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A "Sex it Up" Write-Off Haiku

May 26 '06

The Bottom Line It's really not as bad as my little poem makes it out to be! Heh, heh..'bottom line'...heh heh.

This is my entry in the 'Sex it Up' Write-Off, hosted by jeavinl. Great topic, but oh how it can change when you it the big 4-0. My entry...

Sex Changes (by kevlog)

Ah, Magical Sex!
And, yet, it changes so much
when one hits forty

The candles are lit!
Romantic mood is perfect.
Ouch. My aching back...

Tingling all over, yo.
Anticipation growing!
Who knocks on the door?

The kids need some help
Huge project due tomorrow
Must run to Staples

Finally our time
has arrived! we are alone!
Why are you snoring?

Sharing this big bed
I gaze into your blue eyes
The cat jumps in, too.

Walk along the dunes!
The Surf crashing at our feet
Giant crab bites toe

Pay to get away
Off to the mountains, alone
The suite costs HOW much?

Now... we're in the mood !
All the parts saying YES, YES.
well, almost all parts.

FIN


(I kid. Don't worry, it's not really that bad!)









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