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by jankp
Some passive aggression, huh? Well, glad to read it's getting better between you guys.
Jan
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Apr 13 '05
10:42 pm PDT
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Re: Re: Re: Wow (Reply to this comment)
by artemisadorned
Thanks Rob for asking. It seems that as the weather is warming up, so is my situation. The ice that formed between us is melting. We seem to be finding our way back to each other. Spring has a way of renewing...
Linda
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Apr 10 '05
12:30 pm PDT
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Hummmmm... (Reply to this comment)
by vemartin
Familiar territory is this, when the spouse is but an alien in our presense and you wonder why you ever consented to sleep with this person, let alone live with them! Great job on the poetry, I enjoyed them all for their frankness and raw emotion…
Vincent
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Apr 06 '05
4:55 am PDT
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Re: Re: Dear, cantankerous artemis! ;) (Reply to this comment)
by mothermeatloaf
And you are too kind. :)
~ Mike
lighting a candle to you in your husband's stead
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Apr 01 '05
6:35 pm PST
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Re: Dear, cantankerous artemis! ;) (Reply to this comment)
by artemisadorned
Mike, your wife is a very lucky woman...
Wish all men were as thoughtful and appreciative as you. You are the best.
Linda
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Apr 01 '05
9:09 am PST
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Re: Wow (Reply to this comment)
by artemisadorned
Thanks, Futurepast for finding some value in the poems and for noticing my dance competition accomplishments.
You are the best,
Linda
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Apr 01 '05
9:06 am PST
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Re: How is it we let the guys get all the fun? (Reply to this comment)
by artemisadorned
Hi Kathleen,
You know I have a routine already to go, if I do open mic anytime soon. It starts out all lovey dovey and ends up wicked and sassy.
Thanks for the encouragement.
Hugs, miss you-
Linda
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Mar 31 '05
8:48 pm PST
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How is it we let the guys get all the fun? (Reply to this comment)
by islesk5
I love the poems, as I've told you before. How free'ing would it be to get up on stage and say them to an audience? Maybe, as an aries woman, you are too much for him that he has to roll over and sleep because all of his energy is gone! No apologies necessary!
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Mar 31 '05
10:02 am PST
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***** Hi all (Reply to this comment)
by artemisadorned
By the way, A Love Poem was created after I started to watch a weird movie about a young woman's fascination with dead bodies and the preparation prior to their being viewed in a funeral home. The movie was too disgusting to watch so I changed the station, but, the image stayed with me and inspired me to write. I just applied this concept in the context of "live" relationship. It is graphic, and unfortunately happens to many woman. I related to it when he was drunk, drunk just hammers away at you... and is difficult forget. The allusions to necrophilia are merely metaphoric. That's the real inspiration behind the poem. Venting is more consistent with my current personal experience, and is the experience of many of my friends.
Overall this was a therapeutic, theatrical, poetic venting for me. And yes, I like these poems, they just say it. Truth be told, sometimes love just sucks and spouses can be infuriating. There I feel better now.
So, forgive me if I jostled your sensibilities.
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Mar 30 '05
8:23 am PST
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WOW (Reply to this comment)
by krus54
Yikes....sounds like you're having a bad time. Hope it gets better. You did a great job at writing those. It's good to vent!
Dave
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Mar 30 '05
7:02 am PST
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Dear, cantankerous artemis! ;) (Reply to this comment)
by mothermeatloaf
I'm afraid I'll disappoint you
I couldn't imagine how that could even remotely be possible! He should light candles to thank the angels nightly that you're there every morning he awakes.
Ahh...Men...lol
~ Mike
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Mar 30 '05
6:20 am PST
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Candid, and insightful.. (Reply to this comment)
by lllopez
I'll hold back my feelings about it until I read your husbands poem.
" the sun will come up tomorrow......."
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Mar 30 '05
3:27 am PST
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Hi (Reply to this comment)
by DavidMac
I was hoping you were going to post something "adult" -- and this is definitely better than expected! Maybe you ought to just "accidently" leave these poems around the house so he can stumble onto them and see if he learns anything from them......?
David
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Mar 29 '05
1:41 pm PST
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Sorry To Hear (Reply to this comment)
by zenmachado
I hope all turns to good in your troubles
Your words are deliciously candid
I liked em alot
Hope you dont remain destrot
A Friend
ZeN
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Mar 29 '05
12:56 pm PST
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