliant! Loved the part about the suicide across the street...nice work!
~Terrie
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Apr 06 '04 6:11 am PDT
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Hey there! (Reply to this comment)
by captaind
Very clever Dave, realy enjoyed it!
CaptainD
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Apr 06 '04 12:18 am PDT
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