Jills Story Chapter 3

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Just as I got done getting ready the door bell rang, Lisa is here! I run to open the door and there she is. She looks beautiful. She is wearing a red dress that is strapless and short, just barley covering her hips. "Lisa! Wow you look great!"

"Thanks, so do you. Are you ready?"

" I sure am, lets get out of here." I grab my coat and purse and head out the door. "Were are we going?" I ask

"To the club of course"

"Oh" I say a little disapointed. "I was hoping we could go somewhere to talk"

"Girlfriend, we can talk anytime! I want to party!"

"Oh alright, lets go have some fun"

We go to our usual club and immediately Lisa is off dancing with some man. I go to the bar to get a drink and that is when I see him! My man Bill is dancing with some hoe! I can't believe my eye's. I don't know what to do, should I confront them, should I ignore them? Then my decision is made for me, Bill has spotted me and he has the gall to wave!

Bill starts walking over with that woman "Hey Jill, I didn't know you were going out tonight"

"Well, since you are working" I say staring right at that hoe "I called Lisa to go out"

"I'm sorry, Jill this is my buddy Mike"

And then she shakes my hand and it is a firm grip, my mind starts reeling a woman named Mike with a grip like that? Oh my Gosh, my Bill is gay! "your gay?"

"Im not gay" Mike says "I am a Queen and Bill here is helping me to get my new club started"

"Oh Bill, why didn't you tell me about this?" I ask starring at him

"I didn't think I had to, Mike is the client I told you I was going out with tonight"

"Bill, you don't know how angry I was when I saw you out on the dance floor! I thought you had lied to me and was seeing another women, then I thought you were gay, I am so sorry. Can you forgive me?"

"Of course I can, Jill I love you, I would never want to do anything to hurt you"

Wait, did he just say he loved me? That is the first time he has ever said it "You love me?"

"Yes! I love you! Are you crazy? We were ment to be together, I have never loved anyone more in my life. You do love me don't you?"

"Yes, yes, yes! I love you! I just can't believe this, after Max I never thought I would be happy again and then seeing you with Mike..."

"Please call me Michelle" Mike cuts in

"Oh I am sorry! I didn't mean to butt in on your business meeting Michelle" I smile

"Its okay, I am just happy that Bill has finally found someone! I told him if he didn't find someone soon I would have to set him up with one of my friends" Mike says and nudges Bills shoulder.

Bill is smiling "This is the best day of my life, Jill will you Marry me?" and he gets down on one knee and pulls a ring out of his pocket.

"I am speechless, were did you get that ring? Yes, I will marry you!"

"Thank you, Thank you, Thank you! I promise I will cherish you forever. And I got this ring two weeks ago, I was just waiting until we made love before I asked you"

"Oh my gosh, I have to find Lisa, she is never going to believe this" I start looking around for her. There she is "Lisa" I yell "Lisa come over here"

She looks at Bill "Whats up?"

I hold out my left hand "notice anything different?"

"What is this? Are you telling me you are going to marry this guy? And who's the chick?"

Mike holds out his hand "Michelle" he says as he takes Lisa's hand "Nice to meet you"

"Are you a guy?" Lisa ask

"No, as I told Jill, I am a queen" He smiles

Lisa looks back at me with a questioning look on her face "What is going on here?"

"This is Bills client, Michelle is opening a new club. I saw them dancing together freaked out, Bill saw me came over introduced "Mike" and asked me to marry him!"

"Wow Bill, you really know how to ask a girl to marry you don't you" Lisa teases

"I was going to wait, but I saw how freaked out she got and I wanted her to know how much I loved her" Bill explained as his cheeks were getting red.

"Jill, are you sure this is what you want?" Lisa ask

"Of course it is! I love Bill"

"Okay, If you are happy then I am happy for you"

"Will you be my Maid of Honour?"

"As long as Mike isn't the best man" Lisa said teasingly

"No, no" Bill says "My brother is going to be the best man"

"Is he cute?" Lisa ask

"He is Bills twin brother, is Bill cute?"

"He's alright" Lisa says with a smile

"Lets get out of here, lets go somewhere to celebrate" Bill suggest "Besides I want to show off, I am surrounded by beautiful women" he says and nudges Mike/Michelle

And we all leave the club that night happy, to bad that night couldn't have lasted forever.

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