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Silent Lullaby (Sectional)
by smarterthan3 | May 13 '07
"Pack your bags and we'll leave this old ghost town"

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Re: Spendid, Brother! (Reply to this comment)
by smarterthan3
Zen man, I really truly appreciate your comment. Thoughts and reactions like yours are what I love best about submitting my little lyrical pieces hear at Eps. Without them, I probably wouldn't be posting anything. So, again, a hundred thanks.

Take it easy dude,
-Jim
May 18 '07
8:29 am PDT

Spendid, Brother! (Reply to this comment)
by zenmachado
Now please do forgive me, for the inability to be as insightful in my comment, like I notice of many of your previous commetors did. :)

I would like to commend you on the beautiful imagry found in this song. It really display your progression as a writer. While being somewhat brief, it still shows depth and conveys a multitude of feelings.

I always enjoy your slendid composisions, but this one has an added special qualitity to it.

Thanx for the opportunity to read it. Great job, bro.


ZeN
May 17 '07
10:44 am PDT

Re: etc. (Reply to this comment)
by smarterthan3
Hey Mike, thanks alot man. I'm glad I was able to bring the same...good writing (for an incredible lack of a better phrase) into a more composed piece.

Thanks for the comment,
-Jim
May 15 '07
12:40 pm PDT

Re: ... (Reply to this comment)
by smarterthan3
I just wish I could hear it instead of just reading the lyrics

I have to agree with you there, Brittany, this is probably one of the top songs that I would love to translate to a sound version. But, until some band/singer stumbles across my page and offers to buy the lyrics off of me, I don't think that'll be happening,lol. And I'll have to take a look, if not a listen, to that Josh Groban song.

Thanks for the comment,
-Jim
May 15 '07
12:37 pm PDT

Re: ------> (Reply to this comment)
by smarterthan3
Haha, actually that typo was intentional...Just something I did 'cause I thought it was funny at the time, I guess.

Thanks alot for the comment man. It might be a little while before that 100th CD review though...I'm heading down to North Carolina to hang with some relatives for the lesser part of two weeks, so it'll probably be out sometime after that, but we'll see.

Peace,
-Jim
May 15 '07
12:35 pm PDT

etc. (Reply to this comment)
by beekd91
Odd, I always wish I could do more freeverse-esque stuff...I never have enough inspiration not to rely on the old trick of just repeating a few good lines.

Anyway the added structure didn't hurt the quality of your writing here. Great work here.
-Mike
May 15 '07
11:49 am PDT

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by donkee
Really nice! I liked it a lot...I just wish I could hear it instead of just reading the lyrics :) It actually reminds me a lot of a Josh Groban song, "So She Dances", which is a good thing, since I love that song.

Beautiful song, as usual, Jim :)
♥Brittany
May 15 '07
12:57 am PDT

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by snik1
LOL you're a fan of Copywrite huh? Definitely one of the best white rappers...just playin'. It's copyright Jim - not to be condescending, I'm sure you just accidentally misspelled it.

Anyway, I really liked the song and it's structure - very pretty, the lyrics were excellent and cryptic as usual, so I applaud you for that. And I'm looking forward to your 100th album review!

Peace
Kyle aka snik1
May 14 '07
5:21 pm PDT