Fed Up

Jun 28 '05    Write an essay on this topic.


The Bottom Line A track dealing with regular mental issues...Please read & post comments...

Uh-huh, yo

(verse 1)
Am I supposed to fight? Gotta find if my motive's right
Tired of criticism towards my approach to life
Promises failed, air is swallowed, inhaled
Should I make my own route or follow a trail?
Tolerance expected but I'm seein' an appallin' message
Of hatred in this world where a dollar is precious
Nobody can prevent my mission
Senseless prisons add to crimes causin' demolition
Experience my life in a day, roll the dice and let's play
Backstabbers do dirt than laugh right in my face
Imprinted on my chest are visions of the best
And I can improve if I'm given respect
I'm still learnin' cause the verdict's life ain't perfect
Concerned, I've been deserted but I don't deserve it
Look to the night sky and see nine planets
I'm no bystander, look into my eyes stop having high standards

_chorus 2x_
I’m fed up cause the world is bringing me doubt
No way to express what I’m thinking about
Just cannot seem to figure it out
Don’t wanna be just another face in the crowd

(verse 2)
Sick debates within worlds, love does mix with hate
Fix the gates of Heaven so they open though life manipulates
An overturned society, dividing me across
The Earth’s been crumbling at the seams, you finally just saw it?
From tantrums to triggers, can you answer the figures?
Can’t help it, life can be like 40 tarantula stingers
To balance being an MC is a challenge, it’ll stress me
Children don’t see to warning signs on tools, could get vasectomies
Can’t get away with a carpet flight, you saw the fight
A shark’s bite or a sharpened knife could make you part from life
Going so ballistic, vote or go to prison
Wonder why, can’t we make our own decisions?
Selling coke, politicians shove it down our throats
Tell me what’s the ratio from addiction to a healthy dose
A citizen, humans being primitive
Life in an ugly cell and they won’t believe you innocent!

_chorus 2x_

(verse 3)
Malnourished children who haven't found courage
Diseases, lives fall to pieces within the closing curtains
Soldiers hurting and their tone is thirstin'
To be on the phone with a person yet there's no assertion
Visit hell through a prison cell, the system's feel
Is it cause of finished bail or those who kiss n' tell?
Business is powerful to those who don't know symptoms
Way too many complications in the systems, just listen
Disastrous famine, accidents and mystery incidents
Synonyms for hatred, yet it's shoved away through ignorance
Sick of liars who play their way through life with sin n' charm
Listen hard, statistics are rebels with zippy cars
Fallen patriots with bravery, what if they're Atheists?
Eyes are tainted with pain, tears, haze and sh*t
One life to cherish before it perishes in smoke
Distorted, lives aborted mixing terror with hope
Ten minutes old could be killed and sent to your soul
Blessed to enter the folds of Heaven with scrolls
Talents distinct, but what if I fail in life?
Rebel & fight the world yet everyone's still frail in sight
My raps are a unique way of expression
Destined to connect with acceptance
I don't appreciate deception or if I've been set up
Ain't no other way to vent it, I'm fed up

_chorus_

reviews:
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7/2: Kanye West College Dropout
7/5: War Of The Worlds

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