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~Nineteen~ (mature content)

Mar 21 '05

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19-year-old woman
Your hair trickling from your head
like an incoming tide suddenly frozen in time
and your face is sweet with the loveliness of youth
But you’re only reading sappy sentiments
and I don’t want to get sappy with you

I only want to take you out for the night
and invite you in to do the things
You may have only thought about in secret

Your body is like a slippery river
and I want to be the swimmer
I want to retrace your design
and appreciate the effort that went into your development

I want to stand in wait for you
as you move close to me like the incoming tide
and drag me out to sea

You’d abolish your clothing from your form
and rest upon the cotton blanket
its consoling surface tickling your back

My eyes paint a sharp image onto the canvas of my memory
of a woman with her hands pressed against her stomach
her fingers twitching in expectation
her face sweet even as it is crafty
her breasts declining to the sides of her arms
adding to the relaxing shape of the form lying there

The painting is pure body
Meant to draw out little but a pure gut reaction
There is no meaning
except for wanting to crawl inside that portrait
To dissolve into the acrylics of your skin

To feel my mouth touch the warmth of your smile
To feel the shape of your body against me
To drink from the salty undertow
flowing from between your thighs
To feel your walls
enveloping around me
to feel your rhythm
as we play together

You’re only a woman anew
You might sense
I’m only after your body
And not after intercourse with your soul

... and you may be right

I want to fuck you
and I want you to say, yes, I want this too
I want to fuck you all night too
Forget the casual acquaintance
and just get wild
even if it means our souls don’t bond any more tightly
and we have nothing else to say........




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