Under Observation

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goes from a 16 bar, to a 20 to a 24

Under Observation

Yo yo yo Snik uh-huh

(verse 1)
Panic's tearing in, "THAT'S HIM THERE HE IS!"
Have you seein stars like a planetarium
I write rhymes to pass the time, facts aside
I'm glad I survived the game I abide the same
You stare at me; but I can read you're mind I'm very keen
You talkin' more ice than a Dairy Queen
You look at me hysterically, focused in awe
Yeah it's funny till a cast covers ya broken jaw
It's money life and power
You just have to know that I will fight and prowl ya
I'm a regular dawg but I'm not playful
Keepin' my paper together like a staple
Fakes and amateurs will never break my stamina
I'm real like blood red, I see fake rappers pink and lavender
Half the rap population equates to toxic waste and
They don't understand me so they put me under observation

(chorus 4x)
Under observation, plotting on ya downfall
So I pounce on 'em (let's contemplate Snik)

(verse 2)
Your sanity is at stake, I sense you from the canopy
Get at you with these masterfully crafted 16s
Your speech is dead, slurs and speakin' upset
I'm the future I rip currency to shreds
Shine like the sun and moon, hard like bullet wounds
I assure you you'll feel the ultimate soon
Talk about hot sales, how you fine and you sue
Please, a sapphire's more diamond than you
Cause in rap all the censoring's relentless
I know cause of the extrasensory perception
I've got business, I've got no other time
I've {stuck} with rhymes like jet planes disrupt the skies
Needle sharp, I'm instantly gratified
You're pried apart, how your City of panic died
Fantasizing about fame and fortune
The world's a place of hate and abortion but I'm pacing forward
Little do you know my name or my time and place
The rhyming makes it intoxicatin'
The profit's placed in the occupation
They don't understand me so they put me under observation

(chorus 4x)

(verse 3)
Your pitiful rhymes sound evident
Tensions higher than Mount Everest
Intentions start again and accidents stop
More unexpected than a Jack-in-a-box
Now that I'm here fear's resurgent
Lay in the ocean like schools of sea urchins
The filter's fresh, but your rhymes is silly text
You're too +Common+, +Come Close+ and get +fried+ like +Billy West+
Threaten wit nines, I measure divine
Get me out now cause I'm only getting better wit time
Getting rich beckons, protégées and successions
How long did ya fame last? Hmm...maybe a split second? (yeah)
Winter's comin', stock right and eat fast
Catch me in NYC putting up stoplights and streetlamps
If I sign wit Bad Boy, I'd get a screw'd deal and a Da Band poster
Watch out, I make more monsters than Bram Stoker
If you wanna quit than stop responsibly
Either that or get dropped midseason like a FOX comedy
Now the doctor's sayin' he's lost a patient
They don't understand me so they put me under observation

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