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Jills Story Chapter 1
by ezreka | Oct 26 '05
"love em' loose em' or let em' go"

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by ezreka
I am still thinking about were to go with Jill and Bill, I think he is going to be a nice guy. But I may kill him off just for the drama :)

Angela
Dec 08 '05
8:49 am PST

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by AinsleyJo
My thought is that, eventually, it will have a happy ending--but not with Bill.

I think Bill is ready to move on--and has been ready to move on--but didn't want to move on without finally scoring with Jill first.

In short, Bill's a jerk!

I'm off to the next chapter ---->
Dec 06 '05
7:30 am PST

Re: Great writing... (Reply to this comment)
by ezreka
Thank you :)

Angela
Oct 27 '05
9:45 am PDT

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by ezreka
It is a drama, do you really think it is going to have a happy ending? I don't know maybe :)

Angela
Oct 27 '05
9:44 am PDT

Great writing... (Reply to this comment)
by faithforever
Keep it up. I enjoyed reading and know most people would... Hugs, Gina
Oct 27 '05
6:35 am PDT

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by brendan2
Yay! I'm happy you're posting again! You did a great job with chapter one, getting me all interested in finding out what happens next. I'm hoping the story will have a happy ending; it's possible, because hey, it is fiction, right?

~Liz
Oct 26 '05
7:41 pm PDT