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"In Search of You in Search of Freud" - LoisLane05's Found Poetry W/O
by DavidMac | Apr 05 '04
Forget about that Surrealism Write-Off! Now this is surreal.........

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by artemisadorned
David, you really have the talent. Very well done!

Linda
Feb 07 '05
11:39 am PST

Very (Reply to this comment)
by barakah59
Nicely Done
Apr 10 '04
6:01 pm PDT

Brilliant! (Reply to this comment)
by toospoiled
Simply brilliant, David!
You are truly talented, my Dear!

Loved the way you made it all come together. I am in awe of you! ;-)
Hugs,
Karen
Apr 07 '04
3:31 pm PDT

Lovely David (Reply to this comment)
by LoisLane05
Whew! I'm blown away with your images. I really really like this piece and am so glad everything turned out so nicely for you! I love your title selections and how you added your own thoughts to balance your ideas. Wonderful job! Thanks for joining. Will talk to you later!

Jennifer
Apr 07 '04
11:55 am PDT

:-) (Reply to this comment)
by jankp
Hey, this was surreal! Hehe Liked how you put it all together and it was funny at times like monkey on the ceiling. I should try this.

Jan
Apr 06 '04
5:31 pm PDT

Write the short story, too! (Reply to this comment)
by treeseed
I loved it. It fell together beautifully. Such a fun exercise. I particularly enjoyed the first two stanzas...the concept of The Second Waiting Room...brilliant! Loved the part about the suicide across the street...nice work!
~Terrie
Apr 06 '04
6:11 am PDT

Hey there! (Reply to this comment)
by captaind
Very clever Dave, realy enjoyed it!

CaptainD
Apr 06 '04
12:18 am PDT