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Computer Land 2

Nov 12 '04

The Bottom Line This is even scarier then the original.

Computer Land 2
It’s Back With A Vengence



Hi, My name is Bobby Brown. I’m writing this story from a small building orbiting the perimeter of Galactictron, the planet of computers. I rigjt this in hopes that maybe the prophecy is a phony, maybe they didn’t make us out of brain waves. Or maybe we live in their world, the prophecy world.


It all started too days ago. I was playing Grand Feft Auto on my computer. Suddenly a lightning hit me. I was inside the game. I ran up and tried to grab a girls breast, and my hand went throigh it. When I pulled it out it was all digital animation. I pressed the button and I was back in the real world. I looked at my hand. It was still diital animation. “Son of a b*tch” I screamed. Sudenly I realized that the prophecy was true. NOOO! I lunged for a knife, but before I could dismember m hand, my hand dismembered the hand that was reaching for the knife. Soon I turned completely digital animation.


Next thing I know the 3 men from the prophecy is at my door. We’ve come to see if your o.k. they said. The prophecy states that the 3 men will never die, so to make sure I don’t die, I have to kill them. I take my shotgun out of my knapsack and open the door. Then I shoot two. Oh Know! I scream. I’m out of bullets. I start kicking the wise man in the face until his face falls off. I pick it up and throw it in the garbage.


I walk back in. Everything’s back to normal. I go to my computer, and as I sit down, the wise man’s hand comes out of the screen and pulls me in. Next thing I know I’m in the building orbiyinh Galactictron.

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