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A "Sex it Up" Write-Off Haiku
by kevlog | May 26 '06
It's really not as bad as my little poem makes it out to be! Heh, heh..'bottom line'...heh heh.

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by macresarf1
Nice satirical stuff in with a classical beat.

Regards.

[Macresarf1]
Oct 09 '06
12:44 am PDT

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by macresarf1
Nice satirical stuff in with a classical beat.

Regards.

[Macresarf1]
Oct 09 '06
12:44 am PDT

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by macresarf1
Nice satirical stuff in with a classical beat.

Regards.

[Macresarf1]
Oct 09 '06
12:43 am PDT

What a HOOT! (Reply to this comment)
by katybrighteyes
...and so sad but true.

Katy
Aug 11 '06
11:34 am PDT

:-P (Reply to this comment)
by Gr8ful
Abolutely awesome poetry. Modern, in with the times and very insightful. Have you been spying on me? J/K LOL

Gr8ful :-)
Jul 24 '06
10:40 pm PDT

That was (Reply to this comment)
by susiewho
hilarious
Jul 02 '06
10:24 am PDT

That was (Reply to this comment)
by susiewho
hilarious
Jul 02 '06
10:24 am PDT

ha ha? (Reply to this comment)
by voxpoptart
Cindy and i don't let the cats in the bedroom. With a kid due in a few months, we should probably install a lock, though...

Excellent poem. Frightening and funny at once, sort of like a Hitchcock movie, except not.

cheers,
- Brian
Jun 08 '06
6:14 pm PDT

Hilarious Kevin! (Reply to this comment)
by gaelkm
Very well written and so much truth!

~gael
Jun 01 '06
8:40 am PDT

This was.......... (Reply to this comment)
by kamel622

.....great!! Thanks so much for the laugh. Now, can you imagine, we are approaching (few years away) our 60's. Parts that should work don't, parts that shouldn't work try to. Man, getting older isn't for sissies.......kath
May 28 '06
12:10 pm PDT

Kev - (Reply to this comment)
by Granniemose
I can't stop laughing. The poem was so well written and yet so funny. Loved it.

Virginia
May 27 '06
8:46 pm PDT

That's so funny (Reply to this comment)
by ifif1938
and so true....and it gets even stranger past that ripe old age of 40...LOL

Cheers
Barbara
May 27 '06
12:28 pm PDT

Ha ha (Reply to this comment)
by theresaro
That was great.

Teri :)
May 27 '06
3:36 am PDT

Wonderful Entry! (Reply to this comment)
by jeavinl
Thanks for writing such a funny (though true-to-life) entry for my w/o. This was just the sort of lightheartedness I had in mind!

Jeanne
May 26 '06
8:48 am PDT

Heh (Reply to this comment)
by Bruguru
Why did this make so much sense to me? Just substitute the dog jumping in the bed at an inopportune moment for the cat, and I hear ya Kev. :-)

Nicely done!
John
May 26 '06
6:29 am PDT