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Jills Story Chapter 3
by ezreka | Dec 12 '05
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Re: Re: Re: what a fun read.... (Reply to this comment)
by ezreka
Yes, you are awesome :) I don't know how we never bumped into each other b4 either.

Angela
Dec 18 '05
8:41 am PST

Re: ☼ (Reply to this comment)
by ezreka
you know me, it will take at least a month. Sorry to disappoint :)


Angela
Dec 18 '05
8:35 am PST

Re: Re: what a fun read.... (Reply to this comment)
by misc_el
Me good? Bah!

You know most days I'm sharing a brain with the neighbors dog so I'm a wee bit forgetful sometimes. Forgive me if I'm wrong.

I was trying to figure out how you and me been around so long and not bumped into each other before.

Shame it took so long.

Well, either way, glad I did.

XOXO
Elaine
Dec 17 '05
4:13 pm PST

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by brendan2
Uh-oh. Happy fun times, marriage proposals out of nowhere... this can't end well.

Looking forward to chapter 4 (hope it's soon!),

~Liz
Dec 17 '05
11:15 am PST

Re: what a fun read.... (Reply to this comment)
by ezreka
Wow, thank you so much! I am blushing :) I have read your work before and you are awesome, so you telling me I am a good writer is the best compliment I can get(:

Thanks,
Angela
Dec 16 '05
8:33 am PST

what a fun read.... (Reply to this comment)
by misc_el
I am so glad I didn't find this earlier - I would'a been on pins and needles waiting for the next one to come out.

Those were awesome to read.

You're a really great writer.


So watch'a gonna write next?
[anxiously drumming fingers]

What ever it is I look forward to it.

XOXO
MissElaineious
Dec 16 '05
5:40 am PST

Re: === (Reply to this comment)
by ezreka
Yes, something is going to happen before the wedding, I am not exactly sure what it is going to be yet. About your story, I liked how real it felt. I could see how red and chapped Juliannes hands were from playing in the cold. You have a way with words that made me feel as if I were right there with the characters.

Angela
Dec 15 '05
11:31 am PST

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by DavidMac
Jill always seems to find the guys who are gay or who are flirting with the culture... somehow I suspect something is going to happen before the wedding.......and it sucks waiting until 28 before having sex! And I thought my experience was bad!!
Oh, thanks for reading my story; what did you like about it?
David
Dec 14 '05
8:11 pm PST

Re: This Just Gets Curiouser & Curiouser! (Reply to this comment)
by ezreka
you and me both A.J., I have to think on it.

Angela
Dec 13 '05
6:27 am PST

Re: sweet... (Reply to this comment)
by ezreka
Thank you, thank you, thank you! Now I have to think for a month on were I want this to go :)


Angela
Dec 13 '05
6:25 am PST

Re: Hi (Reply to this comment)
by ezreka
Thank you very much :) I have thought about writing profesionaly, but I would need a very good editor!

Angela
Dec 13 '05
6:24 am PST

This Just Gets Curiouser & Curiouser! (Reply to this comment)
by AinsleyJo
Wonder what Chapter 4 will hold...

Write On!
AJ :-)
Dec 12 '05
7:52 pm PST

sweet... (Reply to this comment)
by zenmachado
NIce Job,


KEep It Up Lady,


ZeN
Dec 12 '05
6:50 pm PST

sweet... (Reply to this comment)
by zenmachado
NIce Job,


KEep It Up Lady,


ZeN
Dec 12 '05
6:50 pm PST

sweet... (Reply to this comment)
by zenmachado
NIce Job,


KEep It Up Lady,


ZeN
Dec 12 '05
6:50 pm PST

Hi (Reply to this comment)
by michelle7898
Ever think about writing profesionaly? Your good at it.

-Michelle
Dec 12 '05
6:24 pm PST