#8 Working Out (Distance)
Aug 21 '07
The Bottom Line Hear it Here
Okay. So, a while ago I had this crazy idea to make an imaginary album....of my lyrics. Pretty pointless right? Yeah, that's what I've been thinking most of this time I've been putting it together too but, if nothing else, I figured it would be a fun experience that might chance my approach to writing my lyrics. And, when you get all but laid off from one job and fail to capture a second one that was all but guranteed, you free up alot of time. I'm not saying that I've had nothing but time on my hands up to a month ago into the summer, but this has been far from my top priority and it's been completed for a little while now. So, the result is this...my debut album (if you will and will not think I'm compensating for something here). Adding a little something to and keeping with my unfounded title tradition, the title is Past, Present, Future ([Don't be so] Tense) and this song is the first single off it, if I actually had this thing, with music and vocals added, naturally, on wax. Look at me strange because I'm taking this a step too far or enjoy it and drop a comment with your thoughts. I'd prefer the latter, obviously, but, hey, to each his very own. Expect the rest of the album to drop mid-September.
Track #8: Working Out (Distance)
My beater is wrinkled and its a good picture
Its not the setting I would prefer to give her
But she said dont move
Said I want to remember you, just like this
Laying on the bed, head in yawning fists
Its no metaphor for bliss
But it is what it is:
Two young lovers tied together by emotion and lips
This cant be summer love
The radio sings
"I miss your hair in my face"
My phone rings
But she lives down the state border
And when I miss her it stings
And I know youd say I hate to sound country
But the cars in the shop, I dont have a job
I havent talked to you in weeks
Im no longer that punchy music snob
All our conversations are insul(t)ations
And its not doing anything to keep the heat in
So whats the point of plastic?
Only heat scares away the creases
The beat keeps our time and dulls our minds from the pain
If youre in love, its beautiful
If youre depressed, its just rain
Youre out there dancing in the street
Unless youre in there staring, out the window, looking bleak
And if youre missing somebody you wonder if its pouring where there at
A wet shirt layered up and down in pink
Your hugs were as powerful as that lengthy thunderclap
She knew that was your favorite shirt
Heres a subtle wink
The images make you glad
Makes you smile, makes you weak
Makes you crazy, makes you sweet
You wouldnt tell her now, but you really do care
Just another example that lifes not fair
Youre playing basketball, shes playing hooky
Shes the money you need coming in and youre the bookie
At times like this, the memories make you happy
Because you stop thinking about how far away she is
The pictures side by side on the beach
And the memories of awkward compensation by the reef
How crazy it was, that you had the perfect shot and didnt pull the trigger
Now you miss her
Eh, thats me for ya, go figure
But I hear shes holding out for you too
Till next summer when the sky turns blue
Itll be a long haul, but the cable car never stops moving
Even if the driver has no idea what hes doing
(I heard that) Shell meet you under the streetlights, late at night
Across the street from Jojos and next to the chapel of Christ
Then we can continue our natural high of a life
We see everyone around us get their problems fixed
While we remain in the midst of a car wreck
She ignores you; you dont have a steady paycheck
It works out for everybody except me
Until it works out for me and some other kid says It only works out for him, not me
Its a repetitive cycle that doesnt have a heading
Or ending
The song that never ends has to start somewhere
CPRGHT smarterthan3
Past, Present, Future ([Don't Be So] Tense) Tracklist (Subject to Change):
1. Different (No Letter)
2. Stream (The Good Times)
3. Untitled (Waiting Room)
4. Heat (Melt the World)
5. Theres Happiness in Pursuit (Life is a Verb):
6. Punch (Satire or something like it)
7. Anger (Manage It)
8. Working Out (Distance)
9. Conception (Post-Origin)
10. Three and Counting (Breezy Snapshot)
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