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Falling Out of Love
by Debbie26 | Feb 19 '05
The slow death of love can be very painful.

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by My3LilMen
I see you are reading and rating today. Could this mean you are making a comeback? Can we expect a new essay or review from you soon?

I hope that life is treating you well!
Hugs,
Chelle
Mar 31 '07
10:47 am PDT

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by Debbie26
When you can say yes to the questions that I asked is when you admit it and give up.
Apr 15 '05
2:11 am PDT

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by dramastef
It's like you miss what you fell in love with and it's that memory that hurts because you can't help but compare it with what you have in front of you (or next to you in bed). It's a very, very hard thing to a) recognize and b) admit. When do you give up? When do you admit that what you had was gone and it's never coming back? Yeah, I'm asking myself those questions. Sigh.

~Stefanie
Apr 14 '05
8:39 am PDT

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by bionicbanana
Hey Debbie26!

I liked your poem, and could feel the pain, (which, of course, is the most important part!) But, I'm curious to know why you didn't punctuate, at all - including using any question marks, after the various questions?

bionicbanana

Feb 20 '05
4:59 pm PST

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by jo.com
once very clearly fell out of love. Was in love vs. just loving the person and then it was gone. It was hard. jo
Feb 19 '05
6:11 pm PST