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"Paradise To Me": A Poem For Peace...And Muslims~

Nov 18 '06 (Updated Nov 01 '07)

The Bottom Line Reviews will come and go, but poetry lasts forever! What a good way to celebrate 1000 reviews, huh?

Paradise to me…
Is no future reward.
Not something outside me
That I need to fight for.
It doesn’t come…
Because I seek glory.
It has no borders around it
That defines where I’ll be happy.

Paradise to me…
Is a creative endeavor.
Something erupting from in me
That I‘ll share with another.
.It finally comes…
When I can listen as well.
It’s like a stream ever flowing
With voices that swim in a spell.

Paradise to me…
Is a soulful connection.
Someone who opens their mind
To lean in my direction.
It indeed comes…
As a recognition of souls.
It shall be what we see,.
This beautiful world once again whole.


This poem marks Review #1000, accomplished in six years, eleven months and two days. My total hits are 542,182. Thank you so much for reading my stuff! I've been encouraged to read and watch a lot of fantastic books and movies that I probably wouldn't have on my own. The site has broadened my world, which makes my poem so appropriate.

The poem was written with my Operation: Muslim Outreach in mind and I include links to my entries so far. I hope you'll join me with reviewing similar media products that promote understanding between Muslims and non-Muslims. Send links to your reviews here and I'll add them as long as they come. I have many more things to review and hope you've been enjoying my entries.

Poems like "Paradise To Me" are also welcome. Reviews will come and go, but poetry lasts forever!

My entries:

Looking for Comedy in the Muslim World movie: http://www.epinions.com/content_274210918020

A Sky So Close book: http://www.epinions.com/content_276098289284

Paradise Now movie: http://www.epinions.com/content_276932759172

Cup Final movie: http://www.epinions.com/content_277876084356

Joyeux Noel movie: http://www.epinions.com/content_279455501956

The Swallows of Kabul book: http://www.epinions.com/content_280329490052

Lost History: The Enduring Legacy of Muslim Thinkers...
http://www.epinions.com/content_403486641796

By member williampinn:

A children's fable he wrote:http://www.epinions.com/content_4840202372

a beautiful story he wrote: http://www.epinions.com/content_4904886404

By member Stephen_Murray:

Tariq Ali's The Sultan of Palermo: http://www.epinions.com/content_403851087492

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