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Now for some filler until I feel like doing a review.. adult content.

Mar 29 '05

The Bottom Line Ain't love grand? Let's dress it up in ruffled pirate shirts and tight bodices and call it a romance novel. Pure fantasy.

YOU ASKED

You asked me if I want to,
I ache inside to say yes.
I need you to be the man,
Just take charge and touch me.

Oh God, I am so afraid-

I'm afraid I don't remember how
I'm afraid I'll disappoint you
I'm afraid to be a fool again
I'm afraid I'll want to trust you
I'm afraid I'm already in love with you

Oh, please don't stop-
Just take me... now
My answer is yes

.................................

And when the rapture of romance fades and the nitty gritty begins...



VENTING


Men, how simple
They must be-

By emptying them clean
They think all is well,
Healing the bond between us.

Why don’t you get it?

Just cause I fu@ked you
Doesn’t mean anything
Has changed...

I’m still p!ssed at you.


A LOVE POEM

Inject me with your fluid
Embalm me with your need
I lie beneath you like a corpse
All pleasure drained away.
Yup, rigor mortis has set in
You’ve humped me ‘til I’m dead.

Don’t let it bother you…
Just cover my head
Rollover, fall asleep.

......................

Don't take it too personally gents- just having a bad day in the land of love and marriage. But, If you see yourself here, do something about it... quick.


Thanks for allowing me poetic license...
Overall, this was a therapeutic, theatrical venting for me. And yes, I like these poems, they just say it. Truth be told, sometimes love just sucks and spouses can be infuriating.

So, forgive me if I jostled your sensibilities.

There, I feel better now, that felt good.

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